VN Ren'Py Completed Sassy Girl [v1.0.0] [Hematite]

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Sassy Girl [v0.2.13] Unofficial Android Port + KoGa3's WT Mod

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Android Port Updated..
 
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Nice so far.

Definitely needs a proofreader that can fix the pronoun
errors as they are fairly distracting as well as help with the
other story errors.

Surpised at how horrible Karen and Miriam are toward
the MC.

Dorothy was written well so far if the point is for her to
be really stupid. So far I feel really sorry for her.


I think it's interesting, usually the games on here, no matter
what, have me wanting to 'save' the ladies or company right away.
So far there's no attachment to Sassy Girl whatsoever since the MC
is mostly treated like dirt. This seems to be really good storytelling
with that aspect.

Usually the mc should also want to bang all the pretty women right off the
bat but there's a good balance of like/dislike so far as well as pacing. I realize
that will change since it's early, but anyway.....Still doing a really good job so far.


Cheers
 
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Moviebuff3000

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The thing I hate about games like this is if your going to add a Busty Therapist like Carla, make her a LI. Don't add a Busty Therapist and not make her a LI, instead make the Therapist a male because other than that it is a waste of a "lewd scene" for someone that isn't either a LI or a side LI. I see many devs do this they add a lewd scene for a character that isn't even a LI or a side LI and then you don't see that character any more in the game. I like the story even if the MC is a bit whiney. You might want to rethink having Carla as a LI but that is my opinion.
 
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Moviebuff3000 said:
The thing I hate about games like this is if your going to add a Busty Therapist like Carla, make her a LI. Don't add a Busty Therapist and not make her a LI, instead make the Therapist a male because other than that it is a waste of a "lewd scene" for someone that isn't either a LI or a side LI. I see many devs do this they add a lewd scene for a character that isn't even a LI or a side LI and then you don't see that character any more in the game. I like the story even if the MC is a bit whiney. You might want to rethink having Carla as a LI but that is my opinion.
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Hmm,
Well, maybe Busty Carla is a LI but that will be developed in a future chapter.
It does say something which leads to that possibility.


I thought the dialogue would have been different between the
MC and his doctor since they both share similar educational backgrounds
but the MC does come across, as you point out, as being whiny as well as
immature.


Cheers
 
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lunatic707

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the 0.2.15 update is released patreon at 12 octaber and even yesteday dev give a nev update date as first of november
 
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The game is good! but the MC is kinda arrogant and as karen puts it "sexist and misogynistic". Going from his background of psychology, you'll think he would be more open-minded or at least try to be. The girls are amazing tho, and hopefully they can knock some sense into MC.
 
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Forgotted said:
Nice so far.

Definitely needs a proofreader that can fix the pronoun
errors as they are fairly distracting as well as help with the
other story errors.

Surpised at how horrible Karen and Miriam are toward
the MC.

Dorothy was written well so far if the point is for her to
be really stupid. So far I feel really sorry for her.


I think it's interesting, usually the games on here, no matter
what, have me wanting to 'save' the ladies or company right away.
So far there's no attachment to Sassy Girl whatsoever since the MC
is mostly treated like dirt. This seems to be really good storytelling
with that aspect.

Usually the mc should also want to bang all the pretty women right off the
bat but there's a good balance of like/dislike so far as well as pacing. I realize
that will change since it's early, but anyway.....Still doing a really good job so far.


Cheers
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I will volunteer for free. All the MC has to do is PM me. I have a Masters in English/Writing with a Undergraduate in Editing among my other degrees in Chemistry, Geology, and Business Management.
 
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DeliteDouche

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Beatrice's scene > Janine's scene

I hope not participating in hypnotizing and CNC scenes doesn't close her route. Definitely wasn't a fan of this update.
 
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