jampfl

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Dec 20, 2021
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So after what feels like forever, the new scenes were pretty decent. Spring episode was actually pretty good, but NTRMAN really dropped the ball hard on the summer episode. Like it feels like he half-assed the scenes with Emi in the summer episode and the story is significantly shorter than any of the three previous seasons.

I've also noticed the girls fall too easily, I feel like there could definitely be more build up to the scenes rather than the girls automatically becoming corrupted after seeing the size of the dick. He needs to improve his writing, or at the very least hire better writers.
 
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