VN - Ren'Py - Seducing the Devil [v0.12c] [DeafPerv]

Game is badly written, art is OK but not enough to make it worth playing.
Probably OK as a fap game if it tickles the fancies but other than that not really.
Story is incoherent, MC is a douche while being ignorant as can be.
And all the proportions are those of a sex doll.

When this AVN first came out, I was intrigued. It was a good concept and the story seemed to be planned and thought out, plus the renders and the H scenes are all pretty good. I liked that you could tweak the NTR experience a bit and most of the women were hot. The problem is the execution.

I also complain when dev do those game over choices or force you down a specific path. I always say "if you want the player to go down a specific path for the story then just do it. Don't give us the illusion of choice." Well, the dev certainly does that. Your MC wakes up getting a BJ from someone that turns out to be a friends girlfriend. From the very first scene you are in a forced relationship and you can't get out of it. The problem is, you can't take ALL of our choices away, otherwise just call it a Kinetic Novel and we will be on our way.

At the end of the day, if you like curvy women, you will like this. The H scenes are pretty well done and there is some depth to most of the characters. There are several plot holes and things that don't make a lot of sense, but as you slog your way through the story, these things matter less and less as you are just moving toward the next H scene.

Anyway, it's worth a download to make up your own mind. If you are into the story side of these things, be prepared to be dissappointed.

Good luck to the developer!

Balancing the ratings. plot may not be great (tbh it sometimes feels like all over the place) but still its good. but the characters and scenes are 10/10.
looking forward to future updates and heres to hoping the story gets better in the future.

Played as much as I could from version 0.12b

So, while I usually don't like NTR games, I started this one as the premise looked quite interesting, and it could be given a good thought and a polish on the writing skills.

But it fell quite short in nearly everything:

• Renders are okayish. Every character has these bimbo proportions (gigantic breasts, huge ass, fat lips, sharp face features). They are not bad, but there is nearly no variety in the female models. Save for one very unlucky character, which seemed to look a bit more normal, every female in the game looks pretty much the same as per curves it is.
• The dev wanted to create an effect of time travel like "Back to the future", so you start in a present scene, which determines one of the currently 4 available paths there are, just to jump back into the past (indeterminate how far), and then start jumping forward and backward with no notice, making it harder and harder to follow. It would be ok if what you do in the past could change the present/future, but the thing is that you make decisions that ultimately created the present, so in theory, it should not make any difference what you do there, as you had already decided.
• After a whole whirlwind of jumps between past and present, you finally reach a point where you (in theory) can finally catch up with everything... just to be asked again what path you want to take... that pretty much invalidates or makes entirely irrelevant any sort of cohesion on the path you initially had chosen.
• In the beginning, MC looks like a good guy, but he is forced to make decisions and do stuff that in theory makes him feel bad. Just to learn a bit later that he was happy with it, just to then jump back to feeling crappy, and so on. There is no cohesion in the MC character development. He is supposedly to take the reins of his destiny and become an alpha male, just to be bossed around by any female character in the game.
• MC is a dick. In any sense of the expression. He treats those who love him unconditionally as playthings, while he's being cheated by the one he hopes loves him, just to then cheat as well. He is also quite dumb, and even having very clear signs or clues about the devils and what the story is going to be, he just doesn't notice until something really bad has happened.

Ironically, while I usually don't like that genre, the NTR was very well implemented in the game, as a consequence of the MC's decisions and actions, and not as something randomly happening.

I ended up feeling dizzy with all the jumps the story takes. In theory, I chose to stay with Seline and Veronica, just to note that it seems I won't be able to stay with both of them because of some mutually exclusive preconditions, which makes no sense at all if the game has already asked me again what path I want to take.

Why ask me if it will take me wherever it wants anyway?

I'll take a rest of it for a while and will try again to see if I can make any sense out of the available choices in a somewhat consistent path. If I succeed, I will increase my rating accordingly.

the story is not half bad and the renders are excellent the only thing holding it back is development time otherwise it would be ok the updates could come a bit quicker but then again others could as well it makes me look forward to each update for the story and the renders

Another game that unfortunately fails due to the dev over-estimating their own writing skills.

Visually speaking it's pretty good. I wouldn't say it's incredible, but overall it's at least an 8/10, filled with all the expected hot women with some good lighting and backgrounds to match. Honestly, it felt much more enjoyable just skipping the dialogue and just going to the scenes.

The story itself is pretty dumb. The more you learn, the more you want to ignore it. It's just total and utter rubbish. I mean there are so many totally unnecessary additions that just provide no additional value to the experience. Why does his mom/step-mom have such a dark abuse story with the aunt? Why is there a random fucking birthing scene right after a sex scene? I mean you could literally just put them separately, there is zero artistic merit to putting them together! The story isn't good enough to justify all these limp build-ups and attempts at """lore""", which is essentially just dumped onto you in random intervals while the dev pretends it's very complex.

The dialogue doesn't make things any better. The story has every woman immediately want to have sex with you, which is hard to write well and requires a genuine understanding of how people would think and interact. Unfortunately, the dev just defaults to the expected porn dialogue. There's no real internal conflict, it's just varying versions of the same porn script you'd expect. It certainly doesn't help that the MC is just the cliche "omg, I can't control myself" porn character. I mean it's just ridiculous how one-dimensional and generic they are, and it's emblematic of the writing throughout.

With so many "demon gives me powers" stories, I was hoping this one would manage to stand out, but unfortunately it falls into the same traps as many others on this site: using the supernatural as a justification to be lazy. I'm being kind at giving it a 4/10, despite the fact I feel no personal desire to actually continue playing it.

I dont know how i didn't stumble)d it until today .I have not completed playing the game (currently in episode 8) but so far so good .The story seems interesting and maybe a bit confusing due to flashbacks time skip or vision.All the characters are hot and voluptuous There's no petitie characters though.And there's harem . Definately has a lot of potential for further development.And furthermore we have a lot of content .

The story is completely incomprehensible, the animations are rough, and the two plot-lines feel completely disconnected from one another. The development progress has also moved at a snail's pace (with that being said the dev has stuck with the project when others would have quit)

With all these complaints it doesn't seem logical why I'm rating the game so high.... But there's something about Veronica. I can't explain it but that character makes everything else worth it.

Very good game and renders, the story is very intriguing although I personally don't like paranormal stuff.
The missing star is due to the fact that the various time-jumps are not very understandable.
As a personal opinion, I wish the MC to have more control and some sort of power and not just a toy in the hands of Lileva and Cherry.

I was liking this game at first. Most of the girls are nothing special, except Cherry and veronica. Both of them are pretty hot.
But then the dev makes a great mistake of not letting the Player choose. Ella is established as a girlfriend, so thats fine and also there is option to not take her path. But selina is just forced on you, even though she is nothing special. There should be an option to reject her as well. i kept playing in case there is a way to choose only veronica, but that never came. Just have to endure selina for being with veronica
Anyways game is far along to make any changes, but just hope the dev should have thought about that.

I played v0.12a
I like the story so far it's easy to follow for the most part if you are familiar with jumping timelines and flashbacks. to keep this short ill list and rate a few things.
Plot: 5/5 Love it
MC(logic/decision making): 4/5 his logic is hard to follow in episodes 1-6
Women/Girls: 5/5
Renders: 4/5
Game Flow: 3/5 it runs smooth enough but its hard to tell if your still in a flashback at times.

This is a pretty good game and it would have gotten a higher score if it wasn't pretending to be something it's not. I feel like this game tries so hard to paint the MC as this dominant or potentially dominant deviant that is taking advantage of the women around him, and he is the complete opposite of that. If you want to make a straight up romance good guy game, that's fine with me and I have fun playing those games. I also enjoy playing all the different routes in games that have a good and evil path. I feel though that this dev either doesn't know how to write an actual dominant guy or doesn't want to. If they don't want to, that's fine. The problem is that this game spends so much time having characters and the MC acting like he is out of control. The MC spends so much time apologizing for everything, asking way too many times if everything is alright, and basically just following orders from all the women. There is even a point in the game where someone says that he needs to make a choice to be more dominant or not, but that choice never happens. The woman always make the first move, they either command him during sex or he is constantly asking permission to do anything. The MC is also completely stupid, like more stupid than is acceptable for the MC of a sex game to be.
Also, I wish the time skips were labeled or at least better written. Sometimes I had no idea when a scene was happening or it took a while to realize it. All in all, I just feel like this should either be a nice, romance game like it is, or the dev can actually put in a dominant or bad guy route. I mean, even the devils or demons aren't that bad. If you're going to create a game with literal devils, then at least be brave enough to go the distance with the dominance or bad routes. Like I know that shit like that is bordering on rape or whatever, but it's a game. This is supposed to be for living out or playing fantasies that we know are wrong in real life. It doesn't always have to measure up to our real world morals and rules.

The only reason I'm giving this above a 1-star is because Cherry is so friggin hot. Beyond that this game is terrible. The story doesn't make a lick of sense. I toughed it out all the way to Chapter 7 and it still doesn't make any sense.

The game forces scenes with girls you're not interested in on you...it's just terrible. It's too bad, too, because like I mentioned before, Cherry is absolutely gorgeous, but I'm just done; can't take anymore.

Advice to the author would be this: you do renders well, so do what you do best and get a writer onboard with you who can write a good story and you'll be on a much better course.

v 0.12a

Renders are pretty amazing, but thats all thats good about this VN.

Inconsistent story, that is more confusing than anything.

A really childish MC who is in his twenties but acts like a 9-year-old and is entirely too dependent on his mommy and daddy, which is quite frankly cringe and pathetic.
in fact half the text in this VN is probably MC screaming for his mommy or daddy.
He's a giant simp for his "girlfriend" who he hasnt even met and is cheating on him.

He also is too prone to emotional outbursts, he doesnt know how to use his brain even if his life depended on it.


Clearly the dev's sole talent lies in creating renders, my advice would be to hire others to help make a story that can actually be enjoyed.

Edit: I kept playing for a bit more to see if it got any better, but it seems no matter what choices you do, the MC will always end up being a pawn by the goddess, i cant be bothered to keep playing this anymore.

This game is a swirling mess of confusion, for hours and for most of the game. At times, I just wanted to give up, I was so lost and confused and disappointed in the MC...but my index finger kept clicking...
It's dark and at times, it's midnight, with lust and shame scoring a surreptitious win over morality.
For me, the Devils were an annoyance, manipulating events that spiraled out of your control...and then blaming you for the consequences.
Rachel, who is supposedly central to the storyline is hardly ever seen, except in sordid memories of the protagonist.
You never know where you are in the game...sometimes you're in the present, and then something happens and you're suddenly in the past, only to flip into the future...and back again. Disjointed, confusing storytelling for sure.
Whilst the MC was a complete pervert, the characters were attractive and had a depth to them...obviously Selena had a major advantage over everyone else, which for me, was unfair on every other 'love interest' including Ella.
When it came to the crossroads and suddenly the MC had to take some responsibility for his life [manipulated life]...four options present themselves. I took the Selena route as I had bonded with Selena by that time...but the subsequent effect on other characters and ultimately, Ella herself was heartbreaking...more so because my father killed himself at 54 with a pills and alcohol overdose.
It's a dark game, I haven't tried the other paths yet...but this is a crossroads that has no happy endings.

Story is good, but there are certain areas where i would have loved to have more control over the characters actions. Especially with regards to fetishes. After all, when you involve succubi, it seems odd that there are so few things.
Also feels a bit like the options with Jason are a bit off. Not necessarily in the NTR part, but that you cant actually be happy for him when he finally gets his dream girl, even if you have feelings for her.
I get why you want to fuck everything, as you have been manipulated, but considering everything that is also present, it feels off that you cannot be more of a good friend towards everyone, in spite of the characters thoughts on matters. It just feels off.

However, the game is well made. Lots of story, and the 4 choices, including the "you can try, but the succubitch will try to mess it up more" is a great opportunity to have. I look forward to seeing the final product.
But PLEASE!! Put a bit more fetishes into this.

the game is absolutely not like the others. The author tried to work out the characters. It turned out to be quite hot and appropriate. This is a treasure trove among many games. Animation: 5\5. Plot and characters: 5\5
My respects to the author. I will support the project and will monitor it.

This is my first review for a game on this site because I'm not good at giving reviews so that is saying something about this game. The models are gorgeously done I find no faults in them. The story is wonderfully done with many plot twists each character sucks you in and you want them all which makes it a hard choice between going to USA or staying in UK. The animations are done very well most game creators solely focus on story which is fine, but animations puts the game on another level.

The only thing missing is actor voice overs and sound track, but that can be over looked. It also sounds like DeafPerv listens to his supporters, because they may include Madison as a LI it's being voted upon.

This is a really great game so far. I'm enjoying all of the path choices and character models. This game has a lot of my favorite subjects all in one place. I'm really looking forward to playing each path. Keep up the good work.

Pros:
1. Some of the renders are quite nice. The devil daughter is reasonably attractive though the hourglass form is a little over-the-top.
2. Story is... unique? Lot of magic and time-skips.
3. Sex scenes in later chapters are a decent mix, with a progression from solo to more group scenarios.
4. If you cheat and unlock the gallery, some of the scenes are reasonably well done with different stages to the sex and several threesomes with different characters.

Cons:
1. A lot of the renders are sub-par. Several of the love interests are unattractive and you're unable to avoid sleeping with them.
2. Sex scenes start too early and without enough setup. The game basically opens with sex but you don't have any reason to care about the people.
3. A troubling sameness to many of the love interests. Some are difficult to tell apart and most have nearly identical body types. Tractor tire breasts, tiny waists, massive asses. If that's your thing, you'll find it in spades here, but if you're into more variety, look elsewhere.
4. Sex scenes suffer from little to no buildup. Most sex scenes are started due to plot-related magic where you're enjoying a cup of coffee with a character you just met and the next moment you're balls-deep in her ass. Don't get me wrong. Anal is awesome, but there's a progression I've come to expect from visual novels where there's a build up to these kinds of events that you don't see in your everyday pornography. Sadly, many of the sex scenes are missing this build up, and as such the scenes don't "work" very well for me.
5. Plot is a convoluted mess. Others have gone on at length about this. Time skips and difficult-to-follow motivations for how characters act.
6. The NTR. It's now skippable, but I'm still puzzled as to why it's there at all. It doesn't seem to add anything to the plot.
7. Calling them love interests doesn't feel right. I never felt any real connection to the women, mostly because bedding them required little effort and almost no setup. There are plenty of holes you can fill, but love interests? Not really, no.

Final words: The spelling and grammar is good for a visual novel but the story itself needs a significant rewrite, and the "magic" that allows you to sleep with people needs to be more complex than "Oh, I was going to make us a sandwich but thanks to this magic spell I'm instead going to have a threesome with you and this devil woman." For example, rather than have them instantly want sex it could make them really horny, and then we could have dialogue explaining their thought process.

That's my two cents. May revisit this in a year or two to see how things end up, but for now there are betterVNs out there.