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Hey, Karabinek, Great job on this. You missed a tag that some are going to be interested in. 'Virgin'. At least one girl, Lisa is a virgin. This was a solid release. It took me quite awhile to get through it. A few people saying it was short, it wasn't. Unless people are using skip to get through the entire story.

Keep up the great work and if the next release is just as long or longer and jam packed with quality content, like this first release, I'll be dropping some $ in your pocket.
 
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Karabinek

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Thank you all for all your feedback. Your opinions are important to me. I am glad that some of you liked the game already at this stage. I removed the note that the game will be hidden behind a paywall. That's not what I meant by writing this, so in order to avoid any doubts I decided to delete this line.

I also added "Romance" tag.

Lesbian path for Lisa is optional and you can completely avoid it by choosing the right answers.

As for updates, I will try to update the game once every two months. Version 0.2 will probably be released sooner, but this is because I'm already halfway through it. Each update will consist of two days, at least for a while. This may change as the action develops.
 

Karabinek

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I've found an issue. After the Linda debacle in the finance room you speak with Clara and Sandra. if you choose to Punish or warn Clara after this and the scene ends, you can no longer Access the Clara Stats profile, it provides an error that cannot be ignored (hit ignore it stays up) and roll back rolls you back to the beginning of the new scene
edit: it reads An exception has occurred
couldn't find file "images/cropped/stats_clara_topless.png
Thanks for pointing it out. I will fix that.
 
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Karabinek

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Great game so far.. Its a shame thats it gonna be after a pay wall..
It won't be. My bad that I wrote that, but as I mentioned above it was supposed to mean something else. So since it made people confused I removed that. English is not my native language and I can't ask my dear proofreader to check everything I write in English. :)

Hey, Karabinek, Great job on this. You missed a tag that some are going to be interested in. 'Virgin'. At least one girl, Lisa is a virgin. This was a solid release. It took me quite awhile to get through it. A few people saying it was short, it wasn't. Unless people are using skip to get through the entire story.

Keep up the great work and if the next release is just as long or longer and jam packed with quality content, like this first release, I'll be dropping some $ in your pocket.
"Virgin" tag is added. Thank you for pointing it out.
 

Thjis

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Think I will wait a few updates and if it is still playable/available then try it, the description is intriguing and I can see myself going back to patronage for the game. It has been a while since I have supported a game, the $100s of dollars I put out for Dark Silver has really made me gunshy about significant support. I have limited myself to short term, small donations. Even then you quickly exceed the value of the game and so often I end up feeling like the developer is taking advantage of our generosity.
 

sirvac

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I would like to ask why does Mary and Khloe have "stranger" relationship stat with MC if the bio and story indicates the three of them are in a relationship?
 

Karabinek

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I would like to ask why does Mary and Khloe have "stranger" relationship stat with MC if the bio and story indicates the three of them are in a relationship?
This is something Im still working on and this is going to be fixed in next update. Relationship something new I added shortly before the release and it's not in its final form. I'm sorry for that.
 

SS33 Real 1

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Now This is what a Version 0.1 Should Be Like Plenty of content love it and not like other devs 50 Renders takes 5 min to finish and calls it a day cuz he is still not sure if people will like his game. Gotta be confident that your vn will do good and people will like it.
 
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sirvac

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This is something Im still working on and this is going to be fixed in next update. Relationship something new I added shortly before the release and it's not in its final form. I'm sorry for that.
Nothing to be sorry about, just my curiousity :)
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Nothing to be sorry about, just my curiousity :)
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I didnt want to throw there all possible tags just to attract people and dissapoint them shortly after. Some girls will have their slavery path. Clara is the first one you can start working on. I will add more tags when the relevant content will be added to the game. But to answer your question Im thinking about some sort of BDSM. It depends strongly on how Im going to feel about that while Im writing those scenes. BDSM is not my fetish so I don't want to put into the game something Im not happy about.
 
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SecretSal

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Hol' up. How come Sandra is called Mrs White and has a ring on da ting, even though she's never been married?

Otherwise, seems like a promising 'justice porn' romp. Of course, everyone's reactions are dialed up to 11, but I guess that's part of the charm.
 

Kurōzu

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The game looks promising! I'll try it out ASAP

Any chance for a Mac version down the line?
If there isn't an official MAC port you can try this:
download the pc version, download and then put the game folder in the Ren'Py folder you'll find in Applications after installing, then open the Ren'Py app, choose the game from the list and click on Launch Project :)
 

gokitan

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For being a first project it shows potential, really long playthrough for a first release. Dev's doing a good job so far.
 

CorujaCega

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Ok for a first release........damn this was really good i am shock to see that much content from a first release
 
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