I played this game several times over and over. The author is on the right track! I'm really tempted at this point to support him. Love the story and content!!!
The author would need a daily mistress added to the game for the main MC to choose from that would stay in his room and they would decide what the MC eats and where he sleeps. As well as when he would shower. I also think that based on this story that the game needs to be more forceful. I think in my pinion that since joining the secret facility, that all males would have to wear collars and chastity cages or ball weights lol with revealing pants lol. It's just a thing to consider since males get dominated in this game.
If this game was real and I was the main MC. I would prefer the real thing from the start to put me into place before the training rather then prolonging the inevitable. I also think that the game is missing several kinks such as pony girls where the player can be transformed into shemale or fem boy to take that role. Not just have everything crammed into one teaching telling the player to be masochist, pet, servant, pain slut, and so on. Because that's the impression I've got of it.
I like how the author eases the player into things but I still think that the player upon joining the facility should be forced into slave collar, chastity or some humiliating device down there but not too small chastity or device of some kind with custom cloths they would have to wear to show them they place kind of thing.