I agree with this wholeheartedly, and I'd like to add to that:
The neckline is off centered. She looks like she's slouching, or a hunchback. Place the neck more under the center of her head so it lines up better with her spinal column and center of balance.
Her left thumb looks more like a finger and less like a thumb.
Her fupa is overly detailed in the groin, making her look like she has an enormous camel toe. In contrast, the lack of shading and folds in her shorts makes her pelvis look as smooth as a Lego figure.
Her left eye need to be reduced, and rotated slightly. The bottom eye line needs to line with the right eye.
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