Hey, guys!
Sorry for disappearing. I have a chronic illness and it acted up this last month, shortly after the release.
I'm finally able to get back to work on it. I have a ton of ideas and plenty of scenes planned. I just need to put it down.
Great start, AlexXXX! As usual, your writing is hot, imaginative, and delightfully cruel. I can't wait to see how the game develops.
Honestly telling me that the writing is cruel is the best compliment I could get. It's exactly what I was going for!
Alexxx! Congrats on getting your game out there. Really great start. Love the lockerroom scene both dom and sub. I am curious about the motivations of the characters. I love that they are all different and I look forward to learning more about them.
Your writing is clean and flows (great style), and the sex scenes are legit hot. I was so sad when I reached the end. Have you put this up on itch.io yet? That site gets a TON of traffic (not as much feedback/discussion as here but you'll get a lot of gameplay).
This is the start of something great.
BTW: Did you try to arrange your twine passages so they looked like a penis with the balls on top (nice touch)?
Unruly
Yeah, it's on itch.io, that site sure gets a lot of traffic.
Thanks for the compliments! As a huge fan of your game it's great to know you enjoy my work as well.
And hahahahaha I did NOT plan on the penis but I'm happy it somehow got there.
I love penis.
MOAR PENIS!
Excellent move, Mr Dev... I'm not into sissification either ..
Great start
alexxxx000 , I always praise devs that avoid sissyfication content. My best wishes for your game.
Yeah, there are a bunch of games with sissyfication out there and while I can enjoy them, usually I enjoy them IN SPITE of the presence of sissyfication.
To each their own, but not in my game.
No sissy content? I approve. Nothing against it but not my thing (and there are a lot of that in almost any other game).
So far interesting game with good writing. The only thing right now that i would add is more visuals (i know is not what you have in mind for the game, but it's something more along the line of making it easier to read "breaking the text", but it's ok like it is).
I understand wanting porn between the passages. I mean, I play a lot of games like that and they're great and the images help set the tone (and the masturbating
)
It's just not really what I'm going for.
I might be revealing my old right now, but it's based on those Choose Your Own Adventure books I used to read when I was younger.
I loved them and they really took me to another universe. I still read similar novels/games like this on my tablet. A Choice Of Robots is a personal favorite.
So this is more of a
novel novel instead of visual novel.
Off to a great start! Usually I would prefer games with images/video but you've really managed to make a game that ropes in the player without any of that stuff, the writing is really good.
The UI and everything looks really well too, everything looks consistent and well-presented. The characterisations and portrait icons really help differentiate between the characters as well.
Love seeing some more proper M/M content too!
I wouldn't mind seeing one of the Fathers/teachers/headmaster appearing as a character later on either but whatever you end up doing I'll lap it up anyway.
Thanks for the UI compliment, I really wanted it to look streamlined and nice.
There will be an older character introduced soonish.
The focus is very student-based but I'm not against introducing older characters.
I really appreciate the writing quality of this game. I can tell the author is learned on natural description if that sentence makes sense. I found every 'page' to be well made and interesting. I want to see this game continue. More than anything I appreciate the sadism focus going on and I think the composition is where the author shines, I'd like to see how this author takes on more brutal circumstances even if I heavily dislike blood
Thank you.
I try to be as descriptive as I can since I don't use images or videos.
And sadism is certainly a focus.
There will be more slapping, punching, kicking and all around violence.
There won't be blood or gore since I'm not into that.
So does that mean the player is gonna be locked into group actions? or will you have solo fuck buddy options? I'm not a huge fan of player rape or forced group. Trying to figure out if this is gonna be for me or not, before i get too invested.
There will be group scenes. But it's not a focus. Most scenes will probably be one on one or one on two.
I always give the player the option to remove themselves from the situation. I don't believe in forcing players into sex scenes.
However, there won't be a friendship route or a non-sex route. It is a porn game. if you choose to remove yourself from the situation you will get a few paragraphs describing how you left but no more than that.
My story is very non-con and sometimes borders on rapey and that's by design.
I hope that answers your question.
Praying that Marky always keeps his feet clean
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