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[VN] [Ren'Py] Rebirth [Episode 4, Update 5] [LikesBlondes] [UQ, MyRepack-YAC]

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Arigon

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I have reported some errors.
I stand humbly as accused, I was beating off to Zephir instead of checking my work, so spelling got by me.
Actually we almost always find some spelling issue when it is released and I look at it in game instead of just the script.
Appreciate it.
Personally I am excited greatly by this update.
I have some updates on my betting habit that will come out in a day or two. Stay tuned.

Sounds of fucking and the whole typing out of fuck noises is one of the things that the developers are trying to avoid in this story as it takes away from the story.
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There's a lot of us Vampire (VtM/VtR) fans out there, who played tabletop roleplaying games and live action roleplay and all that stuff.

Any Vampire fan who doesnt hate visual novels will love this. Basically, just because I happened to discover it on f95z doesn't make it any less interesting even though it's frankly not a porn game at all. You can remove the couple sex scenes and its still something quite interesting to sink your fangs into, imho.

Of course, I'm not saying it couldn't be improved by actually adding a bit more sex, maybe some optional scenes, but hey they have other things to worry about so far I guess haha.
Yes, I am the consultant on VtM lore so to speak. It is not a porn game, very true. It is an adult story with some erotic scenes but that is it.
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I have reported some errors.
I stand humbly as accused, I was beating off to Zephir instead of checking my work, so spelling got by me.
Actually we almost always find some spelling issue when it is released and I look at it in game instead of just the script.
Appreciate it.
Personally I am excited greatly by this update.
I have some updates on my betting habit that will come out in a day or two. Stay tuned.

Sounds of fucking and the whole typing out of fuck noises is one of the things that the developers are trying to avoid in this story as it takes away from the story.
Peace
can you tell us what's the skin itching Laurie feels supposed to be?
 
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I have reported some errors.
I stand humbly as accused, I was beating off to Zephir instead of checking my work, so spelling got by me.
Actually we almost always find some spelling issue when it is released and I look at it in game instead of just the script.
Appreciate it.
Personally I am excited greatly by this update.
I have some updates on my betting habit that will come out in a day or two. Stay tuned.

Sounds of fucking and the whole typing out of fuck noises is one of the things that the developers are trying to avoid in this story as it takes away from the story.
Peace
I don't mind sounds of fucking, but some porn repeating the same words over and over again, one would hope they had a better writer and a director that knew they were BORING. Thanks, I will check out your game soon, I opened the bell alerts before downloading another, and politely replied as you were very timely with yours.
 
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Yes, I am the consultant on VtM lore so to speak. It is not a porn game, very true. It is an adult story with some erotic scenes but that is it.
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I was a game master (online games), a writer and played dungeon master table top games, my daughter even got into the fairs dressing up as a Keltic warrior, she went all in cooking period foods, spinning wheel from rabbit fur.... My favorite characters were usually rangers, thieves, assassins, have fun
 
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can you tell us what's the skin itching Laurie feels supposed to be?
Perhaps she will become a Nos?:unsure::whistle:
Could be all thing either all things or simple a red herring.

Other thing thats gone through my head:
The Inanna/Erishkigal story. One thing is sleeping under the water, most likely Erishkigal, yet, AFAIK, she isn't yet confirmend. Inanna on the other hand is confirmend to be in the story and we guess it is red dreaming beauty, yet, AFIAK, that she is red dreaming beauty isn't confirmend either....
So, Erishkigal sleeping in the cave under the water and driving all around her in the cave goin nuts. Where is Inanna sleeping? Separate place or could she been sleeping beside her sister?
The whole tale of the goddess Inanna going to the underworld where does it say that this is the story? Couldn't it be that Inanna visit Erishikal, as later written down by the Sumer, but she hasn't come back (yet)? Both sister fight, neither win and as both of them were very exhausted they fall into topor?

And as a side note from what I see on the wiki page, Inanna and Ereshkigal were only one of many goddess. So, if all of them were vampires and at least two had make it, how many others are sleeping somewhere? From last eposide I say at least 4 in total.
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Well then, I'd say you're doing a fine job :) This feels more VtM than some officially-VtM VNs.
I only converse with the Devs and do editing for them. The work is all LikesBlondes and Ptolemy, however I am an SME in all things White Wolf and World of Darkness so ideas have bounced around. The main concern is to not infringe on copyrighted material. The guys have created their own universe, and certain inspiration is drawn from the WoD.

I am the SME for our fellow pirates here.
I also am a patron on Patreon, and if you really enjoy their work I recommend you support them.
Even if it is a small amount.

Welcome fellow WoDer and enjoy! I have errors to correct! They always pop up better when the whole game is assembled than in just going through the .rpy files. Corrections should be made when the updated release for the $5 tier releases next weekend. I have noted a couple more errors than have been told already, and a couple of the speaking sprites are wrong... those are a bitch it seems.

I will talk theory crafting and changes to my betting habits starting Wednesday. And I have some major changes to my theories, even if they are on side routes and things involving side characters. Please no flagrant spoilers for a couple days!

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Perhaps she will become a Nos?:unsure::whistle:
Could be all thing either all things or simple a red herring.

Other thing thats gone through my head:
The Inanna/Erishkigal story. One thing is sleeping under the water, most likely Erishkigal, yet, AFAIK, she isn't yet confirmend. Inanna on the other hand is confirmend to be in the story and we guess it is red dreaming beauty, yet, AFIAK, that she is red dreaming beauty isn't confirmend either....
So, Erishkigal sleeping in the cave under the water and driving all around her in the cave goin nuts. Where is Inanna sleeping? Separate place or could she been sleeping beside her sister?
The whole tale of the goddess Inanna going to the underworld where does it say that this is the story? Couldn't it be that Inanna visit Erishikal, as later written down by the Sumer, but she hasn't come back (yet)? Both sister fight, neither win and as both of them were very exhausted they fall into topor?

And as a side note from what I see on the wiki page, Inanna and Ereshkigal were only one of many goddess. So, if all of them were vampires and at least two had make it, how many others are sleeping somewhere? From last eposide I say at least 4 in total.
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There are 10,000 Sumer gods and goddesses.
In this story, Ereshkigal-Water Goddess/Creepy Fuck/Nos Boss/Red Vision Girl number 2, and Inanna-Red Vision Girl number 1 are the only two we will contend with.
Inanna-Myth places her on a Hook, savaged, in Ereshkigal's subterranean hall of the Underworld. I won't comment more on that, as it is in the story this update.
FunFuntomes yes soon
Skin, Crimson Path, Side Characters, Main Characters, Goddesses, and other comments coming soon. I judge this to be the realm of spoiler material so I won't comment yet.

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No vaginal sex tag, yet I screened the Alpha new content for that. Is it there but not listed?
monroe Would you mind inserting the Vaginal Sex tag. It does occur 3 times in the novel explicitly, and implied 1 time.
Thank you, I know I get on the naughty list a fair amount for other threads, (BaDIK and MILFY CITY, and some reason you all have me banned on Timestamps, but I did some work for Motkeyz so I dunno.....) but if you could do this on this thread it would be appreciated.
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Found one small error in the programming: after the Mrs. Oéivia incident at Sharon's house, one "dissolve" command is missing (or not defined?) see attachment.
 
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