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Originally, the alley scene was planned as a BJ ( Not that it can't be, I still intend to add this scene because I love alley whoredom) but the MC was well aware he couldn’t afford to screw things up. Still, he chose to go out and flirt with a random woman at the bar. I decided to lean into that choice: actions have consequences. That doesn’t mean other paths are closed. In future updates, there will be more options, including a possible threesome route if the player makes different choices (like sticking with Fabiana instead of going out partying). Daniella isn’t the only way to spice things up. This spicy one was just to test you hahaYeah, that's too rushed to even make sense making the MC sound like a clingy dumbass. There's a difference between him having a crush on Fabiana and/or her momma too, understandably why so (love Brazilian women and latinas in general myself, no judgement from me on this topic), BUT as much as a I like her playful teasing, bubbly personality and attractive body, Faby is NOT GF material, not yet at least... things might change eventually, if the devs wants them to.
Whenever I hear IRL how a woman likes to be a party girl and do "fun" stuff, especially when going to places like Dubai or Miami, it's an instant red flag that makes it very hard for me to consider her a serious long-term romantic option, for obvious reasons, I'd say... won't say no to some casual dating and fucking, if the spark is there tho. Same goes for a pixelated girl like Faby.
Now, we have two random dickheads popping up trying to ruin things for the MC. Exactly how this is gonna unfold remains to be seen in the next updates. Gonna stay skeptical for now and hope for the best.
Sorry if my criticism sounded too harsh. Sure, there's good and bad things in the story, but the most important one is that it's still good enough to slowly but surely get ppl engaged in praising or criticizing certain things or events unfolding there... that's always a good start for a new dev. How you want to continue from here on out is your decision to make.
Don't feel forced or bullied into having to write it in a way you don't want to, that wasn't the main point of the criticism in my previous reply. The thing I was trying to point out is that, as a romance/netori fan myself, after all the development in the first two updates, that scene left a sour taste in my mouth, more so since it came outta nowhere... can't say it wasn't a lil bit funny too tho, given the circumstances.
So, the MC, a complete stranger in a big city like Rio, not even knowing how to speak a word in Portuguese finding himself get cucked or mentally cucked
So, the question still stands... is Daniella a potential romantic or fuck buddy option for the MC, or is she just some sort of a trigger to get the player on the NTR path ?? Again, not trying to tell you how to run the show, just asking some ontopic questions and hoping to get honest answers to them, cuz I don't think I'm the only one who wants to make the MC clap her cheeks real good and fuck some respect into her disrespectful big ass.
Not entirely yet, but the hints are already there. Question is, how far is the dev willing to go with it, seeing in his reply how there's supposed to be romance in the story too.
Only thing I think they're 'forced', to a degree, to do as devs is to give us all a heads-up on certain make-or-break situations or aspects of the story, like the bar and alley scenes with Daniella. It's all I'm asking for so ppl can decide if the stay for more or not. Hope the dev agrees.
As for the game’s focus: it’s not a pure romance game and it’s not a full-on cuck fest. The core is choices and consequences, and I want to leave the player free to choose their own path — whether that means pursuing a safe romance, diving into risky situations, or avoiding trouble completely. Every decision will shape the MC’s story.
