Okay so this ain't bad.
The renders are nice, the setup is cool and the H-scenes could be really hot, but right now they are more frustrating than anything since there are so few of them and most only talk about what could be there. Literally! Michelle basically says "Maybe in the next update." at some point that's probably a placeholder text that's been left in from a previous version and our character talks about "Making her his dirty bitch.", but all we get is a wank while she sleeps and a HJ/BJ later.
Maybe in a later more major version when actual sexy time is involved it'll be better. We'll see.
The writing isn't BAD per se, but the grammar sure is. By now this is kinda expected since so many non-English speakers are forced into making everything in English and I don't even care about it, but I wish devs would employ either some kind of an aid in translation or at least giving players the option to report errors easily... Maybe one day.
I don't know if all the "Michelle" and "She just calls me brother for no reason." stuff is cuz of Patreon or not, but it's kind of a mess since Michelle's been called mom several times if I recall correctly and I just wish it either went the full extent and claim that they are just roommates or had the naming system from A Town Uncovered where the game unlocks the "incest theme" if the characters are names properly or even just Zombie's Retreat.
Based on what others have said the grind was unbearable before and if the upgrade requirements were the same in the previous versions, just with 1/10th of the energy gain I can totally agree. Now that the game has a "add free energy" button built in it's pretty bearable, but that just shows how pointless or at least poorly implemented the whole thing is. This either needs more variety in actions or an even bigger bump in energy gain.
Now I will say that despite what I said at the beginning I'm not really keen on this one, but that's mainly cuz of personal taste.
First of all this is a static, "looping" story that builds on grind that I don't really like and there's a whole LOT of that out there already, but most of them are at a better balance by now so that might just take time.
The other thing is that I prefer MC tuff to be more like a power that can be used "freely" and not just be a requirement for a set event and even then not as a "Increase corruption by 1." type thing. Think Superpowered but without the excessive grind, less hoops to get people and more varied actions with MC.