VN Ren'Py Rise From The Ashes [Ch.1 Bugfix] [Sihirbaz_arttzz]

[FilthySticker]

The game does look good, the writting is not that bad even though there are some mistakes, also the breasts look a bit deformed in the beginning with the bunny outfits maybe look into that too !
(exemple of mistakes: "mc says jake house" a few dialogs later it is changed to "john house")

There is also an error when talking with kylie it's missing an image and dialog !
Another error on the fall scene where the bully asks "who's fault was it ?" if you pick "my fault !" mc will say both choice lines ("my fault and your fault line") !

This game well planned will be great ! good luck for your project !

 

[labol]

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[ppbeater]

the bullied mc rises, aw shit here we go again

 

[Gexiz]

Omg

 

[Reniere]

Future tags ?

 

[Cajun Fox]

Thanks for the upload.

 

[Sihirbaz_arttzz]

The game does look good, the writting is not that bad even though there are some mistakes, also the breasts look a bit deformed in the beginning with the bunny outfits maybe look into that too !
(exemple of mistakes: "mc says jake house" a few dialogs later it is changed to "john house")

There is also an error when talking with kylie it's missing an image and dialog !
Another error on the fall scene where the bully asks "who's fault was it ?" if you pick "my fault !" mc will say both choice lines ("my fault and your fault line") !

This game well planned will be great ! good luck for your project !

Thank you very much. I will make sure to fix these bugs right away.

 

[MagicMan753]

It seems solid. A lot of the girls look amazing. And I know we will probably go through a transformation, but the biggest want, is height. We are just way too short right now. The end of update, is most likely are teased final form, which is good, but I don't want that to be too far away. I can handle playing as this mc for a bit, but the I just want a quick growth at least, cause being short just gives shota vibes, which I don't like those type of games.

But other than that, is solid beside my biggest issue.

 

[ahxjosu]

harem?

 

[Sihirbaz_arttzz]

You don't need to say more. I'd advise to add a tag that hints at them. Maybe the "graphic violence" one or the "combat" one or both and if superpowers are planeed in anyway add that one too IG. Bc if not dor my curiosity I'd have just ignered the game thinking it'd be yet another slop.

I'll wait for a few more updated b4 actually giving this one a try. I'll add it to my watchlist for now.
GL dev/s






THX

Thank you! I'll add the tags as well

 

[por12]

leave the mc a dwarf and add a shota tag,trust me it will be better

 

[Sihirbaz_arttzz]

It seems solid. A lot of the girls look amazing. And I know we will probably go through a transformation, but the biggest want, is height. We are just way too short right now. The end of update, is most likely are teased final form, which is good, but I don't want that to be too far away. I can handle playing as this mc for a bit, but the I just want a quick growth at least, cause being short just gives shota vibes, which I don't like those type of games.

But other than that, is solid beside my biggest issue.

Hi, I totally get what you mean. The MC will undergo a change in Chapter 2. So, it won't take long for the character to change.

 

[ahxjosu]

wel?

 

[MixQQ]

So, its basically a loser MC and for some reason some very beautiful girls start to like him?

They already "like" him

MC looks like max 12-14 years. He's a fucking teenager. Mentally a loser and scene when girl defend him and fight bullies was embarrassing.

First he should go to therapy instead of the gym. He need to be a winner in his head first

 

[grossegon]

thx

 

[3DSunny]

It's looks good! Is this honey select 1 or 2?

 

[Sihirbaz_arttzz]

It's looks good! Is this honey select 1 or 2?

Thank u! Honey Select 2.

 

[Poke-ladd]

looks hot

 

[CinderFall201]

Future tags and harem or no? Just out of curiosity sake- keep up the amazing work!!!

 

[J0K3RXXX]

It looks promising.
Thanks for the share.