I'm just telling people what to expect when playing this. Not every game has horrible grammar and syntax. If it doesn't matter and you only want to look at pictures then that bullet point will mean nothing. Maybe the bullet point about having very little pictures will be relevant to you.Dude it's amateur porn. Poor grammer, I bet it's not his native tongue, what other languages do you speak? perhaps his grammer is better in that one, most europeans and asians speak and/or understand 2-3 languages other than their own so if you only speak english you should be grateful he bothers with it at all.
The author will do whatever the author wants and I KNOW I have no influence on that. Saying that I am trying to be constructive. The more professional something looks the more attention it will draw and more likely people might donate on patreon. This game is mostly description and when it isn't written well, it's like driving over a speed bump. It's very annoying driving over speed bumps.