Avaron1974

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That's the problem when you add too many LIs just for the sake of it, unless you make 3000 renders per update, you never see all of them. In my opinion, the dev is creating the story on the go, he doesn't have a plan nor a plot already written.
The story is fine, it's one of the more interesting ones i've read.

The problem is that some of the women don't fit into it yet. By that I mean you could completely remove Sandra as a love interest and keep her plot with Isabella and the cult as a sub plot to tie up when the main plot is done and nothing of worth would be lost.

I mention Sandra specifically because she's taken a lot of screen time and added nothing. Nearly all her scenes have been a repeat with her undecided what she was doing. It's just dragging on. Her entire contribution to the game outside of the cult stuff is boring. Even if we removed all her boring scenes and brought her straight to the harem she adds nothing. Nearly all the girls added have a role or skill, she doesn't. Neither does Emily to be fair but so far she hasn't bored me.
 

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The story is fine, it's one of the more interesting ones i've read.

The problem is that some of the women don't fit into it yet. By that I mean you could completely remove Sandra as a love interest and keep her plot with Isabella and the cult as a sub plot to tie up when the main plot is done and nothing of worth would be lost.

I mention Sandra specifically because she's taken a lot of screen time and added nothing. Nearly all her scenes have been a repeat with her undecided what she was doing. It's just dragging on. Her entire contribution to the game outside of the cult stuff is boring. Even if we removed all her boring scenes and brought her straight to the harem she adds nothing. Nearly all the girls added have a role or skill, she doesn't. Neither does Emily to be fair but so far she hasn't bored me.
That's what I am saying, I mean, I am fine even with 100 of girls in the harem, but each girl MUST add something. Setting aside the 3 sisters that are there for obvious reasons, all the other girls have something to add, ex-soldiers, cop, Ming's daughter, even Emily having a clothing store could provide clothes with a discount xD
But Sandra, as LI, is a waste of screen time, time that could've been used for investigating the cult subplot, for example.
 

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That's the problem when you add too many LIs just for the sake of it, unless you make 3000 renders per update, you never see all of them. In my opinion, the dev is creating the story on the go, he doesn't have a plan nor a plot already written.
Yep, I also feel it messes up the pace of the story. Every new relationship is now super fast-paced in regard to progression. Just take a look at the news reporters and Kate the doctor. The previously mentioned character that I dislike should have been side railed for characters like: Kate, because her medical skills would be relevant to the story. The same goes for the reporters, as they can document and reveal to the world what is happening. As such, that makes these characters relevant.
 
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Hope not, they deserve a punishment for what they did...At least if they come forward in the story i want the chance to punish them
I have mixed feelings with this dev..... I mean, barely 2 updates a year and each update keeps adding subplots without closing anyone first..... the only subplot closed has been the one with Eric, but the closure is rushed.
So far we have:

1. Sandra's bullies -> on hold
2. Isabella cultists -> on hold
3. Eric -> rushed ending
4. Nicole blackmail -> Half closed, half on hold
5. Chief of police -> on hold
6. Private Detective -> just started
7. Journalist -> just started
8. Keira and Megan - on hold

What the hell!! Dev, since you waste 6-7 months per update, at least focus on the various subplots first, close them, then go on with the main plot.
And also, for fuck's sake, the "submission" doesn't mean free violence or humiliation!
 
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Mookys

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I have mixed feelings with this dev..... I mean, barely 2 updates a year and each update keeps adding subplots without closing anyone first..... the only subplot closed has been the one with Eric, but the closure is rushed.
So far we have:

1. Sandra's bullies -> on hold
2. Isabella cultists -> on hold
3. Eric -> rushed ending
4. Nicole blackmail -> Half closed, half on hold
5. Chief of police -> on hold
6. Private Detective -> just started
7. Journalist -> just started
8. Keira and Megan - on hold

What the hell!! Dev, since you waste 6-7 months per update, at least focus on the various subplots first, close them, then go on with the main plot.
Maybe that's one of the reasons why the MC is always in a bad mood and angry. :LOL:
 
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I have mixed feelings with this dev..... I mean, barely 2 updates a year and each update keeps adding subplots without closing anyone first..... the only subplot closed has been the one with Eric, but the closure is rushed.
So far we have:

1. Sandra's bullies -> on hold
2. Isabella cultists -> on hold
3. Eric -> rushed ending
4. Nicole blackmail -> Half closed, half on hold
5. Chief of police -> on hold
6. Private Detective -> just started
7. Journalist -> just started
8. Keira and Megan - on hold

What the hell!! Dev, since you waste 6-7 months per update, at least focus on the various subplots first, close them, then go on with the main plot.
Nicole's case can be closed if you choose it...
 

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Dev news #3 - 0.70
Agora mesmo

Hello everyone,

As promised last time, I have some new images and information about what to expect in the next update. There's something for those of you who are fans of Clara and Kelly. Kelly is back in town, but she won't immediately dive into the main plot. She'll have some time in the next update, but her role will expand more on day 17.

Regarding the images, since my last update, I've managed to render around 400 new images, bringing the total to approximately 1000 images, covering about 50% of the script. I'm aiming for 40 images per day, and so far, I've been able to stick to that plan.

Thank you for your support, and I hope you enjoy the upcoming updates.

Best regards,
50% of the script, so basically we will have to wait another 3 months minimum..... I smell the birth of a new scammer.....
Is there anyone who can talk to the dev directly? Both on Parteon and Discord he doesn't give a shit about his followers.....
 
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Skyangel007

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50% of the script, so basically we will have to wait another 3 months minimum..... I smell the birth of a new scammer.....
Is there anyone who can talk to the dev directly? Both on Parteon and Discord he doesn't give a shit about his followers.....
LoL sure dude, I've been following this project since the start and the Dev has been doing releasing on the regular. He even did a rework of the game. No scams here. Maybe burnout, but no, definitely not a scam with the amount of releases he's done.

Edit: Not every developer is an Oceanlab or a Dr Pinkcake that needs 6-9 months and comes out with S tier product, those are the exception not the rule. As long as it doesn't devolve into a situation like with ICSTOR I don't think we have anything to worry about with this Dev.
 
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OnlyWorthyDevsMakeMoney

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LoL sure dude, I've been following this project since the start and the Dev has been doing releasing on the regular. He even did a rework of the game. No scams here. Maybe burnout, but no, definitely not a scam with the amount of releases he's done.

Edit: Not every developer is an Oceanlab or a Dr Pinkcake that needs 6-9 months and comes out with S tier product, those are the exception not the rule. As long as it doesn't devolve into a situation like with ICSTOR I don't think we have anything to worry about with this Dev.
Ok, fine, but at least the dev should pay attention to the suggestions made, mainly regarding the submission paths, I mean, "submission" doesn't mean "free violence and degrading humiliation", the MC could assert his dominance while still being a nice and good man.
 

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Ok, fine, but at least the dev should pay attention to the suggestions made, mainly regarding the submission paths, I mean, "submission" doesn't mean "free violence and degrading humiliation", the MC could assert his dominance while still being a nice and good man.
go to patreon and tell to dev that, no need to become supporter.
 
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