Yeah that felt a bit rushed and disjointed. Needs to be filled out with more text, and probably more stills as well. Hell, I think there was one day that just had him sleep in, go eat, and then he was back in bed after supposedly just watching some TV. It seemed several scenes only had a couple lines, and then right on to the next one.
And like you guys said, the neighbor's line about forgetting who she was was silly because there was so little information about who people are and what's going on.
That being said, the models/image quality seems good. And the premise, specifically of a mother going after the son, is kinda rare (I'm not really sure of others besides Milfy City). So I still think it could have some potential.