MrLKX
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- Jan 12, 2021
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Regarding the patch: I think I just came across a small error: At the breakfast table with Darci and Tiffany, it would be the following passage:
(I can't even imagine how she feels. Not only did she lose her sister Jenny, she was also friends with my father. They worked in the same department.)
This can be interpreted in two directions: Either that the patch did not work properly here, or that Jenny and MC's father were friends. However, the sentence structure makes little sense to me, if that is the case. More elegant would be: Not only did she lose her sister Jenny, but also my father. Dad and Jenny were both friends and worked in the same department.
But well, that could also be nagging on a high level, however, I will continue to keep my eyes open. Otherwise, the remaster looks very good and the new pace is also absolutely appropriate and fits the characters so far.
(I can't even imagine how she feels. Not only did she lose her sister Jenny, she was also friends with my father. They worked in the same department.)
This can be interpreted in two directions: Either that the patch did not work properly here, or that Jenny and MC's father were friends. However, the sentence structure makes little sense to me, if that is the case. More elegant would be: Not only did she lose her sister Jenny, but also my father. Dad and Jenny were both friends and worked in the same department.
But well, that could also be nagging on a high level, however, I will continue to keep my eyes open. Otherwise, the remaster looks very good and the new pace is also absolutely appropriate and fits the characters so far.
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