Jestur I don't know if you'll see this. Part of me hope you don't because that will mean you never returned. Just write your story the way you want to write it. If I llike it, I'll continue to play it. If I don't I won't. But I won't start telling you that you're doing it wrong just because your story doesn't jive with my pre-conceived notions of what a story should or should not be. If I actually thought I had a better idea of how to tell a story, I would write and make my own VN.
Most of all, just...stay away from the shitshow this thread has become. I don't want the half-witted opinions in this dumpster fire to be the reason you (like so many other promising devs) stop developing.