During the first corruption scene for Rina, the cum splatters on Misaki's thigh looks a little stretched out (could just be me). Misaki's hair and wings are giving the usual odd artifacting with the shadows with how they clip through each other. When Rina is giving a boobjob, Misaki mixes 'g' and 'n' up for "getting" when she noting about the incoming ejaculation. When Misaki is describing the game of letting Yukako and Rina "escape" their cells, she replaces 't' with 'r' for "out." During Rina's level 1 "escape" attempt she almost had no spelling mistakes until she replaced 'i' with 'o' for "is" when being relieved about being back in her cell. When talking to Yukako for training at level 1, she has an additional 'e' in "powers," and when giving her the chance to go to Holmdow, a small grammar mistake is made where the MC says "You will going there supervised," which should be "You will be supervised." When discussing Yukako's second corruption scheme with Misaki, 'f' and 'e' are switched in "belief," and while Yukako is wallowing in her thoughts about the situation she is in a letter a letter is capitalized in this "Divines Mean," which would be "Divines mean" as "means" is not a name in this context. When upgrading Yukako's corruption level to 2, Misaki replaces 't' with 'r' for "cute." When upgrading Rina's corruption level to 2, Misaki misses a 'b' in "problem" when stating how Rina would suck the MC's cock. During Yukako's level 2 training discussion the MC is missing an 'a' in "really" when noting Yukako's enjoyment of sucking cock, and when the the priest calls out you Yukako during her priestess duty, he doesn't capitalize the first letter of her name. When talking to Rina in her cell there is an odd jumbled statement after admitting how good she feels serving the MC; "I'll never goin you," a lot of work on this one is going to be needed. During Rina's corruption level 2 blowjob scene she is missing an 'l' in "shouldn't" when thinking she should deepthroat his cock, and when she is "aiding" the rebels she has "every" and "one" as separate words. When discussing Rina's next corruption scheme with Misaki, an 'i' replaces a 'e' in "execute." During Rina's corruption level 2 "escape" scene, "both" should probably be "either," a "soon" I believe has its 's' replaced with an 'e' (I think that was the case, I wound up to the next text box when I noticed it), when taunting about possibly feeling it (given her state of mind it is obvious she is) she has a rough capital "I" between "Maybe" and "it." During Yakuko and Rina's double "escape" scene, Rina has another rough capital "I" mid sentence between "but" and "there's" when scoffing at the game, and she has a missing apostrophe in "Let's" resulting in "Lets" when calling to Yukako after the MC leaves from telling them the conditions, when Rina laments not resisting the lust she has a out of place 'n' at the end of "should," and when doing a double boobjob Rina has replaced an 'i' with an 'o' in "this" when telling Yukako to focus on getting it over with, and she also replaces an 's' with a 't' in "so" when talking dirty about how entranced Yukako is in the MC's cock, a minor nitpick during the scene I have is that the initial ejaculation feels a bit subdued. During the corruption upgrade for Yukako to 3, I can't shake the feeling that her nun cap looks like it is made out of playdough (if that is still a thing), and her stockings shine like they are made out of latex, even though for that kind of outfit it would be a silk type of material, when Misaki ask "How does it feel?!", the 'w' in "How" is replaced by a 'e.' During Rina's corruption upgrade to level 3, there is a missing apostrophe for "T-there's" when being shocked at the clothes she is being told to wear, there is a rough "do" in the sentence about her cooperating, also there is no need for the hyphen between the two 'o' in "cooperate," to many "me"s in this sentence; "For me to make me admit that making your big and hard cock feel really good makes me feel good?", remove the "make me" from the sentence, possibly adding a comma between "good" and "makes" might make the sentence sound better as well. When Rina is straddling the MC for the first time, I noticed that a bit of Rina's right thigh and Misaki's left thigh are poking through the stockings around the knee, also Misaki's glove sleeve piece is still miss aligned.
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When telling Rina he will "be back when you fail" for her level 3 corruption "escape" attempt, there is an additional "you" between "back" and "when," when she states about her need to cum, there is a missing 'd' in her "need," and she is missing a 't' for her "not" when lamenting about wanting to fight her lust. The level 3 double "escape" scene isn't a good angle to enjoy licking up the MC's cock, though it gets better when they start sucking on his cock. During Yukako's level 3 blowjob training, when admitting to the pleasure of taking the MC's cock there is a missing 'u' replaced by a 'i' in "pleasure," when she starts mindlessly sucking cock there is a missing 'r' in "throat" when she thinks of using it. During Yukako's level 3 sex scene, "priestess" has its 'i' replaced with an 'o' when stating what they do. During Yukako's level 3 priestess duties, the priest is missing an 'e' in "servants" when she admits to him that the Divines aren't helping. During Rina's level 3 strip scene, there is a missing additional 'e' in "see" when she is looking to see if the MC's cock is getting hard. During Rina's level 3 blowjob scene, when claiming about taking MC's cock down to its base for a deepthroat there is a missing 'h' in "his." During Rina's level 3 sex scene, 'i' and 'o' are switched in "avoid" when she is thinking about how she should feel, after being compliment for putting the outfit on, there is a 't' in "want" is replaced with a 'd' in wanting to feel better, when commenting on the MC's desire to fuck her, an 'e' has replaced the 'y' in "really," when admitting she would like to go again, a 'l' is missing in "wouldn't." During Rina's "aid" of the rebels scene, there is a misspelled "grateful" as "greatful," and 'n' is replaced with an 'f' for "on" when talking about trying to jump guards. During Yukako's level 4 corruption scheme, MC has an additional 'e' in "rebels" making "rebeles" when telling her the terms of letting her an Romanos go to Telind, and she forgets the last 'o' in Romanos' name creating "Romans" which something completely different, when feeling appreciative to the MC for showing the true, garbage, worth of Romanos and the Divines, there might be a missing "the" between "for" and "people" During Rina's level 4 corruption scheme, there is a missing 'c' for "Once" when describing Rina and Romanos' arrival at Vlester. During Yukako's corruption upgrade to level 4, there is a 'y' replaced by a 'e' in "really" when Misaki comments on about how close Yukako is to fully submitting to the MC, while Rina's begging for cum 'l' and 'a' are mixed in "slave" when Misaki is suggesting giving Rina the cum she desperately wants. I noticed during Rina's corruption level 4 blowjob that her corruption lines are a bit messed up, stretched out around her tits, and disconnected on the seams of her model's joints.
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During Yukako's final corruption scheme, "keys" has an additional 'e' in it creating "keyes" when bringing up that he has them. During Rina's final corruption scheme, the rebel has a 't' replace an 's' when regarding to Romanos' cell key. Also just some usual clipping of hair were it shouldn't go, namely through the model such as their shoulders.
I might have missed some spelling error and what not here for Version 0.1.8 from were I last did my report, but I'm also sleep deprived, and it is already the morning after I judged other games for being in my R-18 drive. A minor Q.L. change I would suggest is having the journal warp be on a quick select key to reduce time wasted going through menus for going through the castle that almost make it equally long to just run to the intended area.
