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I get it! Some people like text effects, but others find them annoying. I'll keep tweaking my style according to what I like. Thanks again for your feedback!
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迷因或搞笑的橋段受眾可能比較偏向歐美的流行文化，很可惜我的故事沒能讓你喜歡！
我會繼續展開後續的設定，謝謝你的遊玩
另外，關於你提到的幾位製作者，是的，我有收到來自他們相關的技術支援，尚未應用在遊戲當中，我會盡可能的跟上大家的腳步，也謝謝你的反饋！
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I spotted a few obvious errors during my quick playthrough, but did not think much of it to jot down. Personally I'm more of a big picture overall feel kind of player, so I do not really pay attention too much to editorial errors unless they reach a point of being unintelligible.
I'll keep track of them in the next version if possible. =)
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The worst game ever, it cause me insomnia because I can't wait to play the whole game.
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Three days left, and I'm looking forward to sharing the content of this update with you!
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A very interesting start. I'm a fan of Detective stories but I haven't really found any detective avns that I actually like. I especially like Sherlock Holmes and it seems this game is going for a modern Sherlock with some of the old school elements (clothes and dialogue). This was a bit jaring for me at first as I was wondering why the MC is dressed like he wants to beg me for more porridge.
The renders are pretty good and the story so far has certainly captured my interest. I haven't gotten enough time with the Lis to have an opinion on them yet. My concerns so far are:
It feels (to me) as though the Dev hasn't decided the MC's personality yet. Is he angry and traumatized by his parents murder, is he detached from people because he doesn't know how to socialize and incredibly arrogant or is he a sociopath?
At the start he's told that one of his teammates is dead and he doesn't care in the slightest. Refers to her as "dead weight". That's a bit extreme and makes he seem like he doesn't value human life.
In the scene with the girl on the train he seems politely detached but concerned about her being harassed by the guy. He seems like he wouldn't have any friends but the game quickly introduces multiple past and current friends and he seems to reconnect with them fairly easily.
Sex/lewd scenes are very important to me in an avn so I hope we wont have to wait too long for that.
I know the next update is about to drop. Looking forward to it.
Good luck to the Dev.
The renders are pretty good and the story so far has certainly captured my interest. I haven't gotten enough time with the Lis to have an opinion on them yet. My concerns so far are:
It feels (to me) as though the Dev hasn't decided the MC's personality yet. Is he angry and traumatized by his parents murder, is he detached from people because he doesn't know how to socialize and incredibly arrogant or is he a sociopath?
At the start he's told that one of his teammates is dead and he doesn't care in the slightest. Refers to her as "dead weight". That's a bit extreme and makes he seem like he doesn't value human life.
In the scene with the girl on the train he seems politely detached but concerned about her being harassed by the guy. He seems like he wouldn't have any friends but the game quickly introduces multiple past and current friends and he seems to reconnect with them fairly easily.
Sex/lewd scenes are very important to me in an avn so I hope we wont have to wait too long for that.
I know the next update is about to drop. Looking forward to it.
Good luck to the Dev.
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Russian version
There have been some challenges with the Russian translation version, but it will be released in a few days. Please be patient.
As I am not a native English speaker, I discovered some minor issues in the English text quite late. I will release an updated version in the future to fix these minor issues.
Thank you all for your patience.
and please
Enjoy!
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Some people have already mentioned this, but just so the dev is aware it effects multiple people: I didnt make it past the first little flashback bit due to all the clicking and delays.
I thought I would just remove all the pausing/fading/movement myself but, by the way its coded, it appears to be too much work right now. I read quite quickly and require the full text displayed in a single click, otherwise its far too slow and I get bored waiting for a game to keep up with my reading speed.
I thought I would just remove all the pausing/fading/movement myself but, by the way its coded, it appears to be too much work right now. I read quite quickly and require the full text displayed in a single click, otherwise its far too slow and I get bored waiting for a game to keep up with my reading speed.
I have poor eyesight and dyslexia. I have difficulty reading the standard text. Some of the text affects make the games unplayable. I've not played yours, but font, size, and color changes are bad. But if you're planning it, adding text to cut scenes that automatically advance is impossible to read for me. I know I'm not the only one, but not sure how many readers have this problem. So, this is just letting you know while you're asking and think about your design.
Regardless, I wish you luck with you're game.
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