VN Ren'Py Rhinestone Gentleman's Club [Ch.1 Day3 Beta] [AeonPlus]

[YogSothoth1982]

Hey, it is possible to be both harem and sharing at the same time.

For example, the following approach might be a lot of fun:

1) My Harem is my sisters and their friends, hands off, they are all mine. I might let them fool around with each other if it pleases me, but they are mine.

The harem girls belong to the MC and no one else, and that includes the other harem girls.

2) My escort business is not my harem, it's just business. They aren't LIs, they are just girls who bring in my income (though I might tap that well myself from time to time).

I'm not at all interested in what happens in the brothel. In my opinion, it's best to hire someone to manage it and never set foot in it. And that includes not having sex with any of the workers. But I guess part of the game is maintaining the gentlemen's club. So I'll be content with keeping the MC from having any kind of romantic or sexual relationship with the escorts (or strippers); the strictly professional relationship is more than enough for me.

And if one of them turns out to be the classic "Hooker with a Heart of Gold" and worth my affection, I can transfer her to my harem and then she will be all mine, off limits, etc.

I don't find any reason to want her to be part of the harem.

How exactly is this going to work when the MC builds a harem of escorts
They are LI's, or so i assume, as they will be part of the harem and well...them being prostitutes.

I hope making stripers part of your harem is avoidable.

ad1. After this release all scenes/kink will be avoidable not skipable. I added skip to lesbian scene because it was too late to remade this scene completely.

Will that also include the scenes that are now skippable and non-avoidable?

ad.2 Yes they are gonna be and yes all scenes in future will be avoidable. As for mom, you need to wait if i tell you its gonna be to big spoiler.

If the mother has been cheating on the father and we have to watch her having sex with another guy, I can answer the question: NO. Or even if she is, I'm not interested.

There will be no sharing my friend.

Well, I don't know how that's compatible with the harem of escorts that appears in the game's description.

 

[SpyderArachnid]

Honestly, not that bad. Interesting start at least.

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But yeah, the writing could use a little clean up and proofreading, but otherwise it's not all that bad. Can see this thread has already got into some of the more controversial stuff, so not going to comment on that (enough has been said already). Besides that though, will check out how this goes at least. Best of luck with this and thanks.

 

[AeonPLUS]

Hey, it is possible to be both harem and sharing at the same time.

For example, the following approach might be a lot of fun:

1) My Harem is my sisters and their friends, hands off, they are all mine. I might let them fool around with each other if it pleases me, but they are mine.

2) My escort business is not my harem, it's just business. They aren't LIs, they are just girls who bring in my income (though I might tap that well myself from time to time). And if one of them turns out to be the classic "Hooker with a Heart of Gold" and worth my affection, I can transfer her to my harem and then she will be all mine, off limits, etc.

I don't know why people need to be so hardass about this stuff. It's just a story, it's just pixels. Have fun with it, don't get all upset and impose rigid red lines that limit the storytelling.

Yes, you got it exactly!!!!!!!!!!!!
Hope you enjoy future installments, because you are our target audience.

 

[AeonPLUS]

Just played through it and I have to say, I like it!

The only real problem I've seen was, that after I rejected Toni the MC still talked as if he just fucked her.
I'm kinda interested if his virginity will be brought up again or if the game now sees him as a non-virgin even though i rejected her.

Also as the comment above said the girls seem really nonchalant about the death of the father, especially Brandi but maybe that will be brought up the next Update.

I think this was a very good start for a game, I really liked the sisters and the friends, Vicky is really hot too.
The Bunny girls I'm on the fence, they don't look bad but if they were fucking the dad it really is a turn-off for me and this was held very vague.

Thx for the share and all the best for the future of this game!

Yeah, kind of a flub with the Toni talk, I will admit. Will be fixed on the update.
Stay tuned, you may like where we're going with it.

 

[AeonPLUS]

AeonPLUS

Not being sarcastic or a smartass at all - but if you want to appeal to harem players and get some of them dollars, you're going to have to enable making this club something like a Maid's Cafe where the people come in for eye candy and nothing else. Harem folks don't like sharing or selling the girls, it's not something that appeals to us. Just a friendly heads up and of course I endorse folks making the game they want to make.

Just clearly label the game so folks who aren't interested can avoid it.

Sincerely,

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I'm not understanding why they have to be whores if they work in a strip club. In America, you're not even supposed to touch the girls at a Gentlemen's Club. So I don't see the distinction between that and a Maid's Cafe in terms of whoredom.

 

[AeonPLUS]

How exactly is this going to work when the MC builds a harem of escorts
They are LI's, or so i assume, as they will be part of the harem and well...them being prostitutes.

Maybe we misspoke on the "harem of escorts" line, as that doesn't really make sense. Will change it in the synopsis.
More like you're assembling a harem, and also building a stable of hoes. Mutually exclusive.

 

[AeonPLUS]

Honestly, not that bad. Interesting start at least.

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But yeah, the writing could use a little clean up and proofreading, but otherwise it's not all that bad. Can see this thread has already got into some of the more controversial stuff, so not going to comment on that (enough has been said already). Besides that though, will check out how this goes at least. Best of luck with this and thanks.

Thanks for the review!
I am the writer, and I am an American with a degree in English. So, no bad translations here.
Gotten a lot of heat about the characters "not giving a shit" about their parents (including from the game's Coder). I can say from experience, grief comes in different ways, and it takes a minute to process. I also didn't want complaints about so much crying in a porn game. (And there are several scenes of crying!!!!)
But you're right about the Brandi scene. That one is coming. It's still a couple days to the funeral at the end point.

 

[Soulpuppet]

Yes, you got it exactly!!!!!!!!!!!!
Hope you enjoy future installments, because you are our target audience.

Glad I read this. I have no interest in this type of content. You aren't going to have harem fans with this. The guy you quoted likes sharing/NTR. So you're not going to get harem fans behind you. Anyways. Good Luck with your game.

 

[sigvar]

Maybe we misspoke on the "harem of escorts" line, as that doesn't really make sense. Will change it in the synopsis.
More like you're assembling a harem, and also building a stable of hoes. Mutually exclusive.

If your story sticks to this and also lets us avoid the stable of hoes, that would be perfect and may not drive off the Harem lovers. A majority will find the stable of hoes undesirable and not want to engage with them at all in the first place, so making that component optional would be perfect.

That being said, I don't know if the NTR crowd would like either of those options and if the stable isn't avoidable the Harem crowd won't like it either. Be interesting to see what your next version does to handle this dichotomy.

 

[rockstarporno69]

Please release a Android version

 

[Cajun Fox]

Thanks

Good luck with yur game

 

[Jdubya]

AeonPLUS This was a pleasant surprise. More and much better content than I was expecting given how new the game is and that I assume you're a first time developer. Nicely done.

As far as the sharing/pimping and the "NTR", it kills me to see games with any sort of non-vanilla content get brigraded like this. Tell the story you want to tell. I've seen so many promising games get watered down into some generic, half-baked harem fantasy because of that pressure, and then watched the developer lose interest because it's no longer the story they wanted to tell - and either abandon the game completely or rush into some hurried, unsatisfying ending - just so they can be done with it.

Keep making the game you want to make, and people who enjoy those games will find you. Speaking for myself, I'll be watching the development of your game closely, and if the updates are consistent and relatively substantial, I'll be subscribing in the future. There are a million virgin waifu harem games out there. You turning this into # 1000001 isn't going to do you or your Patreon any favors.

Just my 2 cents

 

[YogSothoth1982]

Maybe we misspoke on the "harem of escorts" line, as that doesn't really make sense. Will change it in the synopsis.
More like you're assembling a harem, and also building a stable of hoes. Mutually exclusive.

I see the "harem of escorts" has disappeared from the game's synopsis.

On the other hand, from what you said, I guess we'll be able to avoid all the MC's sex scenes with the whores/escorts/strippers, so I guess it will also be possible to avoid a romantic relationship with them (if there was any intention to do something like that) Otherwise, if we have to manage the club, then fine, I'll do it. But maintaining a strictly professional relationship with the employees.

 

[Papy.ion6984]

Nice, TY

 

[AeonPLUS]

AeonPLUS This was a pleasant surprise. More and much better content than I was expecting given how new the game is and that I assume you're a first time developer. Nicely done.

As far as the sharing/pimping and the "NTR", it kills me to see games with any sort of non-vanilla content get brigraded like this. Tell the story you want to tell. I've seen so many promising games get watered down into some generic, half-baked harem fantasy because of that pressure, and then watched the developer lose interest because it's no longer the story they wanted to tell - and either abandon the game completely or rush into some hurried, unsatisfying ending - just so they can be done with it.

Keep making the game you want to make, and people who enjoy those games will find you. Speaking for myself, I'll be watching the development of your game closely, and if the updates are consistent and relatively substantial, I'll be subscribing in the future. There are a million virgin waifu harem games out there. You turning this into # 1000001 isn't going to do you or your Patreon any favors.

Just my 2 cents

Very much appreciated. I am new to this, and this is the exact type of encouragement I need. It's tough out there...

 

[Fapmaister]

is there a patch to remove step incest bs and put real incest?

 

[PeSSimao]

Fix for gallery and dialogues for Toni scenes

Instructions:
1. Download
2. unpack into Rhinestone... folder
3.1 On windows replace
3.2 On Mac merge
4. You are good to go.

Please release a Android version

Hey im coder in this project and ive never done anything on android, so for this version there is no way for me to do this, first i will have to bring some testers to make android port.
Maybe in future who knows, you can ask some modder to make it, we dont have problem with this or make it by yourself using JoiPlay i'm sure you will find instruction pretty easy.

You can make request in proper section in f95 for moders to create one, we can't do this.

 

[Edhinor]

Glad I read this. I have no interest in this type of content. You aren't going to have harem fans with this. The guy you quoted likes sharing/NTR. So you're not going to get harem fans behind you. Anyways. Good Luck with your game.

You don't speak for everyone. I love harem games, I play a lot of them that don't have NTR/NTS and love them. I am a Harem fan. I do not play any games with hard NTR because I am not into the humiliation. But I also love NTS. We are out there. Some of you can't understand that your personal perception of a kink is not the only one.

You are free to speak for yourself, but do not speak for everyone else.

 

[Edhinor]

AeonPLUS This was a pleasant surprise. More and much better content than I was expecting given how new the game is and that I assume you're a first time developer. Nicely done.

As far as the sharing/pimping and the "NTR", it kills me to see games with any sort of non-vanilla content get brigraded like this. Tell the story you want to tell. I've seen so many promising games get watered down into some generic, half-baked harem fantasy because of that pressure, and then watched the developer lose interest because it's no longer the story they wanted to tell - and either abandon the game completely or rush into some hurried, unsatisfying ending - just so they can be done with it.

Keep making the game you want to make, and people who enjoy those games will find you. Speaking for myself, I'll be watching the development of your game closely, and if the updates are consistent and relatively substantial, I'll be subscribing in the future. There are a million virgin waifu harem games out there. You turning this into # 1000001 isn't going to do you or your Patreon any favors.

Just my 2 cents

Amen brother, I was going to write my own version of this, but you said it perfectly

 

[TKdropemoff]

Hey, it is possible to be both harem and sharing at the same time.

For example, the following approach might be a lot of fun:

1) My Harem is my sisters and their friends, hands off, they are all mine. I might let them fool around with each other if it pleases me, but they are mine.

2) My escort business is not my harem, it's just business. They aren't LIs, they are just girls who bring in my income (though I might tap that well myself from time to time). And if one of them turns out to be the classic "Hooker with a Heart of Gold" and worth my affection, I can transfer her to my harem and then she will be all mine, off limits, etc.

I don't know why people need to be so hardass about this stuff. It's just a story, it's just pixels. Have fun with it, don't get all upset and impose rigid red lines that limit the storytelling.