Ren'Py Program Apex [Ch.1 Pa2] [Visual Fox Games]

[JJ1960]

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Who her? is it supposed to be "his" as in mc? Also why would he need parents permission to join a gym?
Anyways, renders look nice. I'll be back to see future tags

A lot of developers on this site are not native English speakers, and their language either doesn't have gendered nouns or the gender of nouns/names have different rules. When they run through a translation program, or make their best guess, they get those wrong. Hopefully they have a native English speaker who can review the dialog and catch those inconsistencies.

 

[Old Grumpy Wolf]

Going to add this to the watch list. Can't wait to see where this is going. I wish you well on this project, VisualFoxGames!

 

[rogosh]

The map in the phone is clunky as hell, zero reason for this to be sandbox as as soon as you click the location the dialogue starts.

 

[fudenciopikas]

Also why would he need parents permission to join a gym?

my bet is GYM here means academy (as in academic studies) as in some latin-sourced languages (source, i'm a portuguese native speaker)

 

[tehmasta]

my bet is GYM here means academy (as in academic studies) as in some latin-sourced languages (source, i'm a portuguese native speaker)

i see, that makes more sense than asking parents permission to lift some weights

 

[VisualFoxGames]

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Who her? is it supposed to be "his" as in mc? Also why would he need parents permission to join a gym?
Anyways, renders look nice. I'll be back to see future tags

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[VisualFoxGames]

A lot of developers on this site are not native English speakers, and their language either doesn't have gendered nouns or the gender of nouns/names have different rules. When they run through a translation program, or make their best guess, they get those wrong. Hopefully they have a native English speaker who can review the dialog and catch those inconsistencies.

Thanks for clarifying, I'm still not 100% even though I understand English, even using Deepl + Grammarly/QuillBot the translations from my language to English aren't 100%, so any help is welcome.

 

[VisualFoxGames]

Going to add this to the watch list. Can't wait to see where this is going. I wish you well on this project, VisualFoxGames!

Thanks for your consideration, the next update will be decided by a vote on which girl will be chosen.

I'll do updates in pairs (of the girls) putting their participation with Activities/Tasks/Secondary Tasks of the chapter being developed.

 

[VisualFoxGames]

The map in the phone is clunky as hell, zero reason for this to be sandbox as as soon as you click the location the dialogue starts.

Be patient, the introduction of each chapter will always be "linear", it is from the next updates that the map will make more sense and you will have a 100% free FreeRoam, it is explained as soon as you enter the first Freeroam that sometimes it can be limited depending on the main activity/task or performed by a person.

 

[VisualFoxGames]

BaasB If possible, could you update the banner to this one and update Developer Notes? Thanks.
And if you could update the links again, I apologize, I found a bug and fixed it quickly.

 

[VisualFoxGames]

PUBLIC:


PREMIUM:


PATREON:


A brief explanation of the 3 versions that will always be released.

The Public version will always be the free version but with less content, be it rewards, collectibles or secondary activities with the girls.
However, all the main content will be included in the version.

The Premium version will be the paid version with more content to interact with.

The Patreon version is the 100% complete version, with all the content and exclusive characters.

 

[VisualFoxGames]

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[ImperialD]

i changed the MC's name and Nath still uses Ray ...

 

[JJ1960]

Thanks for clarifying, I'm still not 100% even though I understand English, even using Deepl + Grammarly/QuillBot the translations from my language to English aren't 100%, so any help is welcome.

English is tricky and a lot of native speakers I know still can't get it right. The itch.io bio for Nathalia still has an error:

Nathalia is Ray's childhood friend, and he always ends up seeing him her as something more. She becomes the protagonist's girlfriend and decides to help him with whatever choice he decides to make.

Some devs have a bug/typo channel on their Discord for native speakers to post corrections like that. Punctuation can also be challenging.

 

[VisualFoxGames]

i changed the MC's name and Nath still uses Ray ...

It was a small bug when I went to copy Patreon to Public, it's on the list to fix in the small patch update I'll be releasing in a few days.

Thanks for the warning.

 

[VisualFoxGames]

English is tricky and a lot of native speakers I know still can't get it right. The itch.io bio for Nathalia still has an error:

Nathalia is Ray's childhood friend, and he always ends up seeing him her as something more. She becomes the protagonist's girlfriend and decides to help him with whatever choice he decides to make.

Some devs have a bug/typo channel on their Discord for native speakers to post corrections like that. Punctuation can also be challenging.

Yes, thank you for your attention, but the translation turned out to be totally wrong, the correct one is "SHE ALWAYS SEES HIM AS SOMETHING MORE". haha

I forgot to tell you, please read the rules in the group so that you can have full access.

 

[ImperialD]

yeah it seems whenever you change someone's name to says the default

 

[Canto Forte]

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Ray leaves the university after the death of his son dad, whose last wish was for his son to create the greatest invention of all.

Dedicated to creating an invention that the owner head of the research team had not made.

He creates a device capable of manipulating an object's molecules, but this attracts the attention of the scientist's daughter, whom he was researching fond of.

But things change when he comes across finds a strange certain girl in his house who, he doesn't know how, has come from the future.

 

[Saint Blackmoor]

Who's Ray?

 

[Before I Forget]

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Does Winterson have a first name?