Rate my first character: Luna

[Jaike]

I think the new version is an improvement. The face still isn't really my thing, but I'd say her body is a lot prettier.

Also, who the fuck voted "She's disgusting as fuck"? Must be blind or a beta cuck...

Girl next door? Orly?
Girls my next door look like that:
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Rather pretty, but she should really consider updating her wardrobe to the 21st century.

 

[Mastur Bar]

I think the new version is an improvement. The face still isn't really my thing, but I'd say her body is a lot prettier.

I see.
She's just a common girl, you know?
Soon, I'll post about the other characters in the game that are still in development.
At least, people seem to like the adjustments I made to her body.

Also, who the fuck voted "She's disgusting as fuck"? Must be blind or a beta cuck...

Rather pretty, but she should really consider updating her wardrobe to the 21st century.

Seriously?
Has anyone really disliked her to that extent?
I thought she wasn't that bad.

The girl in the photo who is next door to our buddy has a kind of antique dress style, right?

 

[Catapo]

After the hip adjustments she looks a lot better body wise.
Like others have mentioned she is attractive in a common girl type of way which is good.

There is still something wrong with her expression IMO. Her smile is somewhat creepy, maybe it's the eyes, or the smile is too wide or the mouth is too curved. I can't quite explain what it is.

 

[Yngling]

The second version looks pretty good too me!
The first one's hips were too exaggerated.

But her smile is weird and it creeps me out.
If her mouth were open, it would be a lot better.

 

[Mastur Bar]

After the hip adjustments she looks a lot better body wise.
Like others have mentioned she is attractive in a common girl type of way which is good.

There is still something wrong with her expression IMO. Her smile is somewhat creepy, maybe it's the eyes, or the smile is too wide or the mouth is too curved. I can't quite explain what it is.

The second version looks pretty good too me!
The first one's hips were too exaggerated.

But her smile is weird and it creeps me out.
If her mouth were open, it would be a lot better.

You're right, maybe I exaggerated the expressions a little bit, I'm going to make the smile a little more subtle.

EDIT:
I made her smile a little more subtle.
Say if this improves the look of her expression, in your opinion.



Here's another one with her neutral expression, so you can have a better notion of her face.



What do you think?
Has her expression improved?

 

[anne O'nymous]

When I said a "bit more weight" to the breasts I wasn't meaning orbiting moons or anything. Just that, a bit more to make the top half of the body somewhat equal to the bottom half. Ehh, fuck I can't get my words out straight.

Are you searching for: A better ratio boobs/butt.

Her hips are too wide for such small boobs. Both are mostly composed of fat (muscular butts don't looks like that). Therefore, if the butt grow so much, then the boobs should have also grow.
I know that proportionally speaking, the ratio is correct, and there's girls with those mensuration. But when it come to 3D renders, you've to overdo it sometimes when it come to smallness, in order to keep a natural look for the result.

 

[Banality]

her ass is too fat. The upper half is very cute.

 

[Bullgano10]

Guys, calm down please. The guy isn't defending his model is the best.

Luna is looks like so cute and her ass is amazing but I don't like her breasts sizes. 9/10 Ass, 3/10 Breasts 6/10 Face.

If you gonna use Luna as a normal character (She can't be a supermodel or Perfect milf on these roles.) she will be totally fit for her role.

If you wanna use her as a milf/mother role, you should put some weight on her belly, make her breasts much more bigger and put some old face details on her face. And after whole things, yes, she will get 8/10 average on her milf role.

Good luck, I'll watch your thread and your new renders.

 

[Mastur Bar]

Are you searching for: A better ratio boobs/butt.

Her hips are too wide for such small boobs. Both are mostly composed of fat (muscular butts don't looks like that). Therefore, if the butt grow so much, then the boobs should have also grow.
I know that proportionally speaking, the ratio is correct, and there's girls with those mensuration. But when it come to 3D renders, you've to overdo it sometimes when it come to smallness, in order to keep a natural look for the result.

To be honest, she was inspired by a friend and she has this archetype of small boobs, big ass, so I wanted to make her that way.
But I understand what you mean and you're right, but I'm saving this idea for one of the other characters I'm creating.

her ass is too fat. The upper half is very cute.

In your and Anne O'nymous's opinion, does the small boobs, big ass girl archetype looks unnatural?

Guys, calm down please. The guy isn't defending his model is the best.

Luna is looks like so cute and her ass is amazing but I don't like her breasts sizes. 9/10 Ass, 3/10 Breasts 6/10 Face.

If you gonna use Luna as a normal character (She can't be a supermodel or Perfect milf on these roles.) she will be totally fit for her role.

If you wanna use her as a milf/mother role, you should put some weight on her belly, make her breasts much more bigger and put some old face details on her face. And after whole things, yes, she will get 8/10 average on her milf role.

Good luck, I'll watch your thread and your new renders.

Yeah, she's a common girl that will be the MC's "roommate", if you know what i mean!

Thanks for the following and take a look at my 2nd character: https://f95zone.to/threads/rate-my-2nd-character-priscilla.96664/

Give your opinion about this one too.

 

[Deleted member 4178103]

Space between eyebrows and eyes is wide.

Edit : and I'd add a scar on her left eye, à la Geralt de Riv. Maybe a tatoo on her right.

 

[Banality]

In your and Anne O'nymous's opinion, does the small boobs, big ass girl archetype looks unnatural?

No. In fact an ex girlfriend of me looked kinda this way. Not exactly this wide hips, but sort of. She has Breast implants now btw.
It does not look unnatural but considering your game setting her bodytype would not make prostitution the first work choice. imho
But i like your character. She looks nice and friendly.

 

[Mastur Bar]

Space between eyebrows and eyes is wide.

Does that make the character less beautiful in your opinion?

and I'd add a scar on her left eye, à la Geralt de Riv. Maybe a tatoo on her right.

I'll make the female Zorro!

No. In fact an ex girlfriend of me looked kinda this way. Not exactly this wide hips, but sort of. She has Breast implants now btw.
It does not look unnatural but considering your game setting her bodytype would not make prostitution the first work choice. imho
But i like your character. She looks nice and friendly.

She'll be the MC's "roommate", so she needs to looks like a regular girl, you know?
But as the plot unfolds, she will also enter the brothel.

I know she might not be the most suitable girl to be a hooker, but there will be others who look different, so I think I'll keep her with that body type.

 

[anne O'nymous]

In your and Anne O'nymous's opinion, does the small boobs, big ass girl archetype looks unnatural?

I wouldn't say "unnatural". Being 50yo, between real life and porn, I've probably seen all possible body type, including the weirdest ones. Add to this the fact that I'm aware of the 3D issue with smallness, and one should really go far for the result to feel unnatural to my eyes.
My feeling is more on the "weird" side. Seeing her in the front view, my first though was "is she a centaur", but her legs and feet where humans, what was confusing. This while, when I took a look at your second character, she felt normal ; she have more or less the same hips, but her bigger boobs remove the "weird" effect.

 

[Banality]

okay "roommate"... patched to sister i guess. Well at least you have the Inbreeder-gang on bord with this

 

[Deleted member 4178103]

Does that make the character less beautiful in your opinion?

Depends on your taste. It does not shock me but is the first thing I told myself - that's why I didn't say "too wide". It's about millimeters changes here.

 

[Mastur Bar]

I wouldn't say "unnatural". Being 50yo, between real life and porn, I've probably seen all possible body type, including the weirdest ones. Add to this the fact that I'm aware of the 3D issue with smallness, and one should really go far for the result to feel unnatural to my eyes.
My feeling is more on the "weird" side. Seeing her in the front view, my first though was "is she a centaur", but her legs and feet where humans, what was confusing. This while, when I took a look at your second character, she felt normal ; she have more or less the same hips, but her bigger boobs remove the "weird" effect.

Hmm, I see.
In short, you think that because she is curvy, she should have bigger breasts.
I can kind of take a test, I'll post it here as soon as I'm done.

okay "roommate"... patched to sister i guess. Well at least you have the Inbreeder-gang on bord with this

Depends on your taste. It does not shock me but is the first thing I told myself - that's why I didn't say "too wide". It's about millimeters changes here.

Got it, it's a very subtle thing, right?

 

[Deleted member 4178103]

Got it, it's a very subtle thing, right?

When you talk about facial features, the smallest millimeter can change everything. Now adding the fact that you want to do a model that pleases - to possibly - everyone... I'd say do your thing. People seems enjoyed, then go on. Don't linger too much on what everyone has to say.

 

[Niv-Mizzet the Firemind]

First of all, I didn't quite like the smile in the op. It's way better in the edit, as is her neutral expression.
As for the body, again I prefer the edit.
Considering you're going for a "girl next door" type, I think you've done a pretty good job.

If I were to change something, maybe I'd shorten a hair the distance between the eyes and I'd make the breasts just a touch meatier. Having said that, these are the kind of changes that remove realism, which is the goal if I understood correctly.

7.5/10, would easily bang.

 

[Mastur Bar]

When you talk about facial features, the smallest millimeter can change everything. Now adding the fact that you want to do a model that pleases - to possibly - everyone... I'd say do your thing. People seems enjoyed, then go on. Don't linger too much on what everyone has to say.

Don't get me wrong, please everyone is impossible, not even Christ has managed to do this.
I'm doing my thing, however the possible player base opinions are important, so I need to consider this before going forward.
Let's say that I'm trying to considering the majority opinion, you know?

First of all, I didn't quite like the smile in the op. It's way better in the edit, as is her neutral expression.
As for the body, again I prefer the edit.
Considering you're going for a "girl next door" type, I think you've done a pretty good job.

If I were to change something, maybe I'd shorten a hair the distance between the eyes and I'd make the breasts just a touch meatier. Having said that, these are the kind of changes that remove realism, which is the goal if I understood correctly.

7.5/10, would easily bang.

Disconsider the OP images, as I made some changes based on people's feedback.

I feel like I'm getting close to finishing the character, I'm just going to increase the size of the breasts a little bit, as that seems to don't please people.

 

[anne O'nymous]

Hmm, I see.
In short, you think that because she is curvy, she should have bigger breasts.

Not necessarily as big as your second model, but more proportional.
Before everything it's a question of ratio boobs/hips, and it works both way. A girl with too big boobs for her hips would looks as "weird". Naturally, boobs are subject to gravity, therefore they never looks as big as needed to reach the "weird ratio". But if she wear a corset (even a not too tight one) that would give enough support for her boobs to expand vertically, then she'll effectively look "weird".
It's a pure guess, I never effectively tried to compute a ratio, but for 3D renders, I would say that below a ratio of 1/3, it's "weird".