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This is easily the best written and animated update yet. Though the comedy sections and the ecchi-anime esque shenanigans were easily the weakest point. It feels out of place in an otherwise serious story. Though, Ilia's comments were, less off-putting for this update.
The voice actors did a good job, nothing I can really critique as that's extremely difficult work. Though I personally prefer to read the dialogue myself as I can do it much faster than it can be spoken aloud. It's nice that it's there, though, and again, they did pretty solid work.
As always though, the animations are the standout. There is one loop that doesn't sync 100% correctly when Yang goes down on Blake. Blake's hair freaks it when the video file ends and restarts. Outside of that minor nitpick, this is easily one of the best animated Koikatsu games I've ever played.
Will certainly be continuing to follow this project with interest.
EDIT: I also made sure to update my review to reflect my more positive outlook on the game. Easily wins my award for "Most Improved" this year.
The voice actors did a good job, nothing I can really critique as that's extremely difficult work. Though I personally prefer to read the dialogue myself as I can do it much faster than it can be spoken aloud. It's nice that it's there, though, and again, they did pretty solid work.
As always though, the animations are the standout. There is one loop that doesn't sync 100% correctly when Yang goes down on Blake. Blake's hair freaks it when the video file ends and restarts. Outside of that minor nitpick, this is easily one of the best animated Koikatsu games I've ever played.
Will certainly be continuing to follow this project with interest.
EDIT: I also made sure to update my review to reflect my more positive outlook on the game. Easily wins my award for "Most Improved" this year.
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Thank you! The update ended up being almost twice as long as the previous update.
If you are on Mac, I have no idea if it works or how to fix it if it doesnt.
If you are on windows, you dont have a proper video codec or yours is out of date or something. The files are webm, so you van try to see why webm videos don't play on your computer.
If you are on android, it should just work. Idk why its not working then. Maybe update your android device?
Well this was an interesting surprise. I do like that we're seeing the corrupted characters acting with intelligence, cunning, and guile, which is rarely done in these sorts of games. I do think it would have been better for Yang's first "session" to be a little more manipulative and underhanded as opposed to Blake just knocking her out and hogtying her naked, but it works, and having Blake talk shit to her during the brainwashing process is great. It'll be interesting to see how they messed with her head, and potentially if Blake can figure out a way to help things along in her own way, both sexually and otherwise. "Just relax and trust me" feels like a great approach for worming things into Yang's head with her guard down, and she can probably exploit what is there of a masochist kink in her own way.
Some criticisms though--Illia's stealth operations feel somewhat weak? I feel like she had 1 too many this update that didn't accomplish much, and the comedic lewd bits from her especially feel out of place. The "Baby" joke between the two White Fang members also felt better as a quick passing thing and not something to spend 20 lines on in a scene I don't really care about. Some of the scenes also dragged more than they should have.
Looking forward to the next update, whenever that comes!
Some criticisms though--Illia's stealth operations feel somewhat weak? I feel like she had 1 too many this update that didn't accomplish much, and the comedic lewd bits from her especially feel out of place. The "Baby" joke between the two White Fang members also felt better as a quick passing thing and not something to spend 20 lines on in a scene I don't really care about. Some of the scenes also dragged more than they should have.
Looking forward to the next update, whenever that comes!
Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed it.
As for your feedback. I did think the update was a little long. But I think I should make something clear. The things I would have shorted or cut would be the sex scenes, not the scenes you are talking about. I left extra sex scenes in for lewd fan service. The I am telling a story that is something more than girl 1 falls, then girl 2 falls, etc. There's an actual plot. It's nothing too absurd. But there is a plot.
I was never going to remove the stealth operations. This was the whole conflict of this update. I want the villains to have something to overcome. I don't want a free victory parade of instant losses or anything too simple. It's just more fun for me.
The first stealth operation has the below part which I really enjoyed making.
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For the comedic bits. Writing fun dialogue is part of my joy in this and Ilia has been and will continue to be a degenerate, quirky woman. That's just how she is in this game. Writing banter between characters is just very enjoyable to me. Since Ilia is the protag and will be very prevalent, I wanted a fun protag to write.
I know some people just want simpler shorter things with more smut that cut to the chase, but I'm writing a smut story with an actual story in it that I enjoy writing. I am sorry if some things are not for everyone, but I do hope it is overall enjoyable.
Thanks for the update - I cant believe I missed this for a whole week. I absolutely loved the patch. I do enjoy the comedy scenes and the infiltration was great, its awesome how Ilia constantly loses focus to peek on hot girls and it's entertaining as fuck. The only bits that dragged a bit for me were the flashbacks but I am pretty sure that's more of my motivation to get back to sexy stuff since I get why they are valuable... there are plenty of "talk to girl then fuck her" games for RWBY that I can appreciate the extra effort.
I dont even need to mention the corruption, nobody does it better than you. I loved every bit of it and not gonna lie, I am glad Yang didnt fall yet since the dynamic of deeply disgusted Blake and clingy Yang was perfect!
Honestly I am super curious which bits of the programming stuck and if she mayhaps starts to enjoy Blake being so domineering in such a degrading way (Personally I would love to see the sort of casual humiliation which we hinted at in their sex scene but I am sure it will slap whichever way you take it).
For the record I enjoy the heck out of your characterization - I love that the people actually have their own identifiable things going on like the somewhat signature "useless lesbian Weiss"
Eagerly awaiting the next one :3
I dont even need to mention the corruption, nobody does it better than you. I loved every bit of it and not gonna lie, I am glad Yang didnt fall yet since the dynamic of deeply disgusted Blake and clingy Yang was perfect!
Honestly I am super curious which bits of the programming stuck and if she mayhaps starts to enjoy Blake being so domineering in such a degrading way (Personally I would love to see the sort of casual humiliation which we hinted at in their sex scene but I am sure it will slap whichever way you take it).
For the record I enjoy the heck out of your characterization - I love that the people actually have their own identifiable things going on like the somewhat signature "useless lesbian Weiss"
Eagerly awaiting the next one :3
Good context and setup makes it hotter. There's plenty of games in which you rush from 1 sex scene to the next with characters that have as much personality as a sexdoll already.
Yup, I know of Tjord's games! Tjord definitely takes inspiration from the same games and doujin I have taken inspiration from. Tjord confirmed this when I asked them one time. Tjord's games are very good. It made me believe western corruption games can actually be good. I have so much respect for Tjord. The corruption plots, and the reveals are well done. I really wasn't seeing that kind of thing ever in the west before Tjord's games. Almost all the good ones like this are untranslated Japanese works. 'Good' as in story driven, slow burn corruption, good engaging plot with big plot twists and reveals, and good post-corruption payoffs. I feel like you really don't see this kind of thing in western stuff. it's a cultural thing I think. The west likes their porn more fun and unserious. Japan is more commonly actual telling stories in their lewds. Also I want all this corruption with Yuri and that is even more niche, so I'm making it myself as a passion~
The biggest inspirations are Japanese works for me. Visual novel and doujin. I did a pretty on the nose reference most people wouldn't get. Schnee Dust Company's test subject project is called "Project Exstia" in my game. This is based on a big corruption game series in Japan called Exstia. Also my soundtrack is royalty free, but heavily references another Japanese eroge called TS Mahou Shoujo Nao series (A game Tjord referenced in the fall series. The first girl corrupted in the fall series is named similarly to the first girl corrupted in Nao, also protag is literally codename Nao in the first game).
Slave oath and barcode scenes are references to both games and doujin. Tjord also did this, but its just popular among corruption works. Torisan's works are a good example. But there's also Satou Kuuki, Miyashirou, InoIno, Cyclone. I do my research~
PS: Special mention to Star Knightess Aura, best western corruption game I've played. You want a slow burn. Now that's slow. It's basically a full persona game. I'll try to make a reference to that sometime in my game.
I dont know how proud of it you can be but this game actually made me watch the show. I cant watch it with a clear mind but i am watching it. Thanks for that and im sorry for some reason?