VN Ren'Py Project Myriam - Life and Explorations [Ch. End.01a+p] [Zorlun]

[ouch2020]

Absolutely love the kinks in this VN. I think it exceeds most of the VNs in that regard. I'd add a particular kink to this: cuck the son lol. The Myriam becomes very lustful that when guys fuck her in her house, she teases Marc and eventually makes him a bitch, sucking Myriam's lovers.

Uhm, at a guess, the "sub" (towards Marc) variant maybe could do the part of "doing" others kind of being seen by Marc who gets excited, but then, it should also be remembered that Marc had mentioned the idea of pictures and video, so, he may not be completely against "lending" or "sharing" (I know, it sound really evil as idea ) Myriam. So, it would be teasing only to the point where he then claim her back, a bit like Cassius did after Anthony's dinner (for those who saw that scene).
"Dream" variant, not sure, could be similar.
Really for your variant, could be only with Myriam "dom", and even then, for the second part to happen (the one with Marc and others), aside the fact that Zorlun has not foreseen a "gay" or at least "homosexual" tag, it would require for Myriam to really change a loooot.
Reminds me a bit the debate on the "Myriam becomes Anthony 2 if not worst" possible path.

 

[IHATESlowburnBluBallgames]

Uhm, at a guess, the "sub" (towards Marc) variant maybe could do the part of "doing" others kind of being seen by Marc who gets excited, but then, it should also be remembered that Marc had mentioned the idea of pictures and video, so, he may not be completely against "lending" or "sharing" (I know, it sound really evil as idea ) Myriam. So, it would be teasing only to the point where he then claim her back, a bit like Cassius did after Anthony's dinner (for those who saw that scene).
"Dream" variant, not sure, could be similar.
Really for your variant, could be only with Myriam "dom", and even then, for the second part to happen (the one with Marc and others), aside the fact that Zorlun has not foreseen a "gay" or at least "homosexual" tag, it would require for Myriam to really change a loooot.
Reminds me a bit the debate on the "Myriam becomes Anthony 2 if not worst" possible path.

Mark will definately share Myriam, remember he told her he wants to bring his team over for a pool party gangbang.
he also already shared her in the mens room with that fat kid, when he made Myriam give fatso a blumpkin while he fucked her from behind

 

[ju9iter]

I've downloaded the new version from subscribstar but for some reason when I try to use my old saves it keeps telling me i've reached the end of 3.05b

Anyone know a fix?

 

[IamKhronos]

I started a new game and got the same "ScriptError: could not find label 'var_chapter3_update' when talking to the detective about the briefcase. Is there a fix for this?

one of the mods you installed is causing the issue. i had it too. i just extracted the rar again in a new location and loaded up the bit with the detective and passed it easily. then went back to the folder with the mods to continue

 

[Zorlun]

I've downloaded the new version from subscribstar but for some reason when I try to use my old saves it keeps telling me i've reached the end of 3.05b

Anyone know a fix?

You're probably using a mod not yet up to date.

 

[ju9iter]

that was

You're probably using a mod not yet up to date.

That was it! ty!

 

[Ty Jones]

AWESOME! This is THEE BEST game I've had the pleasure ;-) of playing in months! It's one of the best I've downloaded from here ever. 1. It has a female MC. 2. Great Taboos. 3. Each of the choice menus has three choices and each explains its +/- values. 4. Not only does it have a female MC but, she's smoking hot with a figure that is not so unworldly. 5. The game has a REAL FEEL about it. It's not so fake like so many other games I've played (and a few I still play). A great story line with believable characters and a few not unbelievable characters which is fine so it's a good balance. And unlike that lame movie, this better be the never-ending story! I look forward to continuous updates with ever creative scenarios and taboos! Thank you from the event horizon of the black hole of my four chambered, blood pump!

 

[Zorlun]

AWESOME! This is THEE BEST game I've had the pleasure ;-) of playing in months! It's one of the best I've downloaded from here ever. 1. It has a female MC. 2. Great Taboos. 3. Each of the choice menus has three choices and each explains its +/- values. 4. Not only does it have a female MC but, she's smoking hot with a figure that is not so unworldly. 5. The game has a REAL FEEL about it. It's not so fake like so many other games I've played (and a few I still play). A great story line with believable characters and a few not unbelievable characters which is fine so it's a good balance. And unlike that lame movie, this better be the never-ending story! I look forward to continuous updates with ever creative scenarios and taboos! Thank you from the event horizon of the black hole of my four chambered, blood pump!

Thank you for the love, I will try to stay worthy of it. ^^

 

[Ifartedtoolong]

During the briefcase scene the door on the dresser goes from open to closed at the lines It's ok, I really didn't do anything... then you click and the door is closed. After that I jumped out of the window and let the detective catch them.

Myriam: I forgot to thank him properly again, I'll have to invite him for dinner or something like that.

Me: Send him a couple boxes of fucking donuts and be done with it.

I can't take Andrew's seriously he's just so hilarious looking.

Hammers scene was hot as fuck.

Highest kink bestiality at 36 lowest kink incest at 0

Some mistakes that I saw.

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[gregers]

I haven't had time to play this update yet but hopefully there'll be an option for Myriam to tell him to fuck off the moment he gets started with that nonsense. If not I'll just have to dig out an earlier save and avoid him as far as possible.

It is such a tired trope, and every Black man in games on here seems designed to play into it.

Finally got around to playing the update and regrettably, Myriam is the one who instigates the 'race play' talk, so can't even blame it on Cleavon. Better to just avoid him altogether if that's how it's gonna be.

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[Deleted member 3325933]

Finally got around to playing the update and regrettably, Myriam is the one who instigates the 'race play' talk, so can't even blame it on Cleavon. Better to just avoid him altogether if that's how it's gonna be.

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I was disappointed in that scene as well. I felt Cleavon was erudite and even in the date seemed to have some class. Then instead of being intimate lovers it rapidly devolved into something pedestrian at best or stereotypical at worst. The possibility of her and him having a mature relationship was shattered. She had a better, classier time with Charles. IMO

 

[Zorlun]

During the briefcase scene the door on the dresser goes from open to closed at the lines It's ok, I really didn't do anything... then you click and the door is closed. After that I jumped out of the window and let the detective catch them.

Myriam: I forgot to thank him properly again, I'll have to invite him for dinner or something like that.

Me: Send him a couple boxes of fucking donuts and be done with it.

I can't take Andrew's seriously he's just so hilarious looking.

Hammers scene was hot as fuck.

Highest kink bestiality at 36 lowest kink incest at 0

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Yep, the door thing was already reported to me, I'll have to redo the render.
For the other mistakes you point out, I'll take into account what needs to be.

Finally got around to playing the update and regrettably, Myriam is the one who instigates the 'race play' talk, so can't even blame it on Cleavon. Better to just avoid him altogether if that's how it's gonna be.

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I was disappointed in that scene as well. I felt Cleavon was erudite and even in the date seemed to have some class. Then instead of being intimate lovers it rapidly devolved into something pedestrian at best or stereotypical at worst. The possibility of her and him having a mature relationship was shattered. She had a better, classier time with Charles. IMO

If I can understand the disappointment, I'm not agreeing on the mature relationship statement, as I put the scene, they both let loose and get into the excitement of the action, and then talked like adults about it, putting a clear line between sexual behavior during their sexual intercourse and the respect they can have to one another out of the sexual intercourse.
This was what I wanted to explore, the fact that Cleavon is intelligent and cultured man, yet he's also able to have a darker side and intense sexual desires, more so than his demeanor could let people suppose (as your own observation shows), and that's what I wanted. And contrary to some other character who enjoy being rough with Myriam and humiliating her, Cleavon do keep respecting her after their sexual intercourse, he's making a difference between their behavior during and out of sex.
The only problem in this scene as it was pointed out, it's that it's again a black character using the interracial kink (though being fair, Myriam start it, which is what I wanted, that at first he is mild then when he hears her, a switch flip), and that's something I didn't pay attention before now.
But in the end it's just a kink as any other, you like it, or you don't, and as others in the game, you can avoid it if you want.

 

[gregers]

The only problem in this scene as it was pointed out, it's that it's again a black character using the interracial kink (though being fair, Myriam start it, which is what I wanted, that at first he is mild then when he hears her, a switch flip), and that's something I didn't pay attention before now.

I can appreciate that that was the intention, but to me it just came across like Myriam has some, to put it politely, racial hang-ups she really needs to work on. Which I suppose isn't surprising given her background as an affluent Southern white woman, but certainly doesn't help endear her character to me any further.

 

[Emily20]

In bestially scenes doesn't show anything

 

[Sol_Invictus2009]

Yep, the door thing was already reported to me, I'll have to redo the render.
For the other mistakes you point out, I'll take into account what needs to be.

Please, use spoilers to hide pictures like this for others.

If I can understand the disappointment, I'm not agreeing on the mature relationship statement, as I put the scene, they both let loose and get into the excitement of the action, and then talked like adults about it, putting a clear line between sexual behavior during their sexual intercourse and the respect they can have to one another out of the sexual intercourse.
This was what I wanted to explore, the fact that Cleavon is intelligent and cultured man, yet he's also able to have a darker side and intense sexual desires, more so than his demeanor could let people suppose (as your own observation shows), and that's what I wanted. And contrary to some other character who enjoy being rough with Myriam and humiliating her, Cleavon do keep respecting her after their sexual intercourse, he's making a difference between their behavior during and out of sex.
The only problem in this scene as it was pointed out, it's that it's again a black character using the interracial kink (though being fair, Myriam start it, which is what I wanted, that at first he is mild then when he hears her, a switch flip), and that's something I didn't pay attention before now.
But in the end it's just a kink as any other, you like it, or you don't, and as others in the game, you can avoid it if you want.

I appreciate you approaching the criticism in the way you have and I respect that quite a bit. As you say, I'll just have to avoid that character to avoid the fetish. It's just a downer for me because he was one of the better prospective LIs.

 

[Zorlun]

I can appreciate that that was the intention, but to me it just came across like Myriam has some, to put it politely, racial hang-ups she really needs to work on. Which I suppose isn't surprising given her background as an affluent Southern white woman, but certainly doesn't help endear her character to me any further.

Wow! Really not in the writing of the character, no. Nothing to do with race here, it's kink exploration, for example if her partner has a big dick, playing on it doesn't mean she has a problem with big cocks. Kinks are a mental thing and playing with it is a good way to raise the excitement, and it goes with every kinks, but again, every kinks are not shared by everyone and since in the game I like to explore quite a few of them, I get that some will not touch everyone.

 

[Joop501]

Gosh what 1 heaviness just talk to the developer
if you have other ideas talk to the developer but don't spit fire
It's a free game develop 1 game yourself instead of overreacting have a nice evening

 

[Zorlun]

Gosh what 1 heaviness just talk to the developer
if you have other ideas talk to the developer but don't spit fire
It's a free game develop 1 game yourself instead of overreacting have a nice evening

I am the developer. ^^

 

[portiamento]

hi, does the ipatch break the game if installed? it is not updated yet?

 

[Gosamr]

I thought Cock was her bestfriend

No, no, it's diamonds isn't it?