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Plot idea is good. Writing is good. Ana de Armas is the best, always.
Now make the game pls.
Step-by-step words can be good decision but only for some very important scene, where each one word can change everything. Not in each one string line in each one dialogue, c'mon! :FacePalm: Don't waste gamers time, make scenes and conversations shorter, please. Place the whole dialogue on the single screen, please-please.
P.S.
That old dick took my costume. I do not know what happened next. Maybe he danced a lambada or fucked a goose. I was so tired of talking to him that I just fell asleep. When I wake up I just close the browser. Please make scenes shorter and plot faster. I'm not asking for myself, just help that goose to save his virginity.
 
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Daygone1988

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Been waiting for smth like this for a while now. Keep up the good work.
NB: The fade in text is tedious and the grind is way too high, but i enjoyed the result. Waiting for the next update !
 
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  • Great writing, Anna is amazing obviously, and the ramp up in scenes is entertaining.
  • A bit too much clicking at times : hi bob>water>exercise>slugs>cook>eat>exercise>talk bob>sleep.. every day for 1 week before new scene.
  • I thought I've seen everything after many days, until I decided to go back to shack and suddenly "bob wants something". Maybe hints ?
  • And please... remove all delays, fadein/fadeout, word by word prompts, way too slow, especially with that much clicking. Hot fix seems to reduce that but it's still too much
Can't wait for the next chapter !
Also : is Max coming back ? It was a bit disapointing to never see it again after the first couple scenes.
 
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