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That's what I am saying, I mean, I am fine even with 100 of girls in the harem, but each girl MUST add something. Setting aside the 3 sisters that are there for obvious reasons, all the other girls have something to add, ex-soldiers, cop, Ming's daughter, even Emily having a clothing store could provide clothes with a discount xDThe story is fine, it's one of the more interesting ones i've read.
The problem is that some of the women don't fit into it yet. By that I mean you could completely remove Sandra as a love interest and keep her plot with Isabella and the cult as a sub plot to tie up when the main plot is done and nothing of worth would be lost.
I mention Sandra specifically because she's taken a lot of screen time and added nothing. Nearly all her scenes have been a repeat with her undecided what she was doing. It's just dragging on. Her entire contribution to the game outside of the cult stuff is boring. Even if we removed all her boring scenes and brought her straight to the harem she adds nothing. Nearly all the girls added have a role or skill, she doesn't. Neither does Emily to be fair but so far she hasn't bored me.
But Sandra, as LI, is a waste of screen time, time that could've been used for investigating the cult subplot, for example.