VN Ren'Py Rock the Rim [S1 Ep.1 P1] [RWA Studios]

[Samothrace73]

I'M DEFINITELY HOOKED!

I can forgive the Brian being misspelled as "Brain" all throughout, my brain can auto correct it anyway. Other than that, such an awesome start dev. For sure adding this one to my watch list.

Also the fact that sex roles are being reversed, males getting referred to as she, and females as he. Seen it a few times already.

 

[Samothrace73]

Not sure how to explain that, talking in 4th person?

 

[Miss Kobayashi's]

the gameplay itself is very good and it's nice to read the musical component is a very pleasant atmosphere of music and plot wonderfully made characters in general very atmospheric and pleasant emotions the game evokes in you that the game further wants to play it

 

[Mementos Mori]

Hahahah oh man "they" merged haha please cmon it was the same dev all along same grammar errors same visual quality what are you trying to pull no idea ....only people that don't wanna see would believe in this i mean the quality of the visuals is all the same With Vilkas with these two guys with Lesson In loyalty all the same man same grammar mistakes same "sissy" mc's same visuals and quality i just can't believe that of all of those so called devs none of you knows at least descent English but here you pull up a paragraph properly written in English if only you could to the same thing with the script ...oh man some people ccc

And yet you are here and playing his games for free lol

 

[Myscho]

Reused assets for
Rock the Rim

 

[MiltonPowers]

Reused assets for
Rock the Rim

You know it's the same Dev doing a remake right?

 

[Stifler's Mom]

You know it's the same Dev doing a remake right?

This does not change the fact that it is the same game with new text.

 

[MiltonPowers]

This does not change the fact that it is the same game with new text.

I don't disagree with that. I read the post here and on the other thread, and It looked to me like the poster thought it was someone stealing assets from another dev, just wanted to clarify that it was the same dev doing it.

 

[tmu500]

So, the dev cancelled this game to start a new game. What are the chances they would cancel the new game???!!!

 

[Umariel]

It looks like a fisherman at a new lake, he drops a bait where fish could be,
a sudden ripple in calm waters attracts some of it, but when interest drops,
he uses same bait & rod, just drops it a bit further and looks, what happens.

If he got more renders, while doing so, new game might get a next chapter; until
there's sufficient % of patrons & subscribers, expect more hops and experiments
with niches/plot. Otherwise good renders indeed, too much of monkey jumps tho.

 

[jokesaside1]

No wonders this thread only has 14 pages, my comments criticizing the unnecessary long text and hoping the game won't be abandoned got removed, and I'm probably not the only one getting my comments removed

 

[SonsOfLiberty]

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The thread got moved, so the WT and other things from got deleted, there is the WT mod till the modder adds it back here themself.

 

[SonsOfLiberty]

DarkAssassin

The thread for this game was a rework of the old one, so it got moved into this thread, the old thread was deleted and your PM's are closed so an uploader could not contact you to tell you.

So, you will need to add your mod and post here in this thread. I have your mod saved in my post above and here in case you no longer have it.

Rock the Rim [S1 - Ep.1 Part1] [RWA Studios]

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[duckydoodoo]

okay, am i the only one who felt the dialogue constantly repeated itself. i mean did does anyone else but me think the conversation between characters often said the same thing over and over but in different word. oh and with the worst shittiest prose know to man. like the dev stole haiku's from 1st graders, had them edited into shakespearean sonnets by 5th graders, translated into both french and spanish by 8th graders and then finally translated into english by an esl class on its first day, using both translations, which explains why the characters keep saying the same shit multiple times without saying the same shit. thank you!

i really like the LIs, also i think MC should bang his mom in his dreams. mainly i say that cause i wanted to distract attention from my prior paragraph forcing people to either just ignore it all or go back and re read it to see if any of it is comphrehensible

 

[Skylaroo]

I think my biggest issue with the dialogue is that it's very unnatural. It's like the characters are saying words/sentences but there's no real meaning behind it. The dialogue doesn't sound like what real people would speak about, and it tends to overstay its welcome.

I also think that the basketball part is really bad. Hopefully the band part isn't as bad.

I'll continue on mainly just for the renders.

 

[Crowangel]

RWA Studios 1st point - More save slots please especially if this isnt going to be a harem game.. or even if it is for players/readers to set up route pages fpr saves and enable them to have or save a few key moments for each character if they need to back track at any point.. 2nd Point - While visuals are great, Writing is good BUT It has a lot of what Harrison Ford said about George Lucas' star wars script.. You can write this shit but you cant say it.. The dialogue feels too wordy for realistic conversation most of the time and as a writer myself I know how tempting it is to get creative and expand the narrative with long descriptive sentences to give the full understanding your trying to convey to the audience.. But it doesnt work outside of books.. a visual novel much akin to movies has a different medium and visual style that lessens the need to overly word stuff between characters.. let the visual guide the scene and keep the dialect to common speech rather than entering into dawsons creek-esq over vacabbing the script.. Aside from that looks good and has potential if it sticks around

 

[korochan48]

The dialogue is lifeless they always talk about nonsense feels like they are AI talking to each other

 

[wuhasy]

this game is getting better! I almost thought it's abandoned

 

[Danilo marques]

okay, am i the only one who felt the dialogue constantly repeated itself. i mean did anyone else but me think the conversation between characters often said the same thing over and over but in different words. oh and with the worst shittiest prose know to man. like the dev stole haiku's from 1st graders, had them edited into Shakespearean sonnets by 5th graders, translated into both French and Spanish by 8th graders and then finally translated into English by an ESL class on its first day, using both translations, which explains why the characters keep saying the same shit multiple times without saying the same shit. thank you!

i really like the LIs, also i think MC should bang his mom in his dreams. mainly i say that cause i wanted to distract attention from my prior paragraph forcing people to either just ignore it all or go back and re read it to see if any of it is comphrehensible

Who are the MC's love interests? and this game wasn't a harem? I remember it was lol

 

[VForValhalla]

No wonders this thread only has 14 pages, my comments criticizing the unnecessary long text and hoping the game won't be abandoned got removed, and I'm probably not the only one getting my comments removed

The thread got deleted so every comment exposing the dev and their scammy practices are gone.