- Apr 6, 2018
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Hey Joker, thanks for the WT mod. Some remarks, though:
Project Myriam: Life and Explorations [Ch3.05b+p] Walkthrough Multi Mod
- "His hand sliding under her dress to feel her ass as his other hand was slowly revealing one of her breasts, Anthony explained to the anxious and curious Myriam what he meant."
+ "His hand sliding under her undress to feel her ass as his other hand was revealing slowly one of her breasts, Anthony explained to the anxious and curious Myriam what he meant."
- MC "{i}God! I bet he wants me to suck them all...! {w}What was the point of what I did earlier!?{/i}"
+ MC "{i}God! I bet he want me to suck them all...! {w}What was the point of what I did earlier!?{/i}"
You edited some texts, added some "corrections", but often they're actually worse. Just two chosen examples. Please: if you're not a native english speaker, ask someone to help (or leave this job to someone else). I really like your work (generally spoken) and just saw this as I merged your mod with the incest patch. Just the WT part would have been enough.