VN Ren'Py Race of Life [Act 1 v1.04.5] [Underground Studio]

[NebulousShooter]

Man I feel really bad for V, her content is awesome but because at the start of the game she played the 'forced girlfriend' role most players will remember her as 'the crazy chick that wants to prevent me from playing the game'...

Everything about her route would be 10/10 if this was the middle of the relationship of the player pursuing her, it might be for the MC, but its not for the player unfortunately. The MC might be in love with her if he really thinks about it, but the player isn't, the player barely knows her when he is asked to make commitments.

The flexy yoga moves, the jiggly ass, the exhibitionisms, none of it will be able to make up for the audience's first impressions

 

[NebulousShooter]

Race of Life stays undefeated ever singe I played it in 0.1, every single sexy scene was fire this update, a main plot that actually seems to be moving, relationships progressing. I still know nothing and don't care about the cars lingo, I would actually skip it if it wasn't cleverly intertwined with banter. GG


The only way from here is downhill

 

[Defenestrator.for.traitor]

Race of Life stays undefeated ever singe I played it in 0.1, every single sexy scene was fire this update, a main plot that actually seems to be moving, relationships progressing. I still know nothing and don't care about the cars lingo, I would actually skip it if it wasn't cleverly intertwined with banter. GG


The only way from here is downhill

Here's a plot hole for you. If Allison has the custody of Lily and she works as a VP of R&D department in a pharmaceutical company, then why is not her insurance cover Lily's treatment? I am not talking about Wake up Institute but the hospital thing.

 

[Elduriel]

Here's a plot hole for you. If Allison has the custody of Lily and she works as a VP of R&D department in a pharmaceutical company, then why is not her insurance cover Lily's treatment? I am not talking about Wake up Institute but the hospital thing.

had the same thought but another angle... in that kind of role she would have way more money than 8k saved. Not mentioning the company stock options she would have.

 

[HiP1]

Thanks for responding properly instead of going hostile immediately like the previous responder. With the exposition dumps not bothering you, I guess it is an understandable position to take considering your experience with GRRM. But the issue with me personally was the length of certain conversations, whether it be with Cooper, the male/female docs, and Jasmine in the lab. It went on for too long to a point where, given I was able to understand the terms, it felt pretty corny. My experience with lore dumps is from Expanse books, which I read after the series. Corey's books have exposition dumps, but they're in quick bursts and leave without lingering, not giving you a bad aftertaste. By the end of each book, you can piece together the MacGuffin lore without completely being overwhelmed by its presence in every dialogue. But again, I'm certainly not making a comparison of this AVN with Corey's novels because that's ridiculous.

The reason why I can't compare this to some other AVN here is because this one is unique here in its own way. The writer certainly is intelligent, and there are some really good dialogues between MC and the ex-wife, which felt natural and very non-AVN writing to me. Also, the renders of the characters show that the dev genuinely put thought into those scenes; the dialogue of resentment in Allison's face and them just not hooking up just after exchanging good words signifies the dev put at least some thought into their arc, even if it's an avn. Hence why I even made the original review, because it was different than anything I've played here. A few fixes in the story, in my opinion, would really make this game one of the best here.

Now about the writer statement, I explained what I actually meant to the other person before in one of my replies; I guess I should have worded it better considering it got quoted twice. I'll keep that in mind.

it's just a matter of opinion and taste.
I, myself, enjoy technical dumps. and in this game, you even get it with banter. to me, it all adds to the immersion and world building. especially for sci-fi stories, it shows the author actually tried to make it believable and did some research. The Dune saga is a good example of technical/"science" dumps

The only bad thing with Maggie's route is i think they are setting it up so it was her dog that caused the whole incident with his daughter. Remember them talking about the dog smelling his dog on her? And that's gonna SUCK if that's the case.

dude ! didn't even think of that. you're so right. it could be her dog. Maggie's path is already full of drama, and she already has Wyatt that kind of links her to Allison. adding more drama to her route might be too much
she is into femdom even. it might put off a lot of players if we add more

Dudeee, why this game didn't have harem

then each choice and decision is important.

Here's a plot hole for you. If Allison has the custody of Lily and she works as a VP of R&D department in a pharmaceutical company, then why is not her insurance cover Lily's treatment? I am not talking about Wake up Institute but the hospital thing.

bro! that's a good point ! in France, you can even combine the private health insurance of both parents for kids if you have some. i don't know how it works in the US, but it might be because the big pharma company is so capitalistic that they have poor health insurance for their employees to reduce the costs ?

 

[HiP1]

had the same thought but another angle... in that kind of role she would have way more money than 8k saved. Not mentioning the company stock options she would have.

MC worked for the same company. maybe they both burnt all their savings into the house. it seems they don't have any mortgage to pay for it. and Allison could be required to buy her ex's share of the house after the divorce as she would be the one with the higher salary between them.

 

[Krytax123]

The only bad thing with Maggie's route is i think they are setting it up so it was her dog that caused the whole incident with his daughter. Remember them talking about the dog smelling his dog on her? And that's gonna SUCK if that's the case.

Didnt thought about it at all and would be fitting for the story but i really cant see someone like Maggie just running away afterwards when a car crashes a little girl into another car?

And she really would be a cold-blooded motherfucker in this case as she looked very happy and relaxed when Jake came back from the hospital until she realised that he's feeling very bad.

Really hard to imagine a girl like maggie enjoying her evening happyly a few hours after she saw a little girl being overrun by a car and her dog been involved while she just left.

I still tend to think it was wyatt (and his dog) but i think i would prefer if it would have been just a random accident. We will see

 

[Deleted member 4997214]

How the hell do I scroll the phone ingame on the android port???

 

[GurpGork]

It would be understandable if she had a crazy sex life, but just for one guy, the implant doesn't make sense, the pills works

The pill can also come with a whole slew of side effects depending on the person. Maybe stay of this topic champ.

 

[Quibble Bubble]

The pill can also come with a whole slew of side effects depending on the person. Maybe stay of this topic champ.

Whoah, you champed him. Damn bro, no need to go to that length, he's just a kid!

 

[MedicBear]

Found a bug. The music from the first scene where you get in the car after teaching class, right at the start of the game (when you get the toilet text from Cooper and drive past Jasmine at the beach) doesn't end properly. It continues into the next scene and the next indefinitely, overlapping the other music tracks. This persists even if you save and restart the game. Makes playing the game with music awful. It seems to fizzle out after the first V sex scene ends and it transitions to Maggie's introduction.

 

[GurpGork]

Whoah, you champed him. Damn bro, no need to go to that length, he's just a kid!

Maybe guys can learn to stop sharing what is certainly an uneducated opinion regarding women's health and reproduction topics. Regardless of age. Even better to start young.

This is a free life lesson btw, not just for internet forums. #protip



Whoah, I pro tipped you!

 

[hakuna-matata]

Here's a plot hole for you. If Allison has the custody of Lily and she works as a VP of R&D department in a pharmaceutical company, then why is not her insurance cover Lily's treatment? I am not talking about Wake up Institute but the hospital thing.

That and Natalya's education not being worth anything in the US. She's from Germany, not some third world country. Germany is ranked third in the world for best Education.

 

[anonnyscouse]

That and Natalya's education not being worth anything in the US. She's from Germany, not some third world country. Germany is ranked third in the world for best Education.

But with the sanctions in place does the USA recognise recent Russian degrees?

 

[hakuna-matata]

I knew it. It did not make sense. She's from Germany and not South Sudan. Unless she's a Russian Spy anonnyscouse

 

[iamcomming]

That and Natalya's education not being worth anything in the US. She's from Germany, not some third world country. Germany is ranked third in the world for best Education.

germany no longer in europa, i placed them on the moon
beside the joke, this was odd for me too, but than i was think, maybe usa want to be sure in peoples knowledge or extra money for their uni

 

[Quibble Bubble]

germany no longer in europa, i placed them on the moon
beside the joke, this was odd for me too, but than i was think, maybe usa want to be sure in peoples knowledge or extra money for their uni

You need a license to practice, and requirements vary from state to state, and depending on whether she has a BEng or BPhys.

German degrees are sometimes a bit more standardised too, so it's not unlikely that there may be subjects that she learned in a mechanical engineering program may not be enough to work in other engineering disciplines in another country.

It's not that the degree is worthless, but that foreign workers sometimes need to pick up a subject or two to get recognized by the professional body, which you need to have if you're going to consult or bid on projects (but not if you're a fresh graduate working under a registered practising engineer).

 

[HiP1]

maybe she doesn't even have a degree at all.
if the theory that she is a spy of sorts is true, then she could be from any other country, and with other degrees than physics/science.

 

[x1m0n]

Someone please help, how to change GUI/Phone font?

 

[moonlord27]

Good evening! Is there more Patricia content? I really like her as the flag girl and it was so good when she took her top off, so it would be awesome if she did like a dance or maybe even a striptease before a race and then raised the flags like that, but it's just a suggestion.