VN Ren'Py Reika Mission [Ch.1] [Chunchunmaru]

[ellenssmurray]

my personal collection that I have built over the past seven years likely contains 300 to 500 animations—hahahaha.

The challenge in the fact that this is only my seventh day learning to use Ren'Py and story writing, so I apologize profusely if the output results prove highly disappointing in both micro and macro aspects.

Are these original animations or are they from other creators?

 

[ellenssmurray]

Same error

Remove the word "scene" from the line with scene Reika Shy

 

[ChunchunmaruDev]

today progress..

why reika making such lewd face ? what is fredric pinch ? lmaoo...

 

[Knight6797]

Your renders look really sexy man

 

[critic specialized in NTR]

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today progress..

why reika making such lewd face ? what is fredric pinch ? lmaoo...

That's what an NTR game needs nowadays: perversion, eroticism. Slow-burning and having all the stages is getting tiresome, and besides, they never manage to do it masterfully. I think the question here is whether you focus on this camera/filming system from the MC's point of view, so that we don't lose the feeling of NTR, and the hidden NTR prevails, because that's exciting.

 

[ChunchunmaruDev]

That's what an NTR game needs nowadays: perversion, eroticism. Slow-burning and having all the stages is getting tiresome, and besides, they never manage to do it masterfully. I think the question here is whether you focus on this camera/filming system from the MC's point of view, so that we don't lose the feeling of NTR, and the hidden NTR prevails, because that's exciting.

did you mean our mc pov ? hehehe...

 

[ChunchunmaruDev]

note : This cg is not in the game

 

[critic specialized in NTR]

did you mean our mc pov ? hehehe... View attachment 5407629 View attachment 5407630

Yeah man, especially if you've added sounds, the good old NTR games focused on the MC's POV and created a really good hidden NTR feeling. I don't know why they don't do that anymore these days, or why they do it very little. For me, that's what true NTR is, because we're actually playing a game that evokes the feeling of betrayal; that's the premise.

 

[brooklyn600]

Here to give some support to the dev. The game is obviously rough around its edges but at least he nails the basics which 90% of game makers here fail to do for some reason.

Whilst the story and gameplay can be important, we're all here to play good gooner content first which means attractive character design, art, and good animations are always my #1 priority. Most fail this already lol, doesn't matter how good the rest of the game is if I think your characters look shit. So, good job to this dev on that end.

This is just a demo game of course but a piece of kind advice to the dev if he plans to continue making NTR games, the moment the female protagonist completely falls to the antagonist is the most important part of all NTR games. I think if you ever decide to rework this game into a full game, a slower corruption process + buildup could make the game infinitely hotter.

People have mentioned this before but your skills with Koikatsu is legitimately good enough to be monetized by itself. I was wondering if you'd actually make better use of your talents by partnering with a game dev whilst you just supply the art and animation. Of course, if you enjoy making games by yourself as well that's totally fine. I just hope to see you continue developing games.

 

[ChunchunmaruDev]

Here to give some support to the dev. The game is obviously rough around its edges but at least he nails the basics which 90% of game makers here fail to do for some reason.

Whilst the story and gameplay can be important, we're all here to play good gooner content first which means attractive character design, art, and good animations are always my #1 priority. Most fail this already lol, doesn't matter how good the rest of the game is if I think your characters look shit. So, good job to this dev on that end.

This is just a demo game of course but a piece of kind advice to the dev if he plans to continue making NTR games, the moment the female protagonist completely falls to the antagonist is the most important part of all NTR games. I think if you ever decide to rework this game into a full game, a slower corruption process + buildup could make the game infinitely hotter.

People have mentioned this before but your skills with Koikatsu is legitimately good enough to be monetized by itself. I was wondering if you'd actually make better use of your talents by partnering with a game dev whilst you just supply the art and animation. Of course, if you enjoy making games by yourself as well that's totally fine. I just hope to see you continue developing games.

Thank you very much for the review, I'm learning to compose a story, this is my first game and writing a story,
sometimes I get confused in the middle of the road like something is missing, but if I overhaul everything it will take a lot of time,
so for my first game please don't expect too much of an interesting story . I will continue to learn and try again

Once again, thankyou!

 

[ChunchunmaruDev]

which better

 

[phantomz]

They both look good and hot

 

[Niraeza]

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which better

I'm an ahegao man personally, so first one for sure

 

[gordon101]

can't wait for this to release, i usually not a fan of demos a lot of cases they don't have much, this omg good stuff. If this comes out this year say this probably be one of the best for 2025 besides SAO NTR online

 

[BreadnNetorare]

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which better

Tongue out is the best

 

[BangB420]

fuckk super hot game, straight to the action, love that

 

[ChunchunmaruDev]

Chapter 1 is finished! I will release it soon, next week I will be off for 1 week because of real life matters.. Total animation 15+3, duration playing time est 1 hour +

And come up with a new story and different plot and characters, let's put the Reika mission aside for now until I get an idea.

Patreon will get a special animation!

 

[Alegator18]

The CGs are simply incredible, the camera work, among other aspects. I imagine this demo is to test your skills and the public's reaction, but the sex was right at the beginning. Believe me, it's great. If you have another project where we see a more elaborate story, with slow-burn corruption, provocative touches, and spicy hints of corruption, you've got me. I'm going to Patreon right now. Don't be like other developers working on more than one game at a time; it tires you out and makes updates slow. Give love and care to the new project you're working on in terms of writing, plot, CG, etc. And well, as a personal suggestion, the giant breasts are, in my opinion, too morbid for these games. Something more realistic would be better, but it's your game and your decision. New supporter.

 

["WindDX "]

You'll know what will happen to them in the future, so just wait. This is a game I made that can probably be completed in 1 - 2 hours of gameplay, with stories from 1 to 100 quickly, and you must know that mc loves reika so much , i wont spoil in here,pelase be patient with next update

Hey, question. You say the MC loves Reika. That's understandable. But... does SHE love him? Pure curiosity on my part. Game's pretty hot either way but considering how quickly she jumped into the action it did make me wonder lol. A personal favorite thing of mine is the FMC loving the MC... but still fucking around behind his back. Not just "saying" she loves him for shits and giggles like saying she loves him while actually loving the bull behind his back but actually meaning it... in a very twisted way sure but still. Pretty contradictory sure but it's a pretty hot sort of scenario.

 

[ChunchunmaruDev]

The CGs are simply incredible, the camera work, among other aspects. I imagine this demo is to test your skills and the public's reaction, but the sex was right at the beginning. Believe me, it's great. If you have another project where we see a more elaborate story, with slow-burn corruption, provocative touches, and spicy hints of corruption, you've got me. I'm going to Patreon right now. Don't be like other developers working on more than one game at a time; it tires you out and makes updates slow. Give love and care to the new project you're working on in terms of writing, plot, CG, etc. And well, as a personal suggestion, the giant breasts are, in my opinion, too morbid for these games. Something more realistic would be better, but it's your game and your decision. New supporter.

Hello, thank you very much for your review, I am still learning in making stories, I am also still very, very new in making a good and structured plot, so I apologize if there is anything lacking in terms of the story, I will continue to learn!