Ren'Py Abandoned Redemption Saga [v0.1] [SoFar_Games]

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Deleted member 1610159

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demidemon said:
You still dont get it.

If you are serious about ur project, stop saying the writing is bad because this is your first, stop saying the grammatical mistakes, the missing words in sentences happened because this is your first game.

Just go look at your 2nd page "STOP HERE TOO" in the game, "This is my ever project in adult gaming" and you are already making a mistake? This is not even something hard to proofread. Is this really the impression you want to give us? A careless developer?

Stop saying the game will be better, SHOW US why the game will be better. Your skill don't just improve because you work hard. You are not the only one who've been working on codes, UI/UX design, planning routes, all the devs here are working on those and most of them are working very hard too. What makes you think your game deserve move love than theirs? Because you have zero experience and they have spent years in make games?

Note that I'm not saying ur game is bad tho. There are definitely sparkles and your first game is alot more successful than many others first in this forum.

About the plot, in the first few chapters/demo/v0.1, it is very important to show the uniqueness, the mysteries or whatever that is special about ur game. Your first few chapters should be an explosion that opens a new world to us. Then ends with good cliffhanger that keep us wanting more. I'd say change the "Call (someone)" at the end into "Someone called, but who is it (choices)" but its still a weak cliffhanger to me. You want to hit us hard and leave a strong impression with ur debut.
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I get it man, but what can i do in immediate present.
I can only work on the mistakes in this version and rectify them in the next one.
I could make them right and update the first version, but that would be bad decision. What's done is done. I have to face the consequences.
But wait till second update, Thats all i can ask of you. :cautious:
And I have already started working on this versions script. And will start working on the second version after that.
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demidemon

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Sofar_games said:
I get it man, but what can i do in immediate present.
I can only work on the mistakes in this version and rectify them in the next one.
I could make them right and update the first version, but that would be bad decision. What's done is done. I have to face the consequences.
But wait till second update, Thats all i can ask of you. :cautious:
And I have already started working on this versions script. And will start working on the second version after that.
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My first suggestion is to write sth like a movie script for your game in Final Draft or other text editor. Some text editors can proofread your work and a movie script helps you plot the game better. Then use the movie script to create scenes in renpy. A movie script can also provide information for the devs while not directly showing the info to the audience. Say if you are trying to drop hints for future plot twist in a scene, or to show the complexity of a character, you can put it down on the movie script. Then later on when you review your scripts, you can see if the scenes actually show what you really wanted to show to the audience.

If you want to improve your writing skills or your programming skills, we have a Dev Help section in this forum. There are lots of different websites that teaches writing, say self-publishingschool.com, you can look for free English/Coding classes online, borrow books from the library, etc. This is not only for your game, but also for your career.
 
SafarNama

SafarNama

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Sep 14, 2021
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So lets make it official.
I am the maker of this game. But due to some unforeseen reasons, I have finally decided to QUIT this game as of now. Yes. This game is not going to get any further updates in near future. Although i had nearly completed the second releases content, But i have decided to take a break and focus on my career first. This is an honest apology to myself and whoever liked this game, that this game is not going to see its end in the near future.

But once i have sorted my life and once i get enough funds and finance to spare. I will be back with this game. And this will be the biggest real porn game you will have ever seen. I know its sounds so imaginary, but that's what i have planned for this. This story is not yet over. I want to bring this story into this world. Be it adult gaming or mainstream gaming or movie or series or god knows what, but after refining it a bit this story is going to get its true worth.

I will not stop writing, i will try to occasionally write the story and when the right time and right moment comes, i will appear again in this community and will present to you the better, the ultimate version of any real porn game you will have ever seen. Enough exaggerating about the future of the game.

About why i am leaving this game, There are several reasons. But the most important one is I have felt that it was not the right time to bring it to you. Initially I started it as just an experiment into adult gaming, But I felt like first i should focus on my main goal that is completely different from adult gaming. when i Saw that i am wasting too much time here, I decided that first i should focus on my goals and later practice my hobbies. So i decided to drop it here.

And also this was not the right time to release it. I was still learning things and just in the heat of moment i released it. But I will learn coding, screenwriting, world building in renpy or other engines and stuff and come back again in future.

So one day in far future expect something named REDEMPTION SAGA THE JOURNEY TO FIND SALVATAION.

On that note i will take my leave from here, I cant ask you show love to this game anymore because this was only the first release and i am already quitting it. DAMN. But if you do like the plot and story even with all the grammatical errors and stuff, I sincerely thank you from the bottom of my heart.
if anyone wants to contact me or have something to say i will occasionally visit this forum and keep an eye on dm and comments and stuff. Bye Bye see you in 2028.
 
SafarNama

SafarNama

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Also can any moderator show some courtesy and put this comment in the main thread for everyone to know whats really going on with this game. Thank you in advance.
 
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konabwo

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cannot run it...
i downloaded hotfix, substituted 11 or so files... put 2 pics where specified
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