Hello, Im kinda new to this VN and completely new to this forum, but I wanted to take my time to share my views on this game.
First of all, I wanted to play "female protagonist" where you actually take control of her. Overall, I feel I can control her quite well, I can make her a full slut or a "nun", but what I dont like is that certain actions dont have consequences.
They cum in me? nothing, no STS, no pregnant, nothing.
I get abused under drugs? Nothing, just a small remorse, no more.
My kid becamos abusive and manipulative showing clear dark triad traits? No problem, I suck a cock and its mine to keep him abussing me, no psychologist or , neightbour social worker sees nothing.
I keep a teenager in constant bait for sex? No problem, she is 007 perfect spy, no one notice anything and he doesnt even drop grades.
I like that you can fine tune the MC life, but I would like her to face consequences if she goes too far on a dark path. Like, she is a teacher, wants to work as a teacher, and now she is posing naked for mainstream magazines, and nothing will happen.
Ok, another topic. I like tension, the novel implies certain tension, like the rich art collector peackoing his dong, or the rape+beastie of the start. That is awesome. But sometimes I feel its rushed into a quick sex scene. During the time she was nude in the male changing room, or naked at the shower, I knew nothing would happen, so tension is gradually evaporating because again, she never face consequences.
Im a hung man, RL, so I was interested in the "big dick" trait to see your ideas for interesting big dick characters. My real life style is the same as the rich art collector, peacoking and later make her admit she loves it once in sex and her frame is gone. Bragging or things like that never worked for me. What I feel is that the big dick thing quickly becomes a sausage fest that makes no sense. It started with the driver after the party, a parody oversized cock. Then came the black policeman, but once you get to Mr. Little its just ridiculous. Let me explain my point of view:
By the time she goes down on Mr Little, he had shown ZERO attractive traits. At the beggining he was creepy as fuck. Later he was eager, fast paced, anxious and neurotic, zero attractiveness. He is later too much of a nice guy, too polite, too pleaser, again zero attraction, actual attraction killers. But, she admits to go on a date (actually you choose but its clear you have to in order to score BDick points). My view is that Mr L is not a character, is just a piece of meat, the graphics of his cock are just plain parody and kills any mood, and having sex with extreme oversized cock is not that way.
Real life story. I know a cuban guy with a 11 out of 10 body, acceptable face with georgeous smile and a 10 FAT inches cock.I've never seen anyone in my life anyone having an easier time with women, but let me tell you something, Ive never seen in my life someone with less "client retention rate", and that was not his option, its his fate.
Overall, I like the adventures, I cutted down early the animal parts and the kids parts, but I dont know how to turn off the "fantasy" parts. The game cutted itself the 2 cops line and already started a "cheating on Mr boring piece of meat" wich I appreciate. The rest, nice story of rebuild, rediscovery, growth... Keep going, Im looking forward for more. And please, if you are going to get dirty with Katherine, remember its her anchor to sanity, iff Katherine falls, she should fall too.
