VN Ren'Py Saving My Childhood Friend [v0.0.3] [LiQiyeDev]

[Hercule_Poirot]

She looks like the yandere type, so I'd rather have her simp all over the black guy and go Lorena Bobbitt on him while the MC goes on his merry way to a happy life.

Spoiler: She looks seconds away from biting his head off

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[loikl]

The renders look good in the previews, what are you waffling.

Why do you criticize him? You hope this ends in ntr and he thinks the graphics are bad, you both have stupid ideas, but you both have the right to express them.

 

[A Common Crab]

Both the Vanilla and Netorare paths will be showcased depending on the choices you make.

The Vanilla route will include anal, creampie, female domination, milf, handjob, vaginal sex, and masturbation,etc.

On the other hand, the Netorare route will feature multiple penetration, corruption, exhibitionism, interracial, etc.

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I'll provide updates every three weeks at least (or as soon as I have something ready). I'm working 100% on this project.

Of course the vanilla route includes femdom, lmao

 

[anon280]

v0.0.1 review

• simple quick premise of MC and FMC/Emilia
• writing flows fine although i find it hard to believe the MC is that shy
• lighting looks good most times
  • except for some of the environment shots
  • also their home's lighting is too heavy on the yellow
  • this being the standard would look great:
• female models have unique faces
• Emilia and Mary (Emilia's aunt) both attractive in their own role
• Emilia: cute face with tight shapely bod
• but the MC looks horrible
  • his hair strands reflect light too harshly
  • his face is a generic skin
  • his skin and eyes are matted
• i think the hiding of his face worked and should be consistent as compared to other characters his model quality is poor as well as having the doll expression
• the auto forward is weird when having to click through slides with no text

So MC has two women who fancy him and he is too awkward to make a move on either? a bit infuriating given they are already doing all the heavy lifting for him. I hope we can change that - the aunt gives a mature don't-give-af vibe that she can give some mean head .
The female characters are the strong point here as well as some good moments with lovely lighting. There wasn't much to observe with the sexual themes but the behavior of both women interests me to look forward.

 

[loikl]

Of course the vanilla route includes femdom, lmao

What did you expect? a strong and dominant MC who would turn the girl into his submissive lover with a mix between romance and domination that would make this MUCH more exciting? nah, this is a "vanilla" route of a generic ntr, that's not done here.

 

[LiQiyeDev]

v0.0.1 review

• simple quick premise of MC and FMC/Emilia
• writing flows fine although i find it hard to believe the MC is that shy
• lighting looks good most times
  • except for some of the environment shots View attachment 4104142 View attachment 4104143
  • also their home's lighting is too heavy on the yellow View attachment 4104145
  • this being the standard would look great: View attachment 4104144
• female models have unique faces
• Emilia and Mary (Emilia's aunt) both attractive in their own role
• Emilia: cute face with tight shapely bod View attachment 4104139 View attachment 4104140
• but the MC looks horrible
  • his hair strands reflect light too harshly
  • his face is a generic skin
  • his skin and eyes are matted View attachment 4104141
• i think the hiding of his face worked and should be consistent as compared to other characters his model quality is poor as well as having the doll expression
• the auto forward is weird when having to click through slides with no text

So MC has two women who fancy him and he is too awkward to make a move on either? a bit infuriating given they are already doing all the heavy lifting for him. I hope we can change that - the aunt gives a mature don't-give-af vibe that she can give some mean head .
The female characters are the strong point here as well as some good moments with lovely lighting. There wasn't much to observe with the sexual themes but the behavior of both women interests me to look forward.

Thanks for the review, bro. Yeah, I already had some of the things you mentioned in mind, and I'll be working towards them. Ty!

 

[Prosper]

"don't save her, she don't wanna be saved."

 

[Crow Armbrust]

THX

 

[xmilteach]

thx

 

[korochan48]

If would be good to see a reverse role making the black guy the MC and can actually beat up the pussy looking guy that going to NTR the black guy LI. Regarding NTR route the pussy looking guy will outsmart the black guy stealing his LI and making black guy no choice and get cuck. It would be fresh idea rather than this repeated scenario in every NTR.

 

[DeemLeem12]

YEAHHH BLONDE POWER!!! WHITE THAT BLONDE! BLACK THAT BLONDE!

 

[Yakis0ba]

Aw, she's adorable!

I have no other comment.

 

[Skep-tiker]

Afe to ignore this game

 

[i dond dog]

i dont wanna save her, good luck with your game.

 

[Soulpuppet]

Aw man. She's super cute. I think this will be more focused on the NTR route like most games that do this two paths bullshit. Oh well. Good luck dev.

 

[Lerd0]

He has a second game? Oh shit, and it's very recent too. Which one is getting priority dev time here.

..the first one....desert wanderer is paused now......

 

[StachuJons]

 

[Xythurr]

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..the first one....desert wanderer is paused now......

Of course it is!

 

[Lerd0]

Of course it is!

..i mean can't really blame him tho.....dude had 1 patron i think.....

 

[Xythurr]

..i mean can't really blame him tho.....dude had 1 patron i think.....

I've read there were other reasons but I don't really care because I'm not a backer of the project. I just think devs should make the game they REALLY want to rather than start multiple games to cater to different crowds.
Want to make an NTR game? Start with that IMO.