VN Ren'Py Ravenous [Arc 2 Ep.16 Beta] [Lament Entertainment]

[char_2.0]

"Hacer el Delicioso" between your girlfriend and her friend is not cheating, is Non-NTR, don't be closed-minded guys.

 

[malridoo]

Im yet to try this, i noticed the note about the "NTR" scene and i wanted a bit of clarity regarding it because i'm a little weird when it comes to the subject matter. I personally don't like it but because of all the different ways people seem to define it it tends to get a little confusing. I define NTR as a Li having sexual relations with someone else (male/female) that will trigger jealousy for the mc/reader so its done for that purpose. Now this is where i'm a little weird because if a Li(or potential Li) is having sexual relations with another FEMALE and its NOT there to trigger jealousy for the mc/reader then i don't really have a problem with it, it may even be there to potentially pave the way to a threesome. I just don't want any other meat in my Li's tacos. I like to immerse myself into what i'm reading and if i wouldn't like something in real life then i ain't going to like it in what i read or play if im taking on the role of the mc. So my question is....is the scene played out to cause the mc/reader to get jealous or is it there so the game has a sex scene that doesn't involve the mc but also don't involve any other meat. Also are the 2 girls in question exclusively vagitarians or are they just at the all you can eat muffet because they curious or just something to do on a tuesday night when coronation street isn't on?

The scene is about MC's sister and his mom eating eachother out. I wouldn't say it's NTR beacause this kind of relationship is ok in this family and thay wanted to tell him about that but it was too late because MC caught them.

 

[Simulacrum29]

That's why I put the warning there.
I want people to know what they are getting into so they aren't surprised.
I won't put an NTR tag, because it implies a lot of wrong ideas.

You are so close, but not fully there.

If you need the scene, then, by all means, let it as it is, but tag your game accordingly.
If it is in the game even for a single scene then it needs to be tagged. Period.

There was a new game just yesterday with a rape scene, but it wasn't tagged because of "reasons". That is offputting, and with your disclaimer, all your get is a flame war every update you put out.

 

[Simulacrum29]

The scene is about MC's sister and his mom eating eachother out. I wouldn't say it's NTR beacause this kind of relationship is ok in this family and thay wanted to tell him about that but it was too late because MC caught them.

That is a bullshit excuse if I ever saw one.
So they know MC is back in Town, he lives in the same house and has no idea. Better have a gangbang in the hallway.

 

[Combat Wombat]

"Hacer el Delicioso" between your girlfriend and her friend is not cheating, is Non-NTR, don't be closed-minded guys.

Erm unless you agreed to your "girlfriend" having sex with someone else then im afraid that is classed as cheating my guy

 

[allura404]

thanks

 

[malridoo]

That is a bullshit excuse if I ever saw one.
So they know MC is back in Town, he lives in the same house and has no idea. Better have a gangbang in the hallway.

I mean you have to play it yourself, I told you about the scene but you will found out more about it while playing. But it's your choice. I didn't react well enough about this scene when I played it, but sometimes a little bit of drama in the right place won't hurt. Maybe you will like this game in the future, the plot seems interesting.

 

[char_2.0]

Erm unless you agreed to your "girlfriend" having sex with someone else then im afraid that is classed as cheating my guy

It's exactly what I wanted to imply

 

[Combat Wombat]

It's exactly what I wanted to imply

Ah ok so you meant it as sarcasm? But what has now got me confused is you used the term "girlfriend", are you implying that the mc is already in a relationship with either his mom or sister? If so then that changes the whole situation. For starters that would be classed as cheating if the mc isnt aware of it which i would also frown upon and then theres the missing "cheating" tag

 

[YogSothoth1982]

Ah ok so you meant it as sarcasm? But what has now got me confused is you used the term "girlfriend", are you implying that the mc is already in a relationship with either his mom or sister? If so then that changes the whole situation. For starters that would be classed as cheating if the mc isnt aware of it which i would also frown upon and then theres the missing "cheating" tag

I think he ignored or was unaware of the existence of the quotation marks.

 

[Hellster]

Is there at least one button to skip the lesbian scenes? If I can't avoid them, I'd rather not have to see them.

Only way to skip is CTRL key with Skip option enabled in Options currently

 

[Famescua]

Not a bad start. While not exactly ntr it borders on it. Like someone else said before if it had been the daughter with the father then all hell would break loose, but it's pretty much the same. Also someone said the mc is a little bitch for being shocked and getting upset. Well the game is realistic in that any normal person would react badly to seeing that. I'm OK as I see the scene as a catalyst for the mc to embrace the family love. The only problem I have other than it being kinetic is that the mc is basically a shota. I wish devs would make the mc's a more normal height. I'm 5'8 and have been that height since I was in high school. Anyways good luck with the game I usually wait a few updates before I support a game.

 

[Dr Secz]

Looks interesting. But a bit to fast story advancing for my taste. Waiting for some new updates to rate it.

 

[Sycho]

Wow... Writing/proofreading still needs a lot of improvement. I found these in the first few minutes of playing.

Spoiler: Glaring grammatical and punctuation errors

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[NakedSingularity]

Love loli incest AVN's where the player sets the ages of the lolis instead of all the fake 18 shit. If only these were more common.

 

[Hellster]

Wow... Writing/proofreading still needs a lot of improvement. I found these in the first few minutes of playing.

Spoiler: Glaring grammatical and punctuation errors

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All will be fixed before the update releases, many lines of dialogue are cut off mid-sentence, random capital letters that shouldn't be there, missing full stops etc, we're aware of it, thanks

 

[NakedSingularity]

Wow... Writing/proofreading still needs a lot of improvement. I found these in the first few minutes of playing.

Spoiler: Glaring grammatical and punctuation errors

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I tend to read so fast (roughly 3 lines per second, only slowing down for the animations or renders when they are pretty enough) I couldn't care less about minor details like that as long as I'm not trying to retranslate broken English that was originaly Russian, Ukrainian, Cantonese, Mandarin or some other language hard to translate into English and keep all of the the original meaning. The minor errors you picked out I didn't even notice until seeing this post.

 

[Abraxxas]

Looks really Good but iam not a Fan of Kinetic Novels but i wish you Good Luck with your Project.

 

[michael1984]

Well interesting start

Just dont really like how the witch put a spell on the mc to make him instantly be ok with what the mom and sister were up too

I dont dislike lesbian scenes at all im all for it ... But would been nice if the MC at least had a normal gradual understanding of it

And not forced by some magic spell

But its too early to tell as well so will keep a eye on this

 

[Darknesssilent]

Well interesting start

Just dont really like how the witch put a spell on the mc to make him instantly be ok with what the mom and sister were up too

I dont dislike lesbian scenes at all im all for it ... But would been nice if the MC at least had a normal gradual understanding of it

And not forced by some magic spell

But its too early to tell as well so will keep a eye on this

the witch putting a spell on the mc just killed this game for me so thanks for the save.