VN Ren'Py Realm Invader [Ep.2 P2] [Invader Gary]

[robin312]

For the fucks sake! How many times should dev break the fourth wall? It drives me nuts! I just want to play game without this shit!

 

[Niqqa47]

how do i start directly from part 2??

 

[Lovemaking]

Yes and no.

Main-story-wise, not really. We got barely any progress outside of learning a few new things, but nothing of substance.

I think the party dragged way too much with filler content. While this was good for some characters like Grace, for example, who I thought it was fitting that we started to get serious with, it felt excessive overall.

On the other hand, Chloe was fine after that tiger scene where we progressed the relationship, but it probably should have ended there, saving the rest for a future chapter where we get some solo time. I have mixed feelings about her scene at the tower: I loved how we hung out at the top, but the mutual masturbation scene later felt rushed and didn’t do it for me.

Lastly, Miya’s entire presence at the party seemed like a big comedy gag that dragged too much. It certainly wasn’t the best time to advance the relationship. I honestly think the chapter would have been better without her at the party; it made zero sense for the story.

I honestly can't stand when relationships progresses in a comedic/gag way and especially when its in a party setting. (a lot of alcohol involved and other shit) thats probably just me tho.

Sure other games do the same thing - the comedic/gag part. But atleast said party isn't 2 hours long.

Well anyways new signature i just finished. (not my best work but im hella rusty)

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[Einarr_nor]

I love incest, personally. This game did a pretty fantastic job with the kink, as well. I play non-incest games, and thoroughly enjoy the good ones. My biggest complaint is that Gary did a piss-poor job of removing it. I haven't seen the new update content yet, because it took so long to get this update out that I can't remember enough of the plot to just jump right into the new update.

That's where the trouble lies for me. Since Gary did a very slapshod job of excising the incest content, by only removing the lines that were tied to the variable, the whole game leading up to the new update is now full of logical inconsistencies and broken references (many many lines referencing the incest/family story were not tied to the variable and thus left in), and as a result, it's very painful to play through the whole game again.

If Gary had done a proper job of removing all the incest content and references, having to replay from the start would have actually been an advantage. The game obviously still loses much without the filial relationships that were originally there, but it would have been tolerable without all the confusing back and forth that exists now. There is a lot to love about this game, but by gutting only roughly half of the incest content, the overall writing quality seems so much lower that it's a slog to get through it now.

Gary should have either left the incest intact, and tried his luck with Patreon, while also opening a SS page to hedge his bet, or done a more thorough job removing the incest content, so that the game doesn't feel so sloppily written. Honestly, there's still so many references to the original incest content in the game, that Patreon could absolutely still ban it if they were so inclined. They've banned games for less, and even ban based on actual fan-made patches existing without the dev's consent.

tldr: The bottom line is that Gary made the worst of 3 possible choices. He could have left incest intact, or removed it thoroughly enough that it would seem it was never meant to be there. Instead, he chose to half-ass it, and left the game in a shoddy state that upset the most people possible.

Whats ya'lls hyperfixation on incest anyways, did ya'll not grow up with siblings? i never understood that tbh xd

 

[ffive]

Whats ya'lls hyperfixation on incest anyways, did ya'll not grow up with siblings? i never understood that tbh xd

Some people like feet, some people like the idea of sex with relatives. Horses for courses, speaking of which, some people are into horses, too.

 

[Lovemaking]

did ya'll not grow up with siblings?

pretty sure those who are hyper fixated on incest did grow up with siblings and wanted to fuck them. Just an educated guess

 

[ffive]

pretty sure those who are hyper fixated on incest did grow up with siblings and wanted to fuck them. Just an educated guess

I mean, also those who grew up with moms and/or dads. Probably.

 

[jadepaladin]

pretty sure those who are hyper fixated on incest did grow up with siblings and wanted to fuck them. Just an educated guess

Not being into incest myself, I always compared it to risky/public sex. There's a taboo to it that hits some people different.

 

[Einarr_nor]

pretty sure those who are hyper fixated on incest did grow up with siblings and wanted to fuck them. Just an educated guess

yeah..thats kind of a thought of mine as well, like, being so mad that something like incest isn't in there.. especially when you grew up with siblings is really weird to me, or well disgusting xd

 

[Cherubin25]

pretty sure those who are hyper fixated on incest did grow up with siblings and wanted to fuck them. Just an educated guess

Is "educated guess" now "I make some things up"? I have a sister and I would never think about having IRL incest with any of my family members. Fictional incest is hot to me on the other hand, mainly because of the taboo aspect. But I would never imagine that it would be one of my family members, even if I dont have visuals (e.g. when reading a story).