dolfe67
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That wouldn't be the only bad written plot of the game
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The mother that is a virgin (brooke?) still takes the top as far as "good writing" to meThat wouldn't be the only bad written plot of the game
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I'll just take some Jade content but I wouldn't mind Mira and of course anything with the triplets. I won't have any tension with Brook I didn't knock her up she can walk in front of truck for all I care. Our luck would be the most scenes are going to be knocking up neighbor so she gets rid of stuff from her husbandWho knows, maybe Mira might get content. And there's her increasing tension with Brooke at the office (and that could bring trouble sometime later if the newest hire learns of her pregnancy, especially in regards to the father).
The solution although bold, and would piss off 90% of his patrons, is pretty simple: drop the harem premise. Single character routes and endings enrich storytelling so much more than a half-assed harem where the girls don't even acknowledge each other.
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Too late for that... that's why I said it's a can of worms...
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Just give them all a happy drug and we'll all be one big happy family
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If Rachel gets her wish granted, her soon to be ex-husband is going to flip the hell out. It'd be convenient if there was a way to get rid of him. He's mad about the house where the protagonist lives (he believed it was going to be given to him by some relative I think but didn't happened), he's in a bit of a power trip and was caught spying on his neighbor by his wife, to name a few.
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Have to agree with that all. Best way would be for him to step in front of MC car LOL or maybe his VW bug could pull out in front of semi
Or we just get Nova to snipe him
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Did he say there will be an all-LI harem? Because just the triplets and Brook is a harem. In this kind of setting (our regular contemporary life) it doesn't make sense anyway so whatever the reason is.
The Dev set out to create a believable harem story - one not filled with cuck-queens but one wherein the women involved would reach some sort of consensus. Whether he can pull that off is an open question...
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The anal tag is there for a reason.
When you get a high enough density of plot holes, they collapse into a Plot Blackhole.
Plot Blackholes are portals to different storyverses.
In a new storyverse, every possible harem girl was always happy to share for 'reasons', all obstacles disappear, and there are no lingering negative consequences for anything.
Happy MC.
The End.
Plot Blackholes are portals to different storyverses.
In a new storyverse, every possible harem girl was always happy to share for 'reasons', all obstacles disappear, and there are no lingering negative consequences for anything.
Happy MC.
The End.
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Still a better story than whatever SirD will write
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and you bet those 900 apes by now like it that way
rumor say they already have church for their Dammed, they cant denied their faith and love their update once every 2 years
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Or maybe they have already been deprived of their freedom - slaves on the plantations of SirD and Alorth. Surely many of them are no longer alive...
They are so cute and fluffy in public, who knows what their true nature is. So be careful here, lest you share the fate of the poor North Korean artists...
And they spawn cat gifs from time to time on discord to deal with their broken souls , after what Dammed did to them , yep
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Playing through the game right now (around Chapter 6?), and I honestly have to say... the Harem tag on the site and this topic needs to be removed. Here's a snippet of some text the game just put in front of me, when I was pursuing a bunch of women at the same time (and knew the game had the Harem tag):
Not sure what the developer is thinking or doing, but so far this is playing out like a "choose one or loose a lot of them" AVN. The Harem tag really needs to go.
I hate to have to say it, but that is not how a game with the harem tag progresses. You don't have to choose between women, and you don't have as much jealousy and drama between them like this game portrays.
Not sure what the developer is thinking or doing, but so far this is playing out like a "choose one or loose a lot of them" AVN. The Harem tag really needs to go.
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And lose most of his cult followers? I'm not sure SirD is capable of shooting himself in the foot like that. At least not in the middle of development. But at the end (in twenty years or so), he could say with a poker face, ‘This was never meant to be a harem.’ And fly off into the sunset in his private jet with bags of money...
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You may be right colobancuz , but in the meantime it's rather misleading to tag the game as such, and have it play out very differently. I have no doubt it could eventually turn into a harem, but in the meantime all the drama, jealousy, bickering, and tension the game puts in front of the player is.. not what you'd expect from a harem game. And it's not really fair to pull in people on a premise the game hasn't so far (in almost 7 chapters) delivered.
I see it this way as well: if the player chooses "Lust" more often than Love or Dark for choices, that should put them firmly on a harem path. And as frequently as the game has US choose, it's no longer self-insertion of us into the MC - the game's actually asking us to play AS the MC. Knowing it's doing that, and knowing we're trying to play "free spirits" that desire a harem end-game, I find it mind-boggling that the dev(s) would go the way they have with all the tension.
Not sure how to petition the mods on the site to get the tag removed though. Out of all the harem style games I've played (also with that tag), this one follows that premise the worst (and sometimes not at all).
I see it this way as well: if the player chooses "Lust" more often than Love or Dark for choices, that should put them firmly on a harem path. And as frequently as the game has US choose, it's no longer self-insertion of us into the MC - the game's actually asking us to play AS the MC. Knowing it's doing that, and knowing we're trying to play "free spirits" that desire a harem end-game, I find it mind-boggling that the dev(s) would go the way they have with all the tension.
Not sure how to petition the mods on the site to get the tag removed though. Out of all the harem style games I've played (also with that tag), this one follows that premise the worst (and sometimes not at all).