VN Ren'Py Restore Her Career [v0.33] [Kalyha]

[otoboke]

Ok, I need someone to help me understand something. Did I lose my grasp on sarcasm or did society go this retard?
I decided to try this VN after playing Starmaker Story and at the beginning was: ok it is by the kid from a country where English is not the first language and he has some sort of learning disability, let's get a few beers in and power through.
As the beer kept flowing, a thought popped in my head: did Tommy Wiseau go into H-game production?
I reached the point where MC blackmails his aunt for the first time and despite my best efforts I just could not go any further, I got a strong headache trying to get through all that verbal diarrhea.
But when I went into the review section, I saw posts like: "the storyline goes surprisingly deep", "interactions and moments are incredibly well done", "the story and the MC are so greatly written".
The fuck?
Is there some sort of campaign where people ironically review this thing as great, or do they really think this is great? I'm not trying to offend someone; I genuinely can't understand because I get physical pain from reading this 'material'.

Education issue.
You just don't understand that any art or product of creativity have two main aspects - first one is the idea and the second is physical iplementation/incarnation (I don't know which term actually used to that in english) i.e. how well it's produced in meanings of technique. And there is generally accepted consensus in theory of art, that despite beautifully executed form is always a good thing, idea's value is close to absolute. So when you see a statue that is roughly carved, or drawning that sloppily drawn, or singer who's pronunciation is realy bad, if you insist that only the fact of this lack of technique is enough reason to call them a shit, then you are just blatantly showing that you don't know a shit in topic where you trying to be a critic.

 

[Kishanghost313]

Really cool ideas.

Yeah, fan interactions could be a gold for RHC and such a selling point. We had first one already, I hope Kalyha will deliver much more. Because, when it comes to public activity, fans, friends and relatives - best part of audience. I also would like to see more stuff like main characters reading and answering subscribers comments, taking notes, challenges, or making surveys/votings like "pick community's official nickname for Adrianna" or "pick Adrianna's clothes for the next day/photoshoot", just like Kalyha doing in patreon/SS. To be honest, I expected stuff like this a long time ago, since MC first time started to manage their porn page, and there was some of that mentioned by MC from time to time, but in general I would say it's barely touched.

And some more and more public humiliations and cumming ...of course
*Evil laughter insertion*

 

[pempe]

Education issue.
You just don't understand that any art or product of creativity have two main aspects - first one is the idea and the second is physical iplementation/incarnation (I don't know which term actually used to that in english) i.e. how well it's produced in meanings of technique. And there is generally accepted consensus in theory of art, that despite beautifully executed form is always a good thing, idea's value is close to absolute. So when you see a statue that is roughly carved, or drawning that sloppily drawn, or singer who's pronunciation is realy bad, if you insist that only the fact of this lack of technique is enough reason to call them a shit, then you are just blatantly showing that you don't know a shit in topic where you trying to be a critic.

Wait, wait...
Someone takes the cliche porn trope, generic 3D renders, and is so bad at writing that he can't put a coherent sentence to a page to tie those two together, and you call that art with a lack of technique?
What kind of education do you need to get to be that delusional?

P.S. Idea without the ability to properly express it is just a terrible idea and should be kept to oneself.

 

[CommanderWitcher]

No animations, wayyy too much text and pretty bad english. Gets boring after a while.

 

[Cross47]

A great game. I'm looking forward to the sequel.

 

[Yukariin]

A great game. I'm looking forward to the sequel.

sequel?
game's not done yo

 

[otoboke]

It's beyond stupid and I wouldn't have to type this if you make effort to check dictionary for definitions of what you talking about. But ok, let's make F95 a little bit educational.

Someone takes the cliche porn trope and you call that art with a lack of technique?

There is no contradiction, art is the works made by utilizing creativity, and creativity is the process of using imagination to create something new or unique. Opposite to economical production(like industrial etc) which utilizes a plan and strives to perfect repeatability of products. So any porn is the art, if it made with imagination and result is unique.

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P.S. Idea without the ability to properly express it is just a terrible idea and should be kept to oneself.

Then some music composer that have no vocal abilities and delegates singing his songs to some professional vocalist, can't be classified as worthy creator? What about a poet that can't write down his poetry without grammal mistakes, should he cease his composing regardless how genius it is?
It's more general topic, I can't prove idea's meaning compared to other things with just a link, but try to open "Creativity" article in wikipedia, press Ctrl+F and search for how many times word "idea" occur on the page (67 times), and then search for words like "implementation", "execution" etc. It should give you some representation.

Now enough of those 5 y.o. takes, please open some book.

 

[otoboke]

A great game. I'm looking forward to the sequel.

What is your IDEA for sequel? Where the story should start?
Personally, I would like to see RHC2 in sci-fi setting, they found a time control machine or something like that, so Adrianna do not getting any older now, meanwhile their kids hitting 18 yo, some journeys on a spaceship would be cool too.
Or some fantasy, like they died in a car accident and found themselves in a parallel reality/another world or even in hell and now trying to make their way through it, making new friends in process.

 

[pempe]

It's beyond stupid and I wouldn't have to type this if you make effort to check dictionary for definitions of what you talking about. But ok, let's make F95 a little bit educational.

I agree, "cliche" and "trope" can be redundant in the same sentence.
And yet, both of those terms seem to glide from the smooth surface of your brain.

There is no contradiction, art is the works made by utilizing creativity, and creativity is the process of using imagination to create something new or unique.

There is nothing 'new', 'creative' or 'unique' about this slop and for you to disagree with such statement can only mean one thing - lack of experience.

Then some music composer that have no vocal abilities and delegates singing his songs to some professional vocalist, can't be classified as worthy creator?

If you can't see fault in this statement, it makes sense why you would defend this slop.

What about a poet that can't write down his poetry without grammal mistakes, should he cease his composing regardless how genius it is?

If a poet can't write down his poetry without grammatical mistakes, he is not a poet; he is a wannabee who has never been published.

Now enough of those 5 y.o. takes, please open some book.

Considering your expression style, you are at least half my age and I doubt you would hold even a small part of the books I have ever read.

 

[internet_says]

What is your IDEA for sequel? Where the story should start?

This is a great question, I think the main thing I would love to see in a sequel is a less cartoony and more realistic models/graphics, like Desert Stalker, Fetish Locator, Shattered Minds, Project Myriam, Bright Lord. As for the idea, well obviously why not a quest to make Adrianna officially the MC's woman, by making it public and getting married. But the problem is, there are laws against family getting married. So the MC will have to now figure out how to change the laws to allow that, and while he's at it might as well change the laws against polygamy because he may have some other women he'd like to put a ring on, or a collar for that matter. Might as well look into the obscenity, indecency and public nudity laws as well. Looks like he'll have to run for office or corrupt the government leader to show the people the benefits of a more open and free lifestyle and get those laws changed.

 

[otoboke]

This is a great question, I think the main thing I would love to see in a sequel is a less cartoony and more realistic models/graphics, like Desert Stalker, Fetish Locator, Shattered Minds, Project Myriam, Bright Lord. As for the idea, well obviously why not a quest to make Adrianna officially the MC's woman, by making it public and getting married. But the problem is, there are laws against family getting married. So the MC will have to now figure out how to change the laws to allow that, and while he's at it might as well change the laws against polygamy because he may have some other women he'd like to put a ring on, or a collar for that matter. Might as well look into the obscenity, indecency and public nudity laws as well. Looks like he'll have to run for office or corrupt the government leader to show the people the benefits of a more open and free lifestyle and get those laws changed.

I like it.
Making Adrianna and his whole harem a national role model.

 

[Kishanghost313]

Holy shit...so much of a grammar police over literally a porn game. Dev isn't earning thousands for his graphical efforts. Ppl enjoy his game due to his visuals, rest even broken english works well here. But if Dev needs any script writers, we are always here to help for free. Cause we enjoy this game

 

[pempe]

Holy shit...so much of a grammar police over literally a porn game. Dev isn't earning thousands for his graphical efforts. Ppl enjoy his game due to his visuals, rest even broken english works well here. But if Dev needs any script writers, we are always here to help for free. Cause we enjoy this game

Grammar is not the main issue here. It's storytelling. It is like listening to a retard trying to tell you about his dream.

 

[TalkingCat15]

Grammar is not the main issue here. It's storytelling. It is like listening to a retard trying to tell you about his dream.

Have you considered, maybe, that... that's the point? Game's story might not be the deepest shit on the world but for its intended purpose, the execution is well done.

 

[pempe]

Have you considered, maybe, that... that's the point? Game's story might not be the deepest shit on the world but for its intended purpose, the execution is well done.

If that is intentional or not, it is crap. Absurd - done right is bad, and unintentional is miserable. I got angry that I spent my time on this thing; I needed to vent. I did that, and it is time to move on. I have what I needed; there is no hidden joke, just simple people are easy to entertain. Enjoy your 'masterpiece'.

 

[XK271]

Well... bye.

 

[pempe]

Well... bye.

Don't tell me what to do. I'm still pissed. Tell me what you enjoy so I can insult you properly

 

[otoboke]

I needed to vent. I did that, and it is time to move on. I have what I needed; there is no hidden joke, just simple people are easy to entertain. Enjoy your 'masterpiece'.

Is that an attempt to look cool?

Don't tell me what to do.

LMAO try to stomp your foot to make it sound more serious, big baby. Will you cry? Will you take revenge on us by leaving 1-star review? Do your worst.

 

[king meme]

Please add an alternative link

Link apk version is crash

 

[TosaTo]

Please make Adrianna a club worker who's willing to relieve other men's stress.