I didn't say I didn't like the story at all. I like the graphics and I enjoy the characters, especially the lolis, very much. I just pointed out at the problems that you have with this game. It is up to you how you react. You can accept the criticism and try to improve your skills. Or you can behave like a sulky teenager and keep saying that if somebody doesn't like your game they can f*ck off. In response we, the community of this site, can also say that if you don't like people providing some healthy constructive criticism, you don't have to be here and read our comments.
The MC behaves as he does with everybody. Not only with family members but for example with Jettica. The amount of teasing in your game is overwhelming. All the girls walk around with almost no clothes on, sleep with the MC virtually naked and tell him how much they want to fuck him. Every third render or so is somebody's ass or tits. And the MC just goes "Na-ah, we'll do it next time/tomorrow/next year". He does not sound confused or scared. He looks as just not that much interested in sex. You can make a great story without sex at all. But in this game there is so much promise of that and so little gain, that's the problem.
Theresa doesn't hide at all. Is it so difficult for the cult to trace her movements to come to a simple conclusion? She is one of the few who didn't drink blood after all, which makes her less dependent on the cult's business. She sleeps with Isabella who is the enemy of the cult. And they don't have even slightest suspicion, are they that dumb?
Also I find it hard to believe that in such a small town some people do not know the mayor, Isabella or some other prominent people as it is clear from the dialogues. I lived in places like that. There people usually know everybody and everything.
It is all just lame excuses.
In the end I very much appreciate what you do. There aren't many good loli/incest games around. I just wish that the stories that the Devs create where coherent and believable (within the fictionary framework of the created world, of course). My criticism is aimed at not making you to abandon what you do, but to improve your writing skills. You cannot please everybody's kinks but you can make the story more believable and more enjoyable.
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