VN Ren'Py Restore Her Career [v0.31] [Kalyha]

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luscimilk

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Damn, this whole gold digger angle is so Irksome.
I don't see the point of this chick at all and it's seriously degraded the quality of the entire VN. This guy has chicks lined to the hilt doing all sorts of degrading shit for him, but yet he wastes money on a fucking gold digger...?

I would've preferred seeing Linda, Emma or Aunty in her place. Fuck, even Linda's daughter being bimbofied would've been hot as fuck. But some random fucking gold digger...? When I chose to "buy mom ring" I was really hoping I wouldn't have to deal with this chick anymore, but she keeps recurring until the end and she's the major character in breaking mom?

Would've been better to "break" mom with Aunty Jenna. Let her catch Stan deep dicking Jenna in the Ass or some shit. Anything but wasting time, money, energy and fucking Gallery panels on a Gold Digger.
 
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ramvivat

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luscimilk said:
Would've been better to "break" mom with Aunty Jenna.
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Could you roughly describe your vision of the situation? taking into account the fact that the MC likes to tickle his nerves with the risk of being caught, but does not want to be caught. MC not a stupid.
 
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luscimilk

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ramvivat said:
Could you roughly describe your vision of the situation? taking into account the fact that the MC likes to tickle his nerves with the risk of being caught, but does not want to be caught. MC not a stupid.
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Not get caught with what? There were already scenes with him playing around with their breasts at the Spa. My "vision" would be a slow progression of jenna doing more and more shoots, while MC praises her "abilities" to make the mom more jealous. Eventually leading to the mom finding out about them having more of a relationship than they know. We've established by the end the Jenna is a sexually deprived horny anal slut who, literally, sped over to his house to get fucked and could think of nothing more than sex while she was doing a porn shoot for the first time on his bed. Jenna already admitted her cheating to her sister, and she's already "told" her sister she knows about what they do in the shoots. Considering what jenna has experienced, it's not out of the realm of possibility that she already assumed, but doubted, that they fucked. At the spa, we were also introduced to the competitive nature between Jenna and Adrianna.

One might argue that, if Jenna is introduced as the catalyst, then MCs grip on her might loosen because she now has a support network. However, Jenna is already dick starved and cheating on her husband, whom never touches her. She'd now has unlimited access to the best dick (her words) she's had if Adrianna was aware. What would she do? Push him away? What would adrianna do? Protest? Then MC pulls the same low quality arguments he did with the Gold Digger to make Adrianna panic into submitting to all this absurdity. She's already fucking her son, why can't her sister do it too? Is a random whore better than her sister?

Hell, it was teased that he wanted a 3some with them. Considering how Far gone the Mom and Jenna is by the end, you could weave a story plotline in there. It obviously won't make much sense, but none of the story makes any real sense anyway... The arguments he uses to "convince" his mom half the time are of low quality.

tl;dr; continue the Jenna corruption and use her as the catalyst the break the mom. Jenna was already broken.

That would be my "vision" for a jenna scenario. However, it could be any of the girls. Just not some random, paid for gold digger with no purpose but the ending...
 
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scene in the toilet of the coffee shop - ugh, Linda has no taste? she wears white panties under black pantyhose? and it is right that the MC so humiliated her. it's just a Spanish shame that a woman allows herself to dress so tastelessly as if she were a whore.
 
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HiroNakamura

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Seriously what a great update, easily one of the best updates I ever played here. Nice progress with mon, now look how submissive she has become - nice! I also dig the threesome scenes - I can see more of them with different characters in future because Adrianna is such an obedient woman now! Maybe an aunt-mom-mc angle soon? All is prepared.. Also lets get some more bitches for the nightclub hehe. What a great game, the MC is living our dream guys^^
 
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otoboke said:
Imagine Adrianna dancing something like this in the club. (◔◡◔)

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nah... Adrianna isn't supposed to dance like that. her size does not allow her to make such sudden movements. the inertia is too great. maybe Emma could dance like that - her breasts are not so prominent, although she is also beautiful. Scarlett could have danced like this before the operation. no need to mock Adrianna. she should smoothly defile along the catwalk, majestically swaying her hips and breasts.

don't forget - she's our slutty harem queen, not just a picket whore.
she is our f..king lovely mom and not a dog dick.
respect Adrianna's f..king authority!

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ramvivat said:
nah... Adrianna isn't supposed to dance like that. her size does not allow her to make such sudden movements. the inertia is too great. maybe Emma could dance like that - her breasts are not so prominent, although she is also beautiful. Scarlett could have danced like this before the operation. no need to mock Adrianna. she should smoothly defile along the catwalk, majestically swaying her hips and breasts.

don't forget - she's our slutty harem queen, not just a picket whore.
she is our f..king lovely mom and not a dog dick.
respect Adrianna's f..king authority!

=))
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I thought more about her confidence and high-skilled kinda professional moves. As if she says "yeah, this is my job, I'm a queen of this place". It would be cool to see Adrianna behaving at scene like that. She is a #1 girl after all.
 
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ragesworld

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i think the main char should pay for bigger breasts for his mother like maybe a 30% increase in size maximum let the reader choose and a slightly bigger butt but maybe make that an optional path
 
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mortic90

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ragesworld said:
i think the main char should pay for bigger breasts for his mother like maybe a 30% increase in size maximum let the reader choose and a slightly bigger butt but maybe make that an optional path
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She already got the biggest tits didn't she? With that they would just look like balloons, also I don't think the story will have multiple endings, yes there are choices but on the long run those didn't mattered, or did they?
 
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