Awesome!
I like your lighthearted short stories (not touching
Kidnap - that shit is too dark for my liking), but (as I already wrote in my review of
Clara's Love Hotel) I really want to see a more fleshed out VN set in the established universe of your characters.
The dream setting would be something along these lines:
A town with three acquainted / neighbouring families...
- Erica & Jerry and their daughters Sasha & Vicky,
- Abigail (& ?) and her (their) twin daughters Mia & Naomi,
- ?? and their daughters Holly & Louise...
...and some townsfolk...
- best friends of the daughters (Rebecca, etc.),
- Jake (the teacher) and at least another (female, lesbian?) teacher,
- a few (but not too many) side characters (mailwoman, yoga instructor, etc.).
The story starts pretty tame with an introduction of the everyday life of the various families and characters (= different subplots).
By and by we learn more about their lewd fantasies (and marital problems)...
- the daughters fantasising about first experiences,
- Jerry fantasising about the mailwoman / one of the female neigbours,
- Jake fantasising about his colleague / Erica,
- the female teacher fantasising about Abigail / her female students,
- the (male) yoga instructor fantasising about his female clients.
Then things start picking up pace...
- the daughters experimenting with their friends,
- Jerry having an affair with the mailwoman,
- Jake having an affair with Erica,
- the yoga instructor seducing his clients...
...and gradually spiral out of control...
- the daughters getting caught by their siblings while sexually experimenting with their friends,
- one of the daughters seducing Jake in exchange for better grades,
- the female teacher dominating Abigail or one of her daughters asking for sexual favours in exchange for better grades...
...until finally...
- the daughters are sexually experimenting with their siblings,
- the daughters learn about their parents' infidelity and start taking advantage of them.
Final scene:
A big summer garden & pool party where all the sexual relationships and cheating gets revealed, but everyone is already too drunk (and horny) to actually care - and the party turns into a massive orgy. The end.
Kidding. On a more serious note:
I personally prefer adult VNs with focus on story rather than lewd scenes - that's why I wouldn't mind if
DumbKoala's next project turned out to be more grounded / realistic than her previous works, but I'm definitely not complaining if this isn't the case.
*sigh* Alright, alright - I admit: Her smexy content is a guilty pleasure of mine. Are you happy now?
