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VN Ren'Py Rebounding Life [Ep. 2] [SuperWriter]

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xXwankerXx

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Another promising game by SuperWriter, that's all I need to know. Let's goo !!(y)

The MCs actions just dont make sense based on the start of the game
Sure, they do. Just go become an at least decently-paid basketball player, and once bitches start throwing themselves at you, you'll understand why most high-value men have a shitload of children with as many women as they can and cheat so much on their wives or girlfriends, while the average Joe is happy enough to fap to porn or pay OF hoes and make them rich just for a few minutes of their time. To each their own, I guess.:ROFLMAO::KEK:

I'm glad that this here is one of the rare case where Faith isn't the usual stereotypical airheaded bimbo blonde haters like to troll and show in their games. In fact, she's quite the opposite of that. She's smart asf, got them good looks too, is a busty blonde with a nice ass AND she was a virgin when the MC knocked her up. Dayum, she ticks all the boxes of a dream wife.:love:(y)
Can't blame the MC for putting a baby in her, I would've done the same. Gotta build yourself a legacy on and off the court, and you only do that by making great stats and impregnating smart, attractive women like Faith. Another big plus to her character is that she ain't no gold digger looking for a quick paycheck, she's also pretty supportive of the MC in his new adventure as a coach. A woman like that is called a wife or the queen bee of the harem, not an ex or a side chick.
 
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micojive

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Another promising game by SuperWriter, that's all I need to know. Let's goo !!(y)



Sure, they do. Just go become an at least decently-paid basketball player, and once bitches start throwing themselves at you, you'll understand why most high-value men have a shitload of children with as many women as they can and cheat so much on their wives or girlfriends, while the average Joe is happy enough to fap to porn or pay OF hoes and make them rich just for a few minutes of their time. To each their own, I guess.:ROFLMAO::KEK:

I'm glad that this here is one of the rare case where Faith isn't the usual stereotypical airheaded bimbo blonde haters like to troll and show in their games. In fact, she's quite the opposite of that. She's smart asf, got them good looks too, is a busty blonde with a nice ass AND she was a virgin when the MC knocked her up. Dayum, she ticks all the boxes of a dream wife.:love:(y)
Can't blame the MC for putting a baby in her, I would've done the same. Gotta build yourself a legacy on and off the court, and you only do that by making great stats and impregnating smart, attractive women like Faith. Another big plus to her character is that she ain't no gold digger looking for a quick paycheck, she's also pretty supportive of the MC in his new adventure as a coach. A woman like that is called a wife or the queen bee of the harem, not an ex or a side chick.
But they dont... The MC and wife briefly separated 18 years ago and he slept with his ex, thats fine. She is then out of his life enough that he doesnt even know she is moving back into town. The MC seemingly has been faithful to his wife since, even talking about how too touchy feely the other bb player is with his wife.

He doesnt even know his ex has moved back into town so shes obviously not a big part of his life anymore, they talk like they havent seen each other in years and now suddenly hes just ignoring his actual wife's wishes, who he spent the last 18 years working on their relationship with, and just meets up and helps her without telling his wife.

Like why would the MC remain faithful for 18 years to just piss her off with an ex again. It has nothing to do with being a pro player, he has already been faithful through that entire career presumably with women throwing themselves at him.
 
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micojive

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They are just shorter stories. He doesn't drag them out for years like some other devs do.
Doesnt really rush the story, just rushes the ending.

He/she will spend like 10-20 updates setting up the plot and introducing characters then everything just wraps up and finishes in 1 or 2. Its like they dont write out a story beforehand and just wing it as it goes, get bored eventually and just ends it wherever the story is.
 

hysepReC

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He doesnt even know his ex has moved back into town so shes obviously not a big part of his life anymore, they talk like they havent seen each other in years and now suddenly hes just ignoring his actual wife's wishes, who he spent the last 18 years working on their relationship with, and just meets up and helps her without telling his wife.
He does tell her.

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And the whole reason he went there was to talk to his son, not to meet up with Faith. She just asked him to help her with some boxes while he was there.
 

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What's wrong with that dev?
well his games tend to start off somewhat strong, or promising.. then the bad writing comes into play... then the rushed endings... honestly what broke the camels back for me was sun breed....,
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But I digress.

It's like he gives up halfway and just ready to get the game over with.. so you get some unsatisfied ending.. only game I truly liked from him, was secret summer.
 
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Old Man Al

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I am a bit sad that the only VN from this dev that I really like is still abandoned.
 

xXwankerXx

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Like why would the MC remain faithful for 18 years to just piss her off with an ex again. It has nothing to do with being a pro player, he has already been faithful through that entire career presumably with women throwing themselves at him.
You missed the important detail that she's his baby mama and a pretty attractive, amazing and a smart enough woman the MC would want as his business partner, despite knowing that his wife will be against this idea. They kept in touch as much as they could and time allowed them to without risking to piss off Nasira, who's still understandably upset by the fact that her husband had kids with another woman.

He paid Faith enough to help raise their son, she never asked for the usual absurd amount of 'pocket money' gold diggers and hoes in her place would do, a big plus among others, IMHO, and from what we've seen so far, they don't act like ex-lovers as much as they act like two close friends who haven't been in contact in a long time, but it's pretty obvious there's still some attraction between them. Not every breakup or divorce means the two automatically start hating each other to the point they'd want to kill one another. There's exceptions to this rule too, especially when feelings are still there and, more importantly, they have kids to co-parent. A woman like Faith makes it pretty damn hard, both literally and figuratively lol, for a man to just say "fuck it" and move on, and you can read in the story why I'd say this.

Sorry man, but another argument to prove my point is that rich ppl, millionaires and billionaires especially, play by other rules than we 'normal' ones do. There's enough proof of that IRL and the media. That's why a lot of the shit they do sounds weird to us common folk and perfectly normal to them.

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well his games tend to start off somewhat strong, or promising.. then the bad writing comes into play... then the rushed endings... honestly what broke the camels back for me was sun breed....,
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But I digress.

It's like he gives up halfway and just ready to get the game over with.. so you get some unsatisfied ending.. only game I truly liked from him, was secret summer.
I didn't play Sun Breed, due to the comments like this. But as well as Secret Summer, I really liked Picture Perfect too.
 

micojive

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You missed the important detail that she's his baby mama and a pretty attractive, amazing and a smart enough woman the MC would want as his business partner, despite knowing that his wife will be against this idea. They kept in touch as much as they could and time allowed them to without risking to piss off Nasira, who's still understandably upset by the fact that her husband had kids with another woman.

He paid Faith enough to help raise their son, she never asked for the usual absurd amount of 'pocket money' gold diggers and hoes in her place would do, a big plus among others, IMHO, and from what we've seen so far, they don't act like ex-lovers as much as they act like two close friends who haven't been in contact in a long time, but it's pretty obvious there's still some attraction between them. Not every breakup or divorce means the two automatically start hating each other to the point they'd want to kill one another. There's exceptions to this rule too, especially when feelings are still there and, more importantly, they have kids to co-parent. A woman like Faith makes it pretty damn hard, both literally and figuratively lol, for a man to just say "fuck it" and move on, and you can read in the story why I'd say this.

Sorry man, but another argument to prove my point is that rich ppl, millionaires and billionaires especially, play by other rules than we 'normal' ones do. There's enough proof of that IRL and the media. That's why a lot of the shit they do sounds weird to us common folk and perfectly normal to them.

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Hey, if the story is fine for you great, glad you can enjoy it. For me its just another story from Superwriter that is mediocre at best and is going to be carried by the models for a few updates until the end is rushed.
 
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