VN Ren'Py Abandoned Returning Hero [Ep. 1] [FreePotatoGames]

[JapanLily]

It's great that this game is so interesting to me! The plot is fascinating, the girls are all beautiful and attractive! I love the possible choices! looking forward to the new version with scenes of 2 daughter...

 

[giggitygigity]

pretty great update albeit a little bit forceful on the incest approach...

 

[Fazed]

HS beards do not look good.

 

[Cameo]

FreePotato There was a whole other comment about typos in stats check but long story short, using >= or <= is better than using == for comparison, and at some point you started using AA and MA etc instead of Mia, Ava points, which mostly caused problems during dinner scene. I took a liberty and fixed stuff, attaching a file

 

[Akainu456]

It's a shame that this will be a sharing game Good luck but as a harem fan this game just isn't for me

 

[FreePotato]

FreePotato There was a whole other comment about typos in stats check but long story short, using >= or <= is better than using == for comparison, and at some point you started using AA and MA etc instead of Mia, Ava points, which mostly caused problems during dinner scene. I took a liberty and fixed stuff, attaching a file

Thanks for pointing them out, I did modify the script as the other comment suggested, but I wasn't able to spot all the other mistakes. Dunno how to download a script file from comments, so I just did it manually.

It should be fixed now(updated the links too). Still new to this whole thing and I wasn't able to find any guide on point systems, so thanks for the >= suggestion as well.

It's a shame that this will be a sharing game Good luck but as a harem fan this game just isn't for me
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Thanks for playing anyway! But sharing will be just an option, just like all other more niche content.

 

[jhustrue]

- 335 scenes

Assume you mean renders and not scenes, otherwise that'd be insane.

 

[FreePotato]

- 335 scenes

Assume you mean renders and not scenes, otherwise that'd be insane.

Yeahhh, it's renders, not scenes. For some reason, I called all images 'scenes' in my mind when writing that Modifyed it now, thx

 

[Fazed]

I plan to make it obvious when such content rears its head. For now, there's nothing like that in the game, so no need to worry.

And the sharing will either be with other females or traps(which I also plan on having in the game later on). Again, it'll be optional and easily avoidable. (I plan on writing a disclaimer on the choices that lead to it)

Interesting. I like lesbian content and group scenes but usually draw a hard line at having other guys join in. For some reason though, traps go through my filter. My second brain just doesn't care as long as they are cute enough. I'm gonna fuck them both anyway so why not?
Is it going to be like how I'm imagining it?

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If you plan to add traps what about futanari? Also will any of these characters be part of the main cast of recurring characters or just one off side characters? I don't really like when characters show up once for a scene then disappear forever.

 

[Fazed]

That is NOT a one-handed sword.

Anime begs to differ. He should be dual wielding 2 of them.

 

[FreePotato]

Interesting. I like lesbian content and group scenes but usually draw a hard line at having other guys join in. For some reason though, traps go through my filter. My second brain just doesn't care as long as they are cute enough. I'm gonna fuck them both anyway so why not?
Is it going to be like how I'm imagining it?

Spoiler: Don't click if you dont like threesome with a trap.

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If you plan to add traps what about futanari? Also will any of these characters be part of the main cast of recurring characters or just one off side characters? I don't really like when characters show up once for a scene then disappear forever.

I did want to make a scene similar to this, but the trap content will either be a full-on trap or a Futa.

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[Fazed]

I did want to make a scene similar to this, but the trap content will either be a full-on trap or a Futa.

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[CamaroFan432]

I did want to make a scene similar to this, but the trap content will either be a full-on trap or a Futa.

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Well, to get the terms right, a man or woman, who transitions to the other gender, is usally called a trans. A trap is usally a boy/man who looks and acts feminine, but doesn't intend to transition. A futa is usally a character with both genders, meaning with breasts, dick and vagina. Balls are some kind of optional, depending on the taste of the dev and the willingness to model them. The term futa gets often misused by people for characters, that are born with breasts and dicks but no vagina. The misuse has evolved through porn and western ignorance and gets justified by "not having the same psychological struggle, that a trans person has". For the lack of a better term, I usally call them chicks with dicks or dickgirl. I hope, these infos can help to give you an idea, how you want to handle that character.

 

[Fazed]

Well, to get the terms right, a man or woman, who transitions to the other gender, is usally called a trans. A trap is usally a boy/man who looks and acts feminine, but doesn't intend to transition. A futa is usally a character with both genders, meaning with breasts, dick and vagina. Balls are some kind of optional, depending on the taste of the dev and the willingness to model them. The term futa gets often misused by people for characters, that are born with breasts and dicks but no vagina. The misuse has evolved through porn and western ignorance and gets justified by "not having the same psychological struggle, that a trans person has". For the lack of a better term, I usally call them chicks with dicks or dickgirl. I hope, these infos can help to give you an idea, how you want to handle that character.

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Yup.

...i'd like to take this opportunity to declare full package futa to be superior. cant forget the balls + vag.

 

[FreePotato]

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Well, to get the terms right, a man or woman, who transitions to the other gender, is usally called a trans. A trap is usally a boy/man who looks and acts feminine, but doesn't intend to transition. A futa is usally a character with both genders, meaning with breasts, dick and vagina. Balls are some kind of optional, depending on the taste of the dev and the willingness to model them. The term futa gets often misused by people for characters, that are born with breasts and dicks but no vagina. The misuse has evolved through porn and western ignorance and gets justified by "not having the same psychological struggle, that a trans person has". For the lack of a better term, I usally call them chicks with dicks or dickgirl. I hope, these infos can help to give you an idea, how you want to handle that character.

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[Fazed]

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...For futa just make up some fantasy magic or scifi nanomachine surgery that gave the woman an additional cock and balls...Or you could always do with "I was just born this way". I don't think an origin story for that is super important as long as the personality of the character is good. How would you even explain an isekai protagonist coming back to the "real world" anyway?

 

[FreePotato]

...For futa just make up some fantasy magic or scifi nanomachine surgery that gave the woman an additional cock and balls...Or you could always do with "I was just born this way". I don't think an origin story for that is super important as long as the personality of the character is good. How would you even explain an isekai protagonist coming back to the "real world" anyway?

You're right, I'm just overthinking shit, or maybe not thinking at all Thanks for setting me straight my guy

 

[Fazed]

You're right, I'm just overthinking shit, or maybe not thinking at all Thanks for setting me straight my guy

Well I do hope I helped a little. You can still put your own spin on it ofc.

It's just when I think about it, the isekai trope is far out enough already and you are telling the story of a guy that actually came back, which doesn't usually happen. So he would have a hard time realistically explaining to the normal people what happened to him or come up with an elaborate lie as to why he disappeared without notice. You opened the flood gates to fantasy already. Oh here's another...She came from that world too, but at a separate time and has been living in your world for a few years. She could have crossed over from a young age too. Her family could have been running from something or it was an accidental portal. There's a lot of ways you could spin it with a fantasy vibe.

 

[CamaroFan432]

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For the trans character you could even go as far as to say, that they where in transition and ran out of money and into deeper financial problems before the transition was finished. There are tons of believable setups for this, also like Fazed mentioned. It does only need to be believable and fit into your story and world. What I'm trying to say it, it shouldn't feel forced. If it feels forced, the probability of being liked will drop-

 

[FreePotato]

Well I do hope I helped a little. You can still put your own spin on it ofc.

It's just when I think about it, the isekai trope is far out enough already and you are telling the story of a guy that actually came back, which doesn't usually happen. So he would have a hard time realistically explaining to the normal people what happened to him or come up with an elaborate lie as to why he disappeared without notice. You opened the flood gates to fantasy already. Oh here's another...She came from that world too, but at a separate time and has been living in your world for a few years.. There's a lot of ways you could spin it with a fantasy vibe.

Trust me, you are helping. It's nice to have someone to debate with, it helps ideas a lot. I'm also a writer, and talking to readers is the best way to get inspiration.

And you're right, I do plan to have Magic be a thing in his world, I shouldn't stress over perfect explanations for why characters are a certain way.

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For the trans character you could even go as far as to say, that they where in transition and ran out of money and into deeper financial problems before the transition was finished. There are tons of believable setups for this, also like Fazed mentioned. It does only need to be believable and fit into your story and world. What I'm trying to say it, it shouldn't feel forced. If it feels forced, the probability of being liked will drop-

You're right, but I think I'm giving up on the transition plot in general now. No need to overcomplicate things. I'll just make it as natural as I can without having the problem of a transition ever happening. That way the Trap character will forever be a trap, and the futa a futa.