I don't know why Dispatch would marry Salvor after she got 130km of pirate cocks in her. Also despite being able to echograph and hear everything through Salvor's phone, he's completely oblivious to her acts. Maybe he's actually a cuck and does not mind used goods?
I was not feeling much for either of the girls t b h, shopkeeper is a yandere but she's fairly honest about what she wants I guess.
Despite all that, I'd give it a 7/10 as it is right now, it's hot , but also buggy and the dialogue sometimes is just nonsense/skipped (had to look in translation files to see what was supposed to be said).
Spent 10 hours on this shit damn.