Ren'Py Rediscovering Maria [Day 2 Final] [Panamsimp]

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gregers said:
Panamsimp:

Some errors in day1_scene6 (they may be the same already reported a few pages back, I haven't checked):
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            "[Petname] moaned with the woman. I need to get more comfortable with sexual sadism."
           (...)
            vince "I'm close. Go down on me, [petname]."
           (...)
            vince "But we need to get into a better rhythm for this. "
            maria "Practice makes perfect, right?"
Petname should be petname, vince should be Vince, maria should be Maria


Other than that, I now got to the whole trainer video debacle thing and yeah, that the MC doesn't get any options to quite reasonably demand an explanation without going completely off the deep end is very frustrating and seems like just contrived drama for drama's sake. Came close to just stopping there because I didn't want any of the options.
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Thanks, it'll be fixed.
The way I wrote that scene was that Vince would be taken by surprise and be a little emotional as he saw the video first thing in the morning. As he calms down in Day 3, he'll try to broach the subject more maturely (unless they fought in day 2)
 
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Panamsimp said:
Thanks, it'll be fixed.
The way I wrote that scene was that Vince would be taken by surprise and be a little emotional as he saw the video first thing in the morning. As he calms down in Day 3, he'll try to broach the subject more maturely (unless they fought in day 2)
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Which means he either has to blow up and start yelling and then come crawling back with apologies if you want to salvage their relationship or just go "oh, well" and ignore the bomb under them for a full day.

Rather than being a reasonable adult and saying, "Hey, take a look at this video that trainer bloke just sent me. It doesn't look great but how did that all happen?"

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gregers said:
Which means he either has to blow up and start yelling and then come crawling back with apologies if you want to salvage their relationship or just go "oh, well" and ignore the bomb under them for a full day.

Rather than being a reasonable adult and saying, "Hey, take a look at this video that trainer bloke just sent me. It doesn't look great but how did that all happen?"

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No, if the fight happens in day 2, things wouldn't be resolved, and they can go worse in day 3. But if it doesn't happen, you'll get some insights if the stats are high enough, ultimately it's a question of when you'll talk as adults in that non-hostile path, not if.
 
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But if it doesn't happen, you'll get some insights if the stats are high enough, ultimately it's a question of when you'll talk as adults in that non-hostile path, not if.
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Insights? not the full truth?...:unsure:
Then she ain't willing to talk like an adult...:ROFLMAO:

As to when, well, I'd prefer sooner rather than later...but that depends on when you give us the chance...:ROFLMAO:
She should have been shown the video immediately, and asked for an explanation...
When her story changed from "nothing 'real' happened" to "nothing happened", MC should have showed her the video right then... Maybe even paid the money to see the missing content, and let the chips fall where they may.
$100 Maria would have gaslighted the shit out of the MC if he went to pay to show the rest of that video...
Because she knows more happened than what she confessed to, flirting, that's why she's carrying so much guilt, she has more to confess...

Regardless of my personal speculation and preferences on how this should have been handled (like adults...lol), overall good story so far, really like this one. It's a little too close to personal IRL for my taste, very difficult to not self insert as MC in this one, but damn, Maria acting just like my ex when confronting about evidence and I'm having flashbacks...:ROFLMAO:

Keep up the good work. Looking forward to seeing this one play out.
 
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barron trump said:
in the vanilla path the trainer sexually abused maria, thats the twist isnt?
in the cuck route maria was a whore all along.
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That's what I thought too initially however, that feels a bit too on the nose. I think the twist is that she did knowingly cheat in both paths but feels bad, however she discovered a she has a kink for cheating and enjoyed doing it despite also feeling bad about having betrayed her husband, and the vanilla path is her trying and probably succeeding to get over it (due to high love and respect) while the other paths are her being unable to get over it (Low love and respect) or the MC pushing her to follow it (Swinging path). The game is only going to span the vacation (two-ish weeks) so I don't think the twist is going to be some huge plot point that can't be resolved in that time period (Being sexually abused would create so much trauma that couldn't be reasonably reduced within two weeks, discovering a kink and suppressing it so you don't hurt your husband, while not my favorite storyline, Can be resolved in that timeframe.)
 
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