Honestly, I'm gonna say upfront, this is laughably generic and the only difference between the women, is what magnitude the sadness in their backstory is, and if their boobs are large or obscenely large. And it's pretty funny reading through the story, the writer didn't even think of what MC or his dead dad's businesses even were until halfway through the current end of content. If I read another generic business term, I might scream. And I think a tag is missing from this one, inflation, because there is no
DISCERNABLE REASON FOR THIS TO BE 20GB. I CHECKED. I downloaded BOTH versions and looked at them side by side. There is no difference in quality. And that is just wasted space, time, and effort for the Dev. Not to mention most of the lengthy dialog is MC or the love interests rehashing every minute detail of the plot so far to another character. So you the reader have to hear the same few sob stories over and over and OVER. And the biggest joke is the "uncompressed" version is still broken, the second scene with chloe has something missing and just shows an error for the whole scene. And the phone is useless, you get ALL of the wallpapers super early on and there is no reason to click the phone after a certain point.
So here's the story, MC returns home after being away for 10 years and all of his adoptive sisters now want to have sex with him. You know, the plot to EVERY GENERIC GAME ON THIS SITE. I will say, MC is already in a polyamorous relationship with two girls so I guess if nothing else, he's not some innocent pseudo shota insert. Anyway, step mom is evil literally for evil's sake. All of her actions still have yet to be "justified" as there are about three interactions with her up to the end of current content. She kicked MC out of the house and brainwashed his dad, I guess? Still no answers. MC was given control of all his dad's assets after he died and is helping out the step sisters while he's in town. The youngest daughter has no issues besides loving MC. Middle sister is getting blackmailed, and oldest is in an abusive relationship.
The main plot is supposed to be MC taking revenge on the step mom, but he just inserts himself in everyone's issues even without player's choice. Then at one point HE STARTS COMPLAINING ABOUT IT?! No, he for some reason has infinite wealth and was throwing money at everyone's issues he can't bitch about helping people when he offered. And all the plot points happen for one scene and then nothing comes up about it later. As most of the later "problems" are just the girls coming to terms entering a polyamorous relationship with MC. And even then none of them care.
I won't waste time retelling the sisters' stories. The characters that I'm gonna complain about for a paragraph are Sandra and Emily. Everything surrounding their stories is complete crap. And I think it's pretty representative about how I feel about most of the writing in this. Sandra is MC's lawyer, and every single time they interact all MC does is stare at her and internally monologue about how hot she is. Aka ogling and lusting after her. And sandra talks to emily about it saying "He was staring at me all day, he wasn't insistent, but determined and decisive." THAT'S LITERALLY THE SAME THING. She has no reason to like MC at all and her sob story makes no sense either. A video of a jock forcing himself on her made her get bullied? Sure. Also, she's always wearing a wedding ring, what's up with that? Then there's Emily she knew MC in high school, and later, suddenly "I was so in love with you" type stuff. Then right after that Emily and Sandra say they had feelings for each other the whole time? When? Was it between Emily telling Sandra to fuck her boss, or when Emily was flirting with MC? Because I missed any chemistry they had. Because they spring that on MC before completely succumbing to his "relationship."
That is the issue with this story. Pacing and focus. Every character already loves MC but they wanna take it slow but want everything to happen. And it tries to act like a slow burn with Jennifer(the one with the biggest boobs) to make it seem like she's worth chasing, but right after getting sexually assaulted almost she jumps at MC. Both her and her friend Jill, by the way. Like I get it, dumb porn game, but there's TWENTY THREE women in this (so far) and everything's spread so thin on top of giving the facade of being deep just by making all the characters sad. It's padded out with repetition and over abundant coincidences that make it so there's no real problem for MC. So there's no stakes. He gets mad because he helps people, which IS LITERALLY HIS JOB. And none of the characters have a personality, I cannot name ONE personality trait of anyone outside of maybe Mary and Khloe.
All in all, the central plot takes a backseat for most of this. The characters are boring. The size is padded out for no good reason. And the translation is almost good. At first I thought it was written by someone in english but there are some glaring grammar and spelling issues that show up later. You know after the dev stopped letting the editor take their money so they can render images that take up more hard drive space. But for whatever reason I am sort of interested in the story, I guess. Middle of the road renpy game, and I'll close this out with a message to others that might review this or other games:
JUST BECAUSE THE MODELS LOOK GOOD, DOES NOT MEAN IT'S WORTH 5 STARS. THEY'RE ALL THE SAME FLIPPED DAZ MODELS.