Personally I like to have a, at least somewhat, comprehensible Story in my AVNs, but that would be a whole different Discussion now. And yeah, no one is reading RHC for the Plot, or the dialogues, but still...Without changing seems obvious future plot development that gonna lead Linda's daughter to willingly participate in corrupting her mom, which serves to eroge goals, how else you would justify that Rebecca is not just OK with what happens to Linda, but even helps some evil man to drown her in the abyss of depravity?
It's not easy task I would say.
Seems also planned, protagonist's "revenge" to Alex, Emma's son, also suffers from lack of solid reason. But since we are not for sparkling and breathtaking stories here, I guess it's ok. We have enough lost literature critics in reviews section, we better not be as smelly as them.![]()
In the beginning the Game had much better Plotlines that where more engaging imho. Like, there where actual Problems the MC had to resolve, yeah way to easy and often in ridiculous ways, but it matched the over the top tone the whole Game had and worked well to make it to a somewhat satirical comedy.
Like the whole back and forth in Power between MC and his Aunt, or slowly coaxing Emma away from sacrificing herself for a Son who doesn't really deserves her support, somewhat "freeing her" out of her self made Jail.
Not the biggest fan of the whole Adrianna Plot but even there was a back and forth and the MC had to be a little bit careful and had to "work for it".
But for the last couple Updates, even this basic Plot development is kind of missing, and the pacing is super fast.
The Aunt breaks down in a handful of scenes, becoming almost instantly MCs submissive butt slut.
Same goes for Emma, maybe I'm biased here as I don't really like her development in general, but she also changes in a couple of scenes quiet drastically imo.
A bit more details would have been great for those developments, more celebrating the final surrender of the Women. Savouring the moment before victory as long as it goes.
Or for Linda/Rebecca a more sinister angle where Rebecca is more of a Sheltered but curious Daughter who got manipulated in thinking her mother wants to hog all the "fun" to herself, or something like that.
I'm sure the plot will still go somewhat like this, but in a much rougher and rushed feeling way. With a Rebecca that already is a super horny sadistic bitch who goes off on the idea of hurting her mother that did so horrible things as caring a bit to much about her.