- Nov 20, 2017
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Good start but the story has some crap and totally unrealistic holes.
- Thread starter Karabinek
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About Clara, yep, I'd fired her right after she gets 40 fucking minutes later on my office.
I know my boss would do it with anyone on the company I work.
I know my boss would do it with anyone on the company I work.
- Jan 13, 2020
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Yh but its not really the same character. its like I've seen the exact same character but in a different game
anyone got any suggestions
thanks
Holy cow this scene with Lisa in the coffee shop - is this really the daughter from "Our fate - a new family" working in there?!??
- Mar 17, 2019
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When Lisa is thinking (day 3) while trying to sleep, I first thought she was speaking because the text isn't emphasized. No cursive/italics or parenthesis or anything else to let us know she's thinking.
Once more a 27yo dude, who already has a company somewhere, doesn't know how to start going through his father's company documents. He also seems to be in a relationship with two women already but doesn't know how to dress to a restaurant dinner. And he doesn't think about his two girlfriends when he sees a stewardess. The choice is left to the player if the player used the phone to read backgrounds. (All women are physically "in pretty good shape" which is hilarious.) Day 4, I decide to do Jennifer scene before Lisa's and it's weird that I just dropped Jennifer to her home, drove out to the hotel and only then called Lisa instead of ask her when dropping Jennifer home. Then there's a scene where Nic is supposed to be smoking but renders are missing the cigarette.
But, this is a huge first release! Maybe use webp instead of jpg/png to save space.
PS. "stats_clara_topless.png" is missing.
Once more a 27yo dude, who already has a company somewhere, doesn't know how to start going through his father's company documents. He also seems to be in a relationship with two women already but doesn't know how to dress to a restaurant dinner. And he doesn't think about his two girlfriends when he sees a stewardess. The choice is left to the player if the player used the phone to read backgrounds. (All women are physically "in pretty good shape" which is hilarious.) Day 4, I decide to do Jennifer scene before Lisa's and it's weird that I just dropped Jennifer to her home, drove out to the hotel and only then called Lisa instead of ask her when dropping Jennifer home. Then there's a scene where Nic is supposed to be smoking but renders are missing the cigarette.
But, this is a huge first release! Maybe use webp instead of jpg/png to save space.
PS. "stats_clara_topless.png" is missing.
- Mar 17, 2019
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That's because the dev forgot to include a topless image of Clara. If you look at other profiles girls are topless around 5 or 6 points of love or sub.
- Nov 24, 2017
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As the story in the opening post tells: The mother of three sisters was a former neighbor who moved in and eventually forced MC to move out. Also, no marriage between the former neighbor and MC's dad.
- Aug 29, 2017
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Seems like that we can't escape from Jade, even if we don't want to thatSo far perfect everything has been great from the models to the story it's not often a V0.1 is impressive but this really hit the right notes. While some of the models do look a little familiar but with that said they look amazing. So far plenty to choose from and it looks like our MC is going to have his hands full with not just all these amazing ladies but all the going's on at work and building bridges with these girls he left. Great job
- Sep 13, 2018
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- Dec 5, 2018
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I'm very early into playing this, but one thing I wanted to point out was that while I don't notice any egregious misspellings or grammatical errors, the dialogue needs some polishing. When we meet Kelly for example, she says something like "I want to feel your lips on my pussy" about 5 different times. It was absurd to the point of being laughable and no human being would talk like that. Somehow I don't think the dev was going for comedy by having her repeat that phrase, and then having the MC respond in kind that many times.
Could just use a bit of polishing up on that front.
Could just use a bit of polishing up on that front.
- Nov 30, 2018
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Was the first thing I noticedSeems like that we can't escape from Jade, even if we don't want to that
Even with dark hair and glasses she is hot. Just a shame she seems dead set against the MC right now.this game will take off quickly and if time between updates is good and updates are consistent , then there will be alot of patreons as well , as for the very first update , i only have positive things to say , models are great , renders are great , story is great , game looks fabulous , already looking forward to next update.
- Jan 11, 2020
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Oh... I like this one. The dialogue is a bit stiff but the story is rather original in terms of "returning son meets past family members and is heir to their estranged parent's belongings via will and testament." I'm most curious to see how this story unfolds as well as curious as to what the MC does for work beforehand.
All I gotta say is Linda is gonna get it! Evil bitches need to be punished...
All I gotta say is Linda is gonna get it! Evil bitches need to be punished...
Already really like this and looking forward to the other planned content, especially pregnancy.