Revan Shan

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Revan Shan Nice release. There's an interesting dynamic you're creating. A few notes:
1. On the first page, you don't actually tell the player to enter their name, just an empty box and "Press Enter".
2. The story is a bit rushed with a lot of good concepts that can actually be spread out a bit. You have: Sunday game, roommate and girlfriend, study buddy, cheating faculty, 3 different serums, and a huge conspiracy with government agents. Consider slowing down to let things flow and progress so that it gives the player time to digest new characters and plot points. Maybe you only learn about 1 serum at a time, progress another story with that knowledge, then move to understand more of what's happening.

Keep up the good work though. Looking forward to seeing more.
Thanks for the notes, I'll keep it in mind when writing out the next chapter.

black mc games are very very few and far between about damn time we finally got a decent game and get to play as a black mc now this is a game i can get behind normally i dont play a fresh release until they are at least a minimal of 6 months to a year BUT a golden nuget like this im more then happy to make an exception to bending my own rule LOL ..keep up the fantastic work there dev looking forward to see whats next
Thanks for bending your rule for my game! :D

I wonder why, it's not like there's a shortage of porn with black men.
That was my thought too which gave me the idea for this game.
 
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If the MC stealing other girls is the only "Netorare" in this game then this game doesn't have "Netorare". That will be Netori and there is unfortunately no such tag in F95 (besides "cheating" perhaps).

According to F95 Netorare is in a sense where the player's love one is stolen by some one else.

To quote exaclty,

  • Netorare [Designed to cause jealousy by having the romantic interest involved with someone other than the MC.]
You can find all the tag defintions here.

https://f95zone.to/threads/tags-rules-and-list-updated-2023-02-03.10394/
 

chicho1958

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Thanks for the notes, I'll keep it in mind when writing out the next chapter.


Thanks for bending your rule for my game! :D


That was my thought too which gave me the idea for this game.
Yeah seen games where they all white and some have small dicks and some don't get full boner, they porn women, how they gonna feel a dick if it's like a finger, you gotta give them something to scream about. I'll keep an eye on this game but get involved with forum, these guys can fap without using their hands :ROFLMAO: they know every porn site in the world..and some probably know from other worlds :rolleyes::giggle:. Whatever you do don't rush game take your time and have a tester, I can't help you there because already testing a couple games but pretty sure you'll find people here. Get someone that ain't afraid to call it what it is and show the good/bad stuff. Good luck with game. Remember storyline has to be as good as game to get people hooked.
 
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Revan Shan

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Yeah seen games where they all white and some have small dicks and some don't get full boner, they porn women, how they gonna feel a dick if it's like a finger, you gotta give them something to scream about. I'll keep an eye on this game but get involved with forum, these guys can fap without using their hands :ROFLMAO: they know every porn site in the world..and some probably know from other worlds :rolleyes::giggle:. Whatever you do don't rush game take your time and have a tester, I can't help you there because already testing a couple games but pretty sure you'll find people here. Get someone that ain't afraid to call it what it is and show the good/bad stuff. Good luck with game. Remember storyline has to be as good as game to get people hooked.
I appreciate the advice! Definitely going to take my time building the story. This is the first game I have ever made so I welcome yours and anyone else's input.

That overview is like the third game I've seen recently essentially copying the Good Son. Hoping it's different.
It is as the MC is black and isn't being transformed into a sissy.
 
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Really looking forward to seeing where this goes. Fun concept and I'm also happy to see another game finally with a black MC/protagonist. Only advice I'd give is trying to find specific women/GIFs to fit the scenes instead of using a bunch of random interracial GIFs/photos. For example you could use Jada Stevens as character and only have GIFs of her with black men and make then fit the scenario. Makes scenes nicer and keeps you more invested/in the games world.

Other than that I think this is an excellent start. Will be watching patiently for more!
 
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Revan Shan

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Really looking forward to seeing where this goes. Fun concept and I'm also happy to see another game finally with a black MC/protagonist. Only advice I'd give is trying to find specific women/GIFs to fit the scenes instead of using a bunch of random interracial GIFs/photos. For example you could use Jada Stevens as character and only have GIFs of her with black men and make then fit the scenario. Makes scenes nicer and keeps you more invested/in the games world.

Other than that I think this is an excellent start. Will be watching patiently for more!
Thanks for the feedback! That is honestly what I want but sometimes its hard to find the right gifs that would fit the scene. So I make do for the time being.
 
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Revan Shan

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If the MC stealing other girls is the only "Netorare" in this game then this game doesn't have "Netorare". That will be Netori and there is unfortunately no such tag in F95 (besides "cheating" perhaps).

According to F95 Netorare is in a sense where the player's love one is stolen by some one else.

To quote exaclty,

  • Netorare [Designed to cause jealousy by having the romantic interest involved with someone other than the MC.]
You can find all the tag defintions here.

https://f95zone.to/threads/tags-rules-and-list-updated-2023-02-03.10394/
Thanks for the heads up, I remove it but it did get me thinking of an ntr scene I could put in. I'm gonna play with the idea and see where it goes lol.
 
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I dont know why, but as i started the game, all the pictures in the beginning look as if they were cropped to a weird size. might be just my own feeling.
I dont want to talk about the second page where the teacher comes into the class and the pic is of a woman in bedroom. WTF?
He is masturbating in the shower, but the gif of cumming is a white guy.

Over all, 90+% of the pics need changing, in my opinion.
 
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Zulfiqar

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Get in the damned white women Shinji.

Really though I played the game and I have to say that I like the premise but a lot of the stuff is a bit too easy, like your best friend white dude has not just a bad sex life but ED and can only get hard being humiliated and is literally saying he's ready to get cucked. It's a bit more satisfying for me if the people start out more normal instead of already teetering on the brink of total corruption.