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There's a few problems I'm finding with the story of the alternate universe family.
First, mc plops down in the middle of a field with his bed and nobody makes a comment about that? One would think that jarring plot point would be a major factor during the family discussions about whether they trust the mc. Olivia gives him the third degree with the damn thing sitting in the background as if it were part of some Monty Python skit.
Second, mc gives Olivia his phone and she skims through the gallery as if it was an everyday appliance. However the world setting implies that no-one has a pot to pee in much less personal electronics. Hell, does this buccolic backwater even have electricity? I didn't pay too much attention, but it seems like the everyday lighting around the homestead is as gaslit as the Fox News Network in this world.
Finally, this is a farm. I had a good laugh with Vanessa carrying around a tiny little water can as if that would do something useful in a field full of what looks either like crabgrass or possibly Chives. So maybe they are starving (even after 25 years), because this crowd is experiencing something like the Chinese did under Mao's Cultural Revolution disaster. OTOH assuming they managed to last that long without turning into walking skeletons, they would certainly have managed to squirrel away enough from the local gestapo to have more than finger food sandwiches for their main meal.
First, mc plops down in the middle of a field with his bed and nobody makes a comment about that? One would think that jarring plot point would be a major factor during the family discussions about whether they trust the mc. Olivia gives him the third degree with the damn thing sitting in the background as if it were part of some Monty Python skit.
Second, mc gives Olivia his phone and she skims through the gallery as if it was an everyday appliance. However the world setting implies that no-one has a pot to pee in much less personal electronics. Hell, does this buccolic backwater even have electricity? I didn't pay too much attention, but it seems like the everyday lighting around the homestead is as gaslit as the Fox News Network in this world.
Finally, this is a farm. I had a good laugh with Vanessa carrying around a tiny little water can as if that would do something useful in a field full of what looks either like crabgrass or possibly Chives. So maybe they are starving (even after 25 years), because this crowd is experiencing something like the Chinese did under Mao's Cultural Revolution disaster. OTOH assuming they managed to last that long without turning into walking skeletons, they would certainly have managed to squirrel away enough from the local gestapo to have more than finger food sandwiches for their main meal.