VN Ren'Py Abandoned Secrets [Ep. 3 v4.1] [Elun Games]

[WaltS]

Not joking. There are mistakes in almost every sentence. Even if there are no grammatical mistakes, the sentences are usually very clumsy wich is a big problem for me atleast.
Getting a native english speaker to look over it would improve this game massively.

Sheesh.... You DO realize / realise tho' that there are quite a few different kinds of 'native English speakers' right?

In my life I have met them stemming from England, Ireland, Wales (good gosh ;-) ), Scotland, Australia, New Zealand, India, South Africa, Rhodesia/Botswana, Canada, the US (obviously) and quite a few other places.

And guess what - every single one of them was a 'native English speaker'...

Sooooo then - what's it gonna be?

Just being curious.

 

[Mormont]

The thing is I haven't actually seen any issues with the grammar or anything this guy is making out like it's all in gobbledygook as far as I'm concerned the dev has done a good job.

 

[Lord_Rize]

Listen I came (haha came) for the sex but stay for the plot thumbs up might actually check out the pateron page

 

[Kingvlad]

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Hello everyone!

It's Monday, it's the beginning of the week, almost the end of the summer, so first:
Feeling better now?
So, thank you very much for your participation. Votes are now closed and the results are:
Tadaa!

You have chosen the same outfit for all the girls I didn't expect that, but I got your message, less fabric, more legs I will keep that in mind
So, our beautiful ladies will be in a short skirt and high heels to climb the 1000 stairs to go to the Daddies temple. Strong women who always stay classy and sexy, that's definitively our girls!

This quest is getting better and better and I can't wait to show you this update. I'll make a Dev. Update post about it soon.

Thank you very much for your help! I will ask you again soon, about the settings on the quest. The quest is completely written already but I'd like you to decide which atmosphere you want to see in this special quest.

Have a great day and week, and thank you to be there!
Eric

 

[Kingvlad]

From our great Dev Eric X.

Good night all

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[Coriolan]

Another fan art I just made

 

[Kingvlad]

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Hello everyone!

First preview of next update with our girls arriving at the Daddies temple. As we say in French, "Voilà de bien jolies gambettes !" (I let you translate that ^^)
I tried to work more on the colors and add some little bloom effects. I'm learning every day

Enjoy this preview, more to come soon!

Thank you for your support! <3

Eric

 

[Coriolan]

And another of Julia

 

[Mormont]

Incredible job with both of those pictures Coriolan

 

[ogar nightelf]

Ok so help me understand something here. In the beginning of the game while on the plane if You don't screw the ethinic gal you sit next to, Eh no big deal.
Yet if you don't screw the black flight attendant its game over?
Please enlighten me with your logic.

 

[Mormont]

Ok so help me understand something here. In the beginning of the game while on the plane if You don't screw the ethinic gal you sit next to, Eh no big deal.
Yet if you don't screw the black flight attendant its game over?
Please enlighten me with your logic.

Well there is no logic in rejecting her just madness

 

[UncleVT]

Yet if you don't screw the black flight attendant its game over?

I follow both paths, screwing a different girl in each and didn't get any game over.

 

[Denis25]

He is talking - you decide to decline both girls - it's the Game Over

 

[Coriolan]

Incredible job with both of those pictures Coriolan

I wanted to thank you and everyone who leaves me messages of appreciation...it goes straight to my heart

 

[bearclaw01234]

Awesome game with a great storyline & plot, not to mention stunning women. Thing I don't get is the cards- the hints on where to find em seems way to vague- to find the twin card to zoe's, ye have to examine her card for the code.. yet there's a bunch of numbers on it & there's no set pattern as far as I can see (it'd help if the hints were more direct- for example: "to find the code look in the top-left corner of zoe's card" <== this would be a lot easier & less frustrating).

Another thing is- I don't get why people are saying this had bad English, since I've not noticed any problem with it. It just seems to me that they are only used to a single kind of English & anything different from that kind is wrong to them (which is just single-minded & close-minded thinking).

 

[Kingvlad]

Miss her? Don't worry, she'll be back soon

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[Coriolan]

Fan-art of Johana and Julia...I hope you'll like it.

 

[Kingvlad]

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Hello everyone! How is your week-end?

You saw this preview in a early stage, this is the final version, and yes, among all this feet, there is "a Daddy"!

But you know me, there won't be any bad surprise in Secrets ever. So, I hope you'll be curious about this one, but don't fear anything

This quest is going out of hand ha ha but in a good way. With 7 main characters and the girls, and a HUGE action story, this is something going bigger than I thought ^^ I'll talk about it soon in a Dev. Update.

Enjoy your Sunday!

Thank you for your support!

Eric

 

[Coriolan]

Fan-art of the twins !!

 

[Killer94]

Fan-art of the twins !!

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u should be able to do your own game by now guess u have enough skills to make some great renders to even get ppl confused between which one is real and which one is fan-made