Question first:
Is it possible to make it so Keita is left without any hearts around him?
Now time for criticism and suggestions:
The happy ending is really disappointing, aside from a nice CG, there is nothing, no kiss, no sex, not even an epilogue, and she probably keeps living in that corrupt village while Keita is probably still moving out, meaning it's still possible for him to get cucked before he comes back.
I also wish you could pursue Saki as a love interest as well.
I wish there was an ending where you get either Saki, Ryoka, or both of them where you take them away from the village, but make it only available from something similar to the memories, where you investigate the corrupt village, town, and city, and find evidence, after finding all the evidence, you get unique endings.
Also very disappointing you can spy on 1 of the girls bathing only once, you can't even spy on each once, just 1 of them.
Having Ryoka follow you should do more than just getting a few points, starting routes, and some changed dialogue when talking to someone, it should give you unique scenes.
Ryoka being in love with someone else just because they had sex, completely getting rid of the love she had for Keita for over a decade just feels weird.
When Ryoka has sex with Oyama in her house where the door is locked, you can't use your phone at all, Keita just says he dropped it somewhere, yet no matter where I looked, I couldn't find it, but he suddenly has it again in the morning, He was never even let back in, and why doesn't Keita have his own key for the duration that he lives there? Continuous "plot convenience" like this is just bad writing.
For someone that is supposed to be very independent and keeps saying no and can fight off anyone who does something to her, Ryoka seems to let Oyama do things to her in the Shrine anyways, and after that too, just by him being pushy, even though the deal was that there wouldn't be any sex, every cuck path seems to go against every character trait she has, which is just more bad writing.
As you can see, nothing in this game makes any sense, everything is just for plot convenience, throwing logic and common sense out of the window just to advance the plot, which is really annoying.
Once you're on a cuck route, Keita does nothing to save her, even when he reads her diary, it shouldn't just be for the player's knowledge, but for Keita as well, making reading it and viewing it unlock more interactions to be able to save her.
I still think Keita should've been able to enter the shrine during the 3 days Ryoka was in there, the side door is just magically open on the day she leaves, when it was locked all the other days, letting you explore the interior of the shrine, which doesn't have anything to interact with, so why make it possible to explore it in the first place?
I do hope the creator will manage to fit the after story (which is supposed to happen during the main game, it just adds a lot more scenes to every path (hopefully to the normal and happy ending path too)) into the main game, regardless of some difficulty regarding bugs, just as an update to this game, instead of making it a separate game.
As an extra thing, I wish Keita could crossdress to be able to enter the female bath and toilets, every characters that has a cuck route, characters in the drinking place in the village, and random strangers will hit on him/grope him though, and make it so he can have routes with them himself, starting out with just getting groped, and slowly escalating, starting out against the advances/groping and then reluctantly going along with it, and ending completely corrupted like Ryoka in the cuck routes, maybe even allowing him to work at the drinking place in the village, which is how to get on the route there, it could even add alternate scenes on the cuck routes by him joining in, and he could have multiple reasons to start crossdressing, for example: he could do it to earn money at the drinking place in the village, he could do it to be able to enter female only places, and he could even crossdress to try and save Ryoka, Saki, or both after reading Ryoka's diary/seeing what happens to Saki, he won't be stopped from going into male only places while crossdressing though, seeing how perverse the village, city, and town are, all of that adding a lot more scenes and endings to the game with every possibility and combination.
The place where he gets the clothes, makeup, wig, and (glued on) breastforms could either be by buying them, "borrowing" them from Saki, or "borrowing" them from Ryoka, you can only choose 1, you can't "borrow" from both of them either, the wig and breastforms can only be purched though, so they fall outside of that, they will find out if you "borrow" clothes from them after 3 times, after which they'll let you borrow them as much as you want, after a lengthy scene, but only if the character you borrow them from gets to dress you up every time you want to wear them, the only ones who recognize you while crossdressing are Ryoka and Saki though, and if you talk to them while crossdressing, it will open up more interactions, and new scenes with the person you talked to, differences from talking to them the first time depending on on how you got the clothes, and who you got them from, and whether they already found out you took their clothes or not, if you did that, and if at least one of them knows about you crossdressing, and walking around with Ryoka will have different events and reactions from her and people you talk to as well, the daily events will be different too, and different again if both know, and once again different based on how you goth the clothes or who you "borrowed" them from initially.
Male crossdressing content would fit right into a cuck focused game.
All of this would make the game a lot more interactive, and add more replay value, but I know the developer won't ever read this, so it won't ever get changed or added, but maybe someone here can rip the assets from the game and rewrite it, changing and adding all of this.
Thank you for reading this super long post
