TLDR: Sex Scenes/Renders are good. Writing sometimes has potential, but falls off a cliff into nuclear hellfire at numerous points. Grand Central Station levels of railroading.
Not even finished with Chapter 1 and I'm already stupefied by some of the developer's decisions.
First, I don't need to hear the thoughts of every single guy who wants a piece of Myriam. Every single encounter is the same; Myriam meets/talks to someone, and either they or someone nearby has their inner monologue about how hot Myriam is narrated. This is really boring and becomes frustrating as it continues to happen every time Myriam meets someone new (and there are lots of people in this game.)
Second, while I like trait systems in any game, this one is pretty hit or miss. It isn't always clear what lowers or raise any one trait. For example, dialogue options that don't seem particularly dominant or submissive might raise either one of those stats. This wouldn't bother me too much, but apparently, if certain traits are too high or low you are locked out of certain dialogue options; specifically, if you are too submissive (or loving/loyal to Anthony? or too willful? The game doesn't always tell you why you can't choose a specific dialogue option and it's obnoxious) you can't accuse Anthony of lying to you when he tries to explain why his dick was in another woman's mouth. This makes sense in theory, but it's only practical if you agree with how each dialogue choice affects Myriam's traits. Personally, I don't think that just because Myriam never refuses her husband's sexual advances, she must be a gullible or stupid enough to believe his obvious lie. Even if he's not lying, why does that make it better? He still cheated on her, and that ought to be enough for a more willful Myriam to immediately cut Anthony off from sex.
The renders are decent, and the sex scenes themselves are enjoyable, but it's difficult to ignore the inconsistent writing and how poorly the trait system meshes with the dialogue, resulting in the player being railroaded into undesirable decisions.
(Edit) Played through most of chapter 2. Holy shit. What a joke. Normally I'm not so critical of the writing of an ero novel, but the developer makes a big deal about the writing and characters, so here we are.
Not even finished with Chapter 1 and I'm already stupefied by some of the developer's decisions.
First, I don't need to hear the thoughts of every single guy who wants a piece of Myriam. Every single encounter is the same; Myriam meets/talks to someone, and either they or someone nearby has their inner monologue about how hot Myriam is narrated. This is really boring and becomes frustrating as it continues to happen every time Myriam meets someone new (and there are lots of people in this game.)
Second, while I like trait systems in any game, this one is pretty hit or miss. It isn't always clear what lowers or raise any one trait. For example, dialogue options that don't seem particularly dominant or submissive might raise either one of those stats. This wouldn't bother me too much, but apparently, if certain traits are too high or low you are locked out of certain dialogue options; specifically, if you are too submissive (or loving/loyal to Anthony? or too willful? The game doesn't always tell you why you can't choose a specific dialogue option and it's obnoxious) you can't accuse Anthony of lying to you when he tries to explain why his dick was in another woman's mouth. This makes sense in theory, but it's only practical if you agree with how each dialogue choice affects Myriam's traits. Personally, I don't think that just because Myriam never refuses her husband's sexual advances, she must be a gullible or stupid enough to believe his obvious lie. Even if he's not lying, why does that make it better? He still cheated on her, and that ought to be enough for a more willful Myriam to immediately cut Anthony off from sex.
The renders are decent, and the sex scenes themselves are enjoyable, but it's difficult to ignore the inconsistent writing and how poorly the trait system meshes with the dialogue, resulting in the player being railroaded into undesirable decisions.
(Edit) Played through most of chapter 2. Holy shit. What a joke. Normally I'm not so critical of the writing of an ero novel, but the developer makes a big deal about the writing and characters, so here we are.
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